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Maaneet FF~ THE PROMISE~* ~Part 18 pg 140~25/5/12 (Page 13)

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Maan's thots where broken by the crying sound of little Misha? He got up from the floor went near Misha and patted her softly to sleep? He kissed her forehead and slept

Beside her hugging her?

 

Next morning he got a call from the hospital. He got himself and Misha ready and fed Misha her breakfast and rushed to the hospital?

 

Dr. called for him he gave Misha to Dadima and went to meet the Dr...

 

He asked the doc first thing HOW WAS GEET?

 

 The doc said the same thing that there was no improvement in her health and that she has been asking for her daughter and him?

 

Maan asked the doc if there is any chance of bringing her back. The doctor positively said that if she comes out the trance that she is not breaking the promise then there a lot of vast chance to get her back to full health?

 

Maan was discussing with Dr. on further what to do?Dadima who was outside was controlling herself from breaking down so that Man doesn't loose hope?

 

Dadima was lost in thots?How Geet came in their lives after Nisha passed away?how she changed their lives totally,,, how she brought her family more into her control by showing love which that The Maan Singh Khurana was full of joru ka ghulam?though she entered their lives in a difficult situation but turning it totally upside down?the care she took was more than Nisha did?They can't deny it that she was defo brought up by Nisha she completely changed the life of Misha and Maan?who went uncontrollable arrogant angry man?. Into his sweeter self.

 

Not to mention that she herself played a cupid among them to bring them close?

 

Flashback:

 

British airways landed in Delhi airport she hurriedly finished her immigration?car was waiting for her?she threw the bag at the back and hurriedly sat in and straightaway asked him to take her to Nisha. The driver drove to hospital?

 

Geet was silently in tears thinking of the days they both spent together?how people used to get confused?

 

Tears where rolling down continuously?

 

Two days back:

 

She was getting ready to return to India to spend time with her sister who looked after her after their parents passed away?she was her role model, she was like a mother to her, a friend, a guide, a philosopher to her? she made her sister a promise that she'll go abroad for her higher studies?.and she herself wud study in India as going abroad for higher education was her childhood dream? they both topped in their exam.. Geet standing the first and Nisha the second?coz Nisha always wanted Geet to top?Geet with the help of scholarship went to London and Nisha with her scholarship joined School Of Architecture and Planning in Delhi?both loved architecture so that they can study more about their motherland and other countries techniques of construction.

 

That was the first time Geet and Nisha stayed away from each other?but they had to do it? coz one's happiness meant each others happiness in both of their lives?

 

There childhood was so dark that they wanted happiness more for each other that they mite do anything to bring happiness in each others face?

 

After about six months Nisha called Geet and said that she was in love and Maan proposed her and she accepted?

 

Geet was very happy for Nisha ? Then and their Nisha informed Geet what was going in her life and vice versa?

 

One day Geet got a phone call from Nisha informing her that her marriage was over with Maan she would say every thing afterwards and that she missed her in the important occasion of her life? Geet felt that she was panting furiously as though running?

 

Geet on the same day received a phone call from her uncle who was faking help that Nisha eloped with some one while he arranged her marriage with his son?

 

Geet understood what must have happened and cut the call right away?

 

Geet was strong girl than Nisha that she learnt how much Nisha went thro' get themselves to college and how important studies was?seeing Nisha struggle for them she had a developed the nature that she wont let anything happen to her in any way? and she wud fulfill her promises and her dreams?

 

Geet was worried that how would Nisha manage a family? but happier that she got her love and the sweetest family in the world?for the first time?

 

(Geet's thots ends)

 

They reached the hospital? she got down all scared? she felt like she want to run away from there as she can't digest the one thing she feared the most has happened?but she had to be strong, for the promise she made to her di? she got the phone call from her di while she was making her final packing? that they are going to celebrate Maan's Dadi's birthday and they are decorating and she talked with little Misha?when she was talking with Nisha she heard a noise that some one was in huge pain? the phone line got cut

 

Geet started to panic she again and again tried but the phone was not reachable?Geet took a taxi to the airport boarded the flight all the while trying to Nisha but there was no response?Mobile phone's where asked to switch off as the flight was about to take off? she unwillingly turned it off?

 

She landed in Dubai to change flight for Delhi? She switched on her phone and it rand immediately? It was Nisha's no.  ? she  answered straightaway?the news she heard from the other side was a hell news for her she staggered her eyes went all foggy due to tears?she heard her talk for the last time?she listened to everything her dear one said? she made her take her kasam .. she knew where to hit Geet one is her kasam and the other is Misha?

 

Maan came out of the Dr's cabin to finish of the rest of the paper works so that they can take Nisha's body for its final; rituals?Geet rushed in? Geet and Maan missed each other by hairline distance? as Maan took a left turn for the room that proceeded for paperwork?

 

Precap:

 
 
 2 months of leap?Dadima's plan of Maaneet meeting?Maan shocked?Geet losing?Might be Maan also loosing?
 
guys thank u very much for waiting .. loved all ur comments... sorry cudn't reply as i was busy with some personla work... though i read it...
plz do comment for this also... ur comments are always a boost for me...


Edited by aarthirajendran - 27 December 2010 at 7:36am

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Wow!!
Such a flashback update
Thanks yaar

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continue eagerly waiting wt might have happened
awesome update

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Originally posted by bluedreamz953

Wow!!
Such a flashback update
Thanks yaar
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 yeah this will deal with more flash backs for few more parts...
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Originally posted by rsroopali

continue eagerly waiting wt might have happened
awesome update
thanks Smile
yeah sure dear... just will take a day as im busy with ma other FF.... its been a while i have updated that... so before i recevie tomatoes and eggs i better update it...

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loved this concept totally

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loved this concept totally
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