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On Their Way
-truly magical-
part 79

Next day geet was cuddled up in his arms. She looked at him with her droopy eyes & kept admiring him. She just wanted to be with him, in his arms it all seemed like a dream. Maan pulled the spread closer tucking around them. She quickly closed her eyes. Then slowly opened one eyelid after the other & smiled seeing him sleep comfortably holding her close in his arms. She couldn't stop admiring him then smiled at her own-self drooling over him & made her way out to get his juice. He pulled her back in the spread. Aapko gym nahi jana. mmh he shook his head burring in her neck & taking in her scent.
She smiled & slept little longer with him. Maans hand slipped into her top & caressed her bare waist, she chuckled in her sleep. He pulled her closer & turned her to face him. She put her around his neck &  waist. He moved on top of her placing kisses on her neck & collar bone. She smiled & blushed in her sleep. He passionately placed his lips on hers, she soporifically parted hers. His hands moved into her hair pulling them giving a clear view of her sleepy eyes. She held him closer pressing her hand on his back. Their tongue lazily mingled, slowly exploring & arousing them. She could feel his hardness pressing close to her, passing currents of heat wave. She widened her eyes & looked at him realizing they were almost making love with their cloths on. Maan was lasciviously moving, kissing her, holding her,  he placed kisses all over her face & moving to her earlobe & to her neck down to her shoulder bones almost reach his climax he held her pressing a carnal bite in the hollow of her neck panting & feeling soporific. She could feel his heart rising higher & higher making her feel the concupiscent air blanketing them. He buried his head in her shoulder & lay on her relaxing. She shied feeling she could make him feel his climax, shying at her womanhood. He didn't know how to express what he felt, he was not sure how she felt, he was feeling little odd to have lost himself but contented with his ultimate expression of feeling, how wild she could drive him. He slowly moved to the washroom & took his shower & got ready. They were both felt happy & odