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Loved it.
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this part is dedicated to Ammu5 aka ammu di for boosting me to write...


Part 17:

 

Next day Geet woke up a little late to the sweet smelling breakfast her lovely hubby had made for her'

 

Maan woke up at 5.00 turning to his left he saw his life peacefully sleeping tho last evenings incidents was fresh in his mind he kept reassuring himself by feeling her.. He decided on making her breakfast today and serving it in her bed. So he went for his routine work out session'he freshened himself after his work out and headed to the kitchen.

 

He made her breakfast for abt hr and neatly placed it on the tray and took it to her room only to see her awake. Geet wished him and Maan did the same and asked her to fresh up and said they'll have breakfast together in room itself..She nodded and went to fresh up..Meanwhile Maan went to their private garden attached along with their room & balcony area arranged the table in fresh morning air It was like a place arranged for perfect morning date.

 

Geet came out of the washroom only to be surprised by the site in front of her. She was mesmerized by the pains he had taken for arranging things for her.

 

Her eyes searched for h8im she saw him standing against the balcony rim and talking to someone on phone. She smiled at herself at how desperately she looked for him. She shook her head and went to get ready'After fifteen mins they both came nar the tale and Maan lovingly helped her to the chair Maan served her the toast and they started having their breakfast silently stealing glanced over each other'It was like a long breakfast for them

 

While they were about to finish their breakfast they thot of stealing a last glance without being caught but when they looked up to steal glance their eyes met they were last in their own world' Eyes full of love and passion for each other. Their trance was broken by the ringing of Maan's phone reminding of the meeting' After his talk he turned to call Nakul to clean the place when he noticed morsel's of food sticking on Geet's lips. He raised his hand automatically to wipe it away.

 

Geet started to shiver when his fingers approached her lips side. Maan found out that she is affected by his closeness and wanted to make sure she might not regret before taking their relation to next level' while taking his hand close to her lips his desire wic he had in check took over him her lips were so inciting for him.. He slowly and steadily not wanting to frighten her he bent down without her realizing brushed her lips with his

Rubbing of the morsels down and looked into her eyes which were closed enjoying the kiss' Geet felt tickling sensation in her stomach and shiver run down her spine when his lips touched her 'she din't fear anymore yes she loved him and she knew that he is hers and that is destiny and showing love physically was no more a barrier between them. She enjoyed his closeness yet feared to confess' but guess he knew that before she realized it..And his effect on her was well seen in her face'

 

After the slight brushing he turned to leave but guess she was so tempting that he again turned back and without warning took her lips into his leaving her in utter shock, her eyes wide open.

 

PS: next part will be up in new thread if this thread completes soon...so i request long long comments...

 

 



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Thx  updating it after a long time.nice update

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Awesome update
he kissed her
loved it
waiting for more 

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