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Maaneet FF~ THE PROMISE~* ~Part 18 pg 140~25/5/12

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:35am | IP Logged

Hai guys its me again thot of updating new FF which I think u will love


Sorry frnds as for Friends Forever im just making it long for making u guys wait this long and Maaneet are going to meet first time so just want ot have a bang so tat I can also make up for the lateness



My New FF: 


THE PROMISE




Character sketch:



Maan Singh Khurana: 


Age 27 business tycoon as shown in the show  married and father of 3 yrs old Misha loves his wife very much 


Nisha Singh Khurana: 


Age 23 role model forher sisterand ...she wud do anything for sister she is like mother to her...Her sissee's mother in her married to Maan (Umm love marriage so against family...her sisis absent of wat happened and Maan doesn't knw tat she has a sister as she was in London completing her studies during their love saga




Misha Singh Khurana: 3yrs oldMaan and Nisha's daughter loved by her mother and father to the core well more by dad



Savithri Devi: Maan's grandmother lovely like our Dadi in the show



index:






part 4:





Part 9:


promo


part 17

part 18

Thread -2



Part 1:



She was rushed into the hospital 




She was bleeding badly




Dr: Plz arrange the OT she is sinking inform blood band coz our's may run out we may need more due to heavy blood loss




Plz Mr. Khurana wait here ur not allowed inside Plz be patient and calm down



Dadima was consoling him but Maan broke down



Dadima: Maan plz calm yourself u r scaring Poor Misha




Maan looked up to see his 3 yr old daughter who was crying as if she knew her blood one is in danger




Maan cannot see her cry  He cudn't keep up his promise which he made himself for the second time that he will always keep her happy






Maan to Dadima: Dadima, I won't break down, but she is breaking her promise she made to us esplly to Misha  that she won't leave them at any cost




Dr came out of the OT: 


Mr. Khurana plz come into my cabin doc called for him while stepping out of the theatre




Maan followed




Maan's first question was "HOW IS SHE?"



Dr.: Mr. Khurana plz calm down yourself I curse God for making u face the same situation u had done earlier I know what went thro and the history is repeating except she is not carrying  She is still in critical stage I can only tell you after 48hrs will she be able to make it or not




Maan's world was shattering under his feet  Only Doc's words of history repeating were ringing in his ears He got up and went out  He asked Dadi to stay with her and he took Misha from her assuring he'll take care of her who slept in her arms




He was in the Khurana's outhouse making Misha more comfortable



He silently promised to Misha tat he won't let anything happen to her love and kissed her forehead? he lied next to her not even changing his dress where full of her blood



Doc's words were still ringing in his ears his head was spinning he closed his eyes her smiling face, her making baby face and her passionate eyes where making his chain of thots pleasant he was thinking she is totally different form her she is a kid herself than her who was more matured suddenly her promise of being with them at any cost with them came to his thot  he woke from the bed and his eyes fell on the portrait opposite his bed with garland




Thats all for now hope u like it... and guess who's picture is on the opposite side with garland...plz do comment so that i may think of continuing it...



Edited by --aarthi-- - 05 May 2013 at 8:01am

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awesome yaar
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Great update.....

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:50am | IP Logged
awesome FF..........love intro.......... look like geet is nisha sister Wink......do add me to PM list Smile

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it's a little confusing but its good do continue

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Great start...please add me to your PM list.

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