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Maaneet FF~ THE PROMISE~* ~Part 18 pg 140~25/5/12 (Page 63)

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Plz update soon yaar!!!

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Guys as many of u have dbts me like to clear it... Geet and Nisha r twins Nisha being the eldest brought up Geet with great 

difficulty... Dadi comes to knw tat Geet is Nisha's twin while Nisha was in her last breathe.... who has taken promise from the trio Maan, Geet, Dadi... tat Maan have to remarry for the Sake of Misha their 3yrs old daughter...Geet was in London till she got the news while she was returning to Delhi for dadi's surprise b'day party...as Nisha tot she wud surprise them with Geet... later after Nisha passed away Dadi as per her promise tried convincing Maan for second marriage who totally refused.. She wanted Geet and Maan to be married...Maan loved his daughter to the core who was his world after Nisha... Dadi set time for Maan to think on marriage ans separated Misha from him for he mite agree for the marriage...Maan who was stubborn still then refused to marriage until her saw her...


the story is now being focused into past and present all the while dadi was thinking how Geet cme into their life....etc and now maan was thinking how life changed esplly for him after Geet...that he who wund't compare Nisha with anyone else compared her with Geet.... 


hope this clears all ur dbts...


Part 10:

 

Present:

 

Maan went near he bed he caressed her forehead sat next to her holding her hand firmly in his and said to her tat he won't loose her'

 

It was fate that I missed Nisha but I dare not let u go away from me tears welled up in eyes. He wanted to cry his heart out nothing is going to stop him today a tear drop, made its way to her hand'

A slight change occurred but Maan din't notice it.

 

Maan wanted to open his heart which was closed for a long time which was built with mixed emotions from the time Nisha died.

 

 He wanted to open it up to Geet but feared if he goes near he may lose control which may cause the loss of her which he din't even wish r rather din't want to dream off. Geet was everything Nisha was not in expressing love towards Misha, he saw Misha more attached towards her than he saw with Nisha.

 

 Tho Nisha's love for her was not less he found himself with Misha more than Nisha.

 

Nisha became more strict like a typical mother as taking care of Maan and Misha who where partners in crime was becoming very difficult as they turned to be very mischief.

 

She wanted Misha to be more disciplined as Maan only pampered her but she wanted her to face not only the riches but also opposite part of riches.

 

But, Geet tho pampered her a lot taught her discipline more easily than Nisha did. Geet was bubbly while Nisha was reserved.

 

 Maan understood their difference when Dadima told at the miseries those two went thro and how Nisha protected Geet from all the evils of the world riches etc. his love towards

Nisha grew more unfortunately she was no longer with him but left two most precocious gems with him to take care of.

 

Maan learned how much she loved geet loved after Maaneet wedding which was done for the welfare of Nisha .and a silent for maan.

 

Yes maan thot he started loving her the moment he saw her in arms the very day in his cabin those eyes which had full respect for him of their relation of jiju sit which later turned into a bond of togetherness.

 

Maan said to geet plz return to me geet if not how will u fulfill ur promise u made to Nisha. After all u always stand by ur promise u can't break it rite.

 

 Try to console ur mind to heal ur self he whispered in her ears. That's all the words came from his mouth. He cudn't say more coz he was in pain more to utter the words.

 

He waited for few more mints to see her reaction.

 

And it happened she actually heard his words her hands moved maan immediately called for doctors they rushed in maan had to step out.

 

Some where maan had the feeling that god has given him a chance again.

 

Nurses where rushing in &out of the icu after an hour the doc came out and gave him the best news that geet is out of danger for now and is   unconscious knowing Maan's restlessness and smiling at him. They told him he can see her when she is shifter to her ward'        

 

After waiting for 2 days.... 48 hours of going thro the hell pain in his heart he felt relief  touch him a left a breathe of relief. He called dadi and informed her.

 

Maan shot a small prayer to the Almighty which he hadn't done long since Nisha died'

 

Precap: nothing for now'.


plz do hit the like button and leave ur cents... for me... lovelies...



Edited by aarthirajendran - 31 March 2011 at 11:14am

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
arthi at lassst u updated . loved it . very emotional one

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
awesome update and heart touching so emotional one hope all is well Smile

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
awesum update
luved it
 

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
lovely update
cont soon

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ammu5

arthi at lassst u updated . loved it . very emotional one

thanks dear... yeah at last updated thanks to ma bro who helped me in typing..
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
hey aarthi.. nice...
 
gud to see geet recovering.. hope to see maan n geet s wedding soon...

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