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muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 10:01pm | IP Logged

-truly magical-
part 82

she wanted to tell him desperately but didn't know how explain all this. She was really scared, it was never in her to hide things. never to parents, her close friends and now maan. She was always true to them. But things have changed so drastically for her, she was hiding from papaji that she was married, raj, prem & armaan didn't know about her wedding with maan, above all maan didn't know about Arjun. She hated herself. This was not GEET HANDA!!! this is definitely not her. She came back home & sat in the couch throwing her belongings on the center table. There was a warmth she felt in the house was beautiful, all her thoughts just disappeared. She didn't feel guilty any more about hiding things from papaji or friends. She knew it was for this togetherness, this house, for this warmth. Coming to home to be with maan in his arms was the best thing in this world. But arjun!!!!! that name still haunted her. How can she not tell maan about him. She fell a sleep there without changing.

Arjun woke up after few hours. Anni smiled - how are you feeling now
arjun restlessly -where is geet?
She sadly replied - she is gone home
arjun was angry - how could she leave me like this & go?
Anni was mute. he held her by arms really hard - kyun woh mujhe nahi samjh thi
anni eyes began to water. She was not able see him in this pain she hugged him & comforted him. He buried his head in her thorax & cried. She arched back with his touch. He pressed himself still closer filling her with his pain. She eased him to lay on the bed. He didn't let her go. She sat the whole night cuddled up next him wondering what was she doing lying next to him, when he loves geet. But all that mattered to her was him, as of now..solace him.

Maan walked in & saw the light were all off. He looked for her in the bedroom. Them immediately walked to the living room, she was cuddled up facing away from him. he lifted her & walked out. She turned into his arms & held his neck with a smile on her face. Sleepily she whispred - kya kar rahe ho.. he naughtily smiled. Umm bolo na. She heard the door click & then the lifts sound she narrowed her eyebrows & held him tighter. She chuckled with the cold breeze & snow falling on her. She opened her eyes at once & looked at him & the sky above that was filling the space with soft cottons she spread her arms, he turned her around in his arms, she splashed the slight flakes in her hand on him. He slowly rested her foot on the ground. She ran to turn around & feel the snow with her arms drawn-out.  He made the snow balls to throw at her. She looked at him in shock when a sudden splash of white frozen cotton all over her face. She made a playfully vengeance face & ran behind him picking up the soft crystals forming them into spheres & throwing at him. He smiled & picked more & randomly began to splash at her. The snowfall grew heavier & heavier. Geet tried to look for him, he hid, dodged & came behind her, she kept moving forward with a snow sphere in one hand & the other hand pulling her curls behind looking for him.

