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Maaneet FF~ THE PROMISE~* ~Part 18 pg 140~25/5/12 (Page 25)

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Plse update
sorry dear as tmrw is ma farwell im all busy buying saree... i'll try to update 
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 Part 5:

 

Geet slipped into her bed but cud not sleep she was thinking y she hid from him after seeing those eyes. Who was he? She made a mental note to ask Dadi who the new person was (guys Geet has not still seen Maan)

 

Maan also cudn't sleep that easily. He was thinking whether it was really Nish's soul or he was imagining some one who was more like her. Maan also made a mental note to ask Dadi who else was staying in their house. Both slipped into a sleep both haunted by each others eyes of course.

 

Next day was Misha's admission Dadi insisted on going to temple before she goes to school.

 

They (Dadi, Maan and Misha) went to the temple and took blessings. Maan's thots where full of Geet's eyes. He really wanted to ask dadi was anyone else staying other than them in the Guesthouse. But knowing Dadima won't talk to him he maintained silence.

 

They went to school finished the basic procedures'while signing the forms Maan's heart was paining like pit being pierced by 1000 knives and tat too becoz of his stubbornness he is going to miss his daughter.

 

He thot of ways again to convince Dadi but none came in use. He leaned on his car bonnet closed his eyes thinking of Misha while dadi was talking to one of the school teacher.

 

He heard the lovely sounds of Payals and sweet laughter which broke his chain of thots he followed the sweet sound of laughter which was soothing him from his sadness.

He came into the school grounds. All this while Dadi was watching him from the corners of her eyes she was very curious abt where he was going and wat was he up to. She bid goodbye to the teacher and quietly followed Maan.

 

Maan came to a halt when he saw her playing running and laughing blindfold with Misha and some other kids of the school. He desperately wanted to see her face whose one laughter was magical enof to him and made him follow the voice. but as the blind was folded across her face he cudn't get the full view 

 

Dadi knew that Maan was falling for Geet.

 

But according to her plan she wanted Maan to only get glimpse of her. She immediately called Geet and informed her that Maan is rite behind her and make sure he doesn't get to see her face. Geet took the folds out of her neck without turning pretending to be on call went in the opposite direction so Maan wouldn't see her.

 

Dadi smiled how despo Maan was being and was ab to walk behind her ' but dadi tapped him on the shoulder and asked him to come and take her home.

 

Dadi asked him whom was he searching for while they where driving back. Maan became angry on himself being lost on another girl he himself cudn't understand y those laughter was affecting him. His mind and hear t betrayed him of thinking of another girl in spite of Nisha.

 

They reached the Guest house'Dadima asked Maan to get ready to Delhi as she has booked his tickets for him to return once all the school formalities where over ( Maan din't book tickets as he wanted to stay with Misha for some more days.)

But dadi was stubborn like Maan that she booked his return ticket without informing him.

 

 

She told him firmly that Misha is happy here if she was in Delhi she'll loose all her happiness that to Maan being busy father has no time for her and only spoils her'.

 

Maan's heart was paining as he was hearing what Dadi told him. Dadi finally said to him that only 9 months are there for him to take his decision as Misha soon will be joining regular school. She'll be questing about her mother while she' see's other children's mom feeding their kids in school.

 

Now this hit Maan hard in his mind.

 

Dadi's 3 plans went on flawlessly she thot'

 

Precap:

 

Dadi's 4th plan. Geet's confrontation on Behalf of Maan's suffering


i hope u like this part guyz sorry for the short update...but i'll update the next one long... really sorry guys . and plz do leave comments and criticism is always welcomed if u dnt like anything...plz let me knw i'll change accordingly...and do suggest scenes 



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Loved it....... Awesome daadi brain works too fast....lol.... Update soon.

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