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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 2:23am | IP Logged
@smrth: I think I disagree with you. I feel Hope's style is different from C although I won't be able to explain why I feel so.

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 2:23am | IP Logged
niki baby

thank you

you did an awesome job as a host

jus awesome I had so much fun and I am sorry I spammed your thread horribly

but carpie had fun too so you can blame her as well for the spamming

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 2:24am | IP Logged
TB:

honeyBig smile you were probably the first one to guess right and if memory serves me well the ONLY one to propose me as the only option to your guess

thank youBig smile

Oh forgot to mention

thanks for the graphicsBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile
precious


Edited by --Hope-- - 23 December 2010 at 2:45am

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Hope--

niki baby

thank you

you did an awesome job as a host

jus awesome I had so much fun and I am sorry I spammed your thread horribly

but carpie had fun too so you can blame her as well for the spamming


Oh no Hope, this is your thread, I was just doing a proxy job.LOL

And I had fun too. I liked it when people were sending me PM's asking me when I would reveal the name. I felt like an agent in those detective movies.Cool

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 2:34am | IP Logged

Hope Di akka Anamika ............ cleverly  tried to misguide all members in guessing the writer .      

Hope Di .......... please, please  keep giving us such treats  and I am sure we will all enjoy watching the 24th episode.

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smrth

Hey Niki di bachhi, yet not out with your secret? How mea! Angry ... *coaxing*  'Hello Doctor Nikita, Have I not been always cordial to you? PM me please. Thank you!'LOLLOL

 

O.K since you r not concurring my guess, I'll try another guess'this time around, trying instinctive analysis of language 'in absence of any proper language recognizing tools at hand, being a novice from Engg. fields.

 From the outset discounting Kools- her style is like a boisterous Alaknanda of lower Himalyas- too impatient for frightening deep current, present here..

 

1. An effortless flow of language with grace and Grammar; Names coming to mind- Commentator, Skeptical, Tarantulla p, Stillhopeful, Vidyasu, (also Tanya and Bollywoodcrazed these two, though not likely on this piece)'. but then Taran and vidyasu are not known posting 'many good posts' here and stillhopefull has removed herself'so'

2.  Skeptical and Commentator:- The commanding grip- almost tyrannical in its power to sway the reader along with its will'both'The comprehensive construction of the scene never faltering on logic'both'Details and its purposeful utilization'both'The exquisitely embedded poises and poses'both'Hmmm'.OK' Skeptical  is not known to have vehemently protested against Divorce (as per clue).

3. That leads us again to Commentator'but then why '.

 

How now, to trade carelessly, in presence of the eminent ones?!Smile



Samarth

this is a far better review than any author would hope to receive for their debut work, Big smile even if it were attributed to another author instinctively than myself.

your deductive reasoning was interesting to watch even though the reasoning was meant to ground your foregone conclusionLOL

you belong on shows like "who wants to be a millionaire"Big smile

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 2:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smrth

@ Stillhopefull akaHope,

 

This is truly masterful. Thanks a lot for treating us with such a wonderful writing.ClapClapClap ...I feel, you have purposefully adopted Commentator style- what is exactly that- I don't know...But ', 'he NEEDED her to see'',' 'inhibitions were like a tattoo'','...the fulsome tresses tickling his nose'', ''would his touch repel rather then attract.'' 'making their mark one stroke t a time. 'escaped wisps of moonlight'''ALL these are trademark C. Though earlier too, I'd sensed similarities.

But author, One or two initial misleads are fine'but a continuous trail of red herrings!?Confused...especially when the audience is mostly untrained readers like i?!Ouch... But all in all a wonderful experience and enjoyed the game thoroughly too.Big smileThumbs Up Congratulation to your accomplice- grand medico C'Thumbs Up

Won't you favour us more frequently with such treats?Smile... Gratitude in advance.LOL



Samarth:

again thanks for your kind words

it is nice to know that C and I have similar styles where romantic adaptations are concerned

I joined when C became less active so the only pieces I got to read was the one about the limca ladies and the one about varsha's neight

all of ht eabove were not an intentional red herring or an attempt to adopt the style of another, it was the way I wanted Manav to feel and Archu to respond.

the red herrings that I intentionally put in were around two authors only:

Kools - the caps (as Usha rightly deduced)
C - the rough mechanic hands from a comment she made in an earlier post

I can't think of any other intentional red herrings for now

I decided to write this piece on a whim and once I started I finished writing it in a fluid shot. the red herring idea only came to me after contacting Niki and organizing this game and so the quick fix amendmentsLOL

I wish C had been an accomplice or even a peer review on this for me but I have to honestly say that has not been the case.  I have not seen C on the forum for months but I would like to receive a peer review if she is a silent reader on the forum now.

C?

anyway thanks againBig smile

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 2:47am | IP Logged
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niki baby

thank you

you did an awesome job as a host

jus awesome I had so much fun and I am sorry I spammed your thread horribly

but carpie had fun too so you can blame her as well for the spamming


Oh no Hope, this is your thread, I was just doing a proxy job.LOL

And I had fun too. I liked it when people were sending me PM's asking me when I would reveal the name. I felt like an agent in those detective movies.Cool



you were a wonderful sport honey

thanks Hug

I was grinning everytime I saw people guessing

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