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Maaneet FF~ THE PROMISE~* ~Part 18 pg 140~25/5/12 (Page 17)

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Nice and Interesting story line ... Can you please add me to your PM list :)
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wow great ff.. do add me onto ur pm list n continue soon 
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good update... please continue soon!!
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Loved it...plz continue soon!!!

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awesome 3 parts yaar loved it send next part soonSmile

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Flashpart was interesting

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omg love the story track.plz update soon!

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Part 4:

Geet enquires in the reception where Nisha was' They tell her that they are doing the final procedures to take her home for her last rituals' and at present they are in ICU -2'.and gives her the direction'


Geet rushes into the ICU' Dadi was shocked can't believe her eyes' to see Geet at first' she hugged Nisha and started crying on her lifeless body' Dadi came out of her shock ' she understood y Nisha said tat Misha won't miss her mother if anything happens to her'


Dadi goes to Geet and puts a hand on her shoulder Geet turns and hugs Dadi and breaks down' seeing her Dadi who kept her emotions buried welled up'after it seemed like hours they where somewhat normal' The reality was killing them that Nisha was no more in their life but her two priceless possessions was still there' Geet as promised to take care of her family ' she first asked for Misha'Dadi told that Pinky was having her' and she has gone to buy her chocolates as she was crying more'Geet asked Pinky in dbt  thinking of Nisha and her neighbor'


Dadi confirmed it was the same girl and who was also like a sister to Nisha'.


Geet told that she'll go and find them and went' before that she went into the wash room to fresh up as her face was red like cherry due to the pain she was going thro' the pain wic she feared more'


Maan came in after 10mins after Geet left' Dadi decided to start working on the plan Nisha and she made' She din't tell him that Nisha has a sister'And to her surprise she is a twin girl.


Maan: Dadi all the works are completer here and at home also everything is ready for the funeral'


He asked her to pack everything and asked for Misha' she said that she is out with Pinky'.Dadi called Geet and informed her that Maan is here and she should leave to the Mansion, so that Maan doesn't see her'


Geet knew that Dadi has started working on their plan and went to the Mansion'Nisha's corpse was brought to the Mansion ' Dadi has not informed anyone abt it as asked by Nisha'Maan din't bother abt other people' he was in fire as his love will not be with him anymore'.she has left him forever' All rituals where done and Nisha's ceremination took place'


Days passed' Maan's only relief was Misha he started pouring his love on her basically pampering her' but he didn't care of spoiling her'.he just wanted to give her the love in the whole world'Geet usually Geet comes to Misha after Maan leaves to the office'


Maan felt strange that Misha didn't ask for her mother' he was worried whether something mite have affected her as she was there at the time of incident he took her to the doc and after some tests doc told him the she is perfectly alrite and enjoying her day


Maan became more arrogant and angry after Nisha's death'to hide himself from all his emotions . Only Dadi, Pinky and servants of KM know that Geet was thereDai became more worried as Maan started spoiling Misha so much' Dadi started working her plan'

She started insisting him for re marriage for the sake of Misha but her didn't want that he yelled at her that no one will take Nisha's place in his heart


Dadi wanting to put a stop to his arrogance one day yelled back at him that she cared for both of their happiness she wants them to be happy and that wud be her last wish be fore she closes her eyes forever Dadi fell ill and doctor informed Maan that she requires full rest and no stressDadi plainly said to the doctor that Maan is the sole reason for her stress this hurt Maan a lot.. Doc then insisted taking a little vacation.Dadi stopped talking to Maan from then on wic again added to his hurt heart Dadi sensed but more than this she wanted to see happiness once again in his life so she wanted to hurt him


Dadi one day called for Maan via Nakul and talked to him Nakul being the mediator that she likes t go to HP for her vacation for 2months and doesn't like to leave Misha under his care'.So she'll be taking her  Maan protested more but cudn't do anything coz it wud be difficult if he goes out of station for meetings to look after Misha.. He finally agreed


Dadi's plan was well worth working he asked whether she wud talk to him or not  she cut and rite cleared him that she wud if he agrees to start his life again newly with full of happiness for Misha she said him tat she'll talk with him when he himself will come and talk to her abt marriage and she wud give him 1 yr time for changing his present decision other wise he wud be staying away from Misha forever


With these Dadima left to HP'with Misha  Geet was already there in HP as asked by Dadi Days passed Maan became more angry, irritated, and annoyed coz Dadima is keeping him away from his only happiness in his life(guyz note he doesn't even consider once for marriage to bring back Misha but went into arrogant self for now..)


2 months passed Dadi's next move was to make Geet and Maan meet 


Maan on the other side was totally immersed in getting back Misha that he started coming out of Nisha's thots and was fully surrounded by getting back Misha'it has become like Misha is the only medicine for him that he was ready to do anything for brining her back 


Maan went to KM and was informed by Nakul tat Dadima  has called him and informed that her time for him to find a girl is running out and she has arranged for Misha's schooling in HP itself and he needs to be there in HP for signing her admission forms r if he is not willing she will do the honors of signing in the guardian column   as she had did for him Now this made the tubelite inside his head glow that really Dadi was serious of keeping Misha away from him he cudn't take that anymore as he felt ignored and Misha also have stopped talking to him (tat was becoz Geet was all time entertaining her that she forgot to talk to her papa)


Maan who tried every possible way of bringing Misha back failed a big time and has no other way to escape   he wished that he cud see Misha at least once so, he decided to go to HP as Dadi seemed to not to budge with his threatening knowing him thoroughly what he mite do and not do as she raised him from his childhood.


Meanwhile Dadima knowing Maan will be despo to see his daughter wud defo come to HP made other plans to make Maaneet meet Dadima received call from Pinky stating tat Maan has left for HP as she was tagging Maan's reaction as said by Dadi Dadi quickly called for Geet and put her plan into action and alerted her.


It really took Dadima pt make Geet feel netter of the sadness and the loneliness she faced after the death of Nisha 2 months where not enough for her   her oly relief was Misha she started to live on her and oly for her as Maan did  she cudn't imagine a day or rather a second without Misha in her life Misha also started calling her mama wic Nisha dint experience  .


Geet wud do anything for Misha their bond was very strong.. so she decided to play with Dadima and worked on executing their promise made to Nisha of making Maan and Misha's life more heavenly.


Maan reached HP.Dadima as usual did not talk to him, she simply ignored him she let Misha play with him on time basis (Poor Maan already staying away from his daughter and now has to be with her on time basis see Maan wat ur ignorance have cost u) and rest of the time Geet without Maan knowing was with Misha...


These where taking toll over Maan. He had a sleepless night he went to the balcony to feel less at heart as suggested by Nisha but unknowably it was actually said by Geet it was about 11.30p.m chillness was soothing him and he was trying to make a plan on how to convey Dadima suddenly his eyes caught with her's who was also standing in the balcony . Abt 100m from his rite hand side their eyes met   there heart filled up 


Maan for a min thot tat it was Nisha's soul as she was in white and has come to sooth him  she hid behind the door as he turned to recheck whtr it was dream or real'he pinched himself  OUCH!!! hurts  then how come he saw her  he went inside and slipped into his bed.]

guys plz do leave long comments...

and sorry for any mistakes ... dnt chk the post after posting as im feelign sleepy

Edited by aarthirajendran - 03 January 2011 at 12:33pm

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