He came behind her and wrap his arms around her, she leaned back into his embrace. they stood there gazing out over the beautiful scene wrapped in each other's love. he slowly begin to kiss her neck. his hands naturally gravitate up to her waist and he begin to rub down softly and teasing her senses. she moans softly and accepted his touch feeling both loved and secured. She turned into his embrace facing him & placing her hand around his neck. He leaned forward to kiss her.
She quickly slipped the snow globe into his shirt & ran away , maan reacted in shiver, with the sudden touch of the chilled flakes instantly melting into his skin & sliding down to his waist to his back. He became wild & chased her, she ran for her life knowing how angry he could get. He caught her in a minute from her waist, she struggled  ..he simply swinged her around his back, tucking one hand under her knees & the other behind her neck. He began to walking towards the huge heap of snow with a determined stride, she tried to peep at his face. She quivered at the fierceness of his expression. Before she knew anything he slammed her on the heap & almost buried her into the cold white blanket. Pinning her against the soft surface that was slowly buckling and melting under their weight. She looked really cheesed. He throws his head backward & laughed.
Geet - ok if we fall sick it is your fault.
maans face accented with the moonlight and there are a few snowflakes on his eyelashes.
The look on his face is one of pure love as he reached out to her to stroke her cheek. His dark eyes reflected the snow, as it grew heavier and heavier, the snow falling more violently, but gracefully and beautifully all the same.
Maan  lifts her & carries her to the room. He helps her undress placing soft kisses making her cold and numb skin burning now with his touch. She drops dazed on the bed with his touch. He slips her out of her heavy jacket, shoes & socks. He removes the scarf & nibbles into the exposed neck, letting her cap snap out & let lose her hair around them. His sits on top of her removing his jacket & sweater snapping his shirt of in a second and back to her lips kissing, their tongue now dancing in a rhythm of their own.
She moaned with his legs extending & hands moving to her wrist. He pulls out to catch a breath & suddenly his expressions changed, his eyes filled in fury. She opened her eyes wondering why did he pulled out and his body stiffened, he sat on her holding her wrist in his hand, she saw his eyes turning red in anger. He stopped painting, a minute ago he was almost reaching his climax & now he was furious & least interested in making out rather something else was bothering him.  He examined her hand & shouted - yeh kaise huwa? kisi ne kiya?
She pulled her hand away. Her eyes were not able to face his. He cupped her face & lifting her to face him. I will kill that person. He spat. How dare anyone hurt you? He kissed her hand madly, just tell me who it is? He picks his phone to call the police & his lawyer instantaneously.
Geet - yeh kya kar rahen ho? snatching the phone away from him
maan pulling away & resting his foot on the ground, pushing his hair backward - I will not spare your college & that person. They will have to face Maan Singh Khurana.
Geet gets really scared. She takes a deep long breath & hugs him from behind - mujhe kuch nahi huwa
he turns at once  holding & pointing her wrist  - yeh kya hain?
Geet fumbles - woh tho
maan - woh tho kya geet? His eyes could kill
she slid her hand around his waist & rested her head on his chest, she could hear his heart beating furiously in anger now. Woh tho anni held my hand
maan - why will she hurt you?
Geet - woh dari huwai thi tho she held me
his heart was beginning to slow down. She softly slid her hand in his back stroking him & calming him
maan still was little restless. - tum sach bol rahi ho na? Kissing her head
she reluctantly nodded
maan - u just stop meeting anni, I don't like any one doing this to you. Mujhe nafrat hain us insaan se jo tumhe hurt karta hain. Tum usse se nahi millogi samjhi
geet was quiet. Anni being her friend, he is reacting like this, how will he react if he knows about arjun. She couldn't even imagine.
arjun trying to be nice!!
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments. Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.

Edited by muskanp - 29 December 2010 at 12:05am

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lilindiangurl13 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
YAY!!!! im first to comment again LOL
what an update muskan...
i loved it... their little snow romance was sooo cute and HOTT....
I wish geet does tell maan about arjun cuz i want arjun to get beaten by maanTongue 

Edited by lilindiangurl13 - 27 December 2010 at 10:25pm

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arniindia5 Senior Member

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TongueSmile     PLEASE  UPDATE  SOON 

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princess163 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 10:02pm | IP Logged

Yayyy! SmileSmile

Today for the first time, I am second to comment(considering that the second one says waiting!)
anyways, why did Geet lie again!AngryAngryAngry
I don't like this lie business;it will create a lot of problems later and if MSK does not know about that amd man Arjun, he will create more problems for Geet!CryCryCry
Nevertheless, the update was simply awesome di!ClapClapClap
Waiting for the next already.....

Edited by princess163 - 27 December 2010 at 10:12pm

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ytanuja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
Thank u for the updateClap It was so romantic and the end scene was so emotional.Clap

Edited by ytanuja - 27 December 2010 at 10:15pm

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wildcat447 Groupbie

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waiting for the update.........

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..shreyaa.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Awesome Update muski
Loved it
amazing as usual
Awhh loved the maaneet snow fight hehe
soo cute
lol ..loved how geet put snow inside his shirt
lol loved the romance too
Ohh noo
I thought geet would say abt arjun to maan..
uff kya hogaya..nahiiCry
Lol..Hope she says soon
Arjun being nice..i doubt
update soon
thank u
love ya

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 27 December 2010 at 10:16pm

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maneetian80 Newbie

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Loved it..thanks for update

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