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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
A very very romantic piece! Very well written.
Choice of words and expressions awesome.
Can you feel your breath stopping, pulse racing and imagination soaring vividly?
Takes you to another world with all this word play.
Best piece I have read on this forum in a long long time.
Congratulations . You have all the makings of an effective communicator, Anamika.

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
omgg i luved it..thnx anamika fr a amazng scene<333

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 12:08am | IP Logged

If at all, Cvs are lurking around here, I'd tried a suggestion to take inspiration from more competent sources- on SOTD dated 29-Nov.-2010 – page 2.

 

Green glass bangles… Mogra in the luxuriant hairs…and then longing in His eyes….well, well, folks Cvs are preparing for the bolt….and when they can not do full justice by themselves, it's certainly better that they look up at a 'deeper' source for some inspiration ….i mean 'green glass bangle and its exquisite narration from the glorious past!....but stain on the lovely wrist was mildly amiss…and might as well, the natural reticence of this shy man, over and above his longings, would be pleasantly help overcome by more daring and open Heroine…Amen!

 

And yes, i voted for the duo in unity.



Edited by smrth - 29 November 2010 at 10:41am

 

I repeat urge them to look here before finalizing their script on the scene.

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 12:30am | IP Logged

And as the writing bestirs one into many possibilities let me suggest accompanying background music- while reading this one… "Silk Road" From Ang Lee's 'Crouching tigers and…'

 



Edited by smrth - 22 December 2010 at 12:31am

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 2:29am | IP Logged
whoever this Akamika is, i think she is very talanted. the story is a superb one*clap*
loved reading it.

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Awesome piece. Fab writing. Totally enjoyed it. Very well written anamika.

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 2:49am | IP Logged
written by sushant before shibu took away his christmas bonus and manjusha hit him on the head with a bailanLOLLOL

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i like the part where she thinks he looks boyish andshe thinks he'sgoing to faint

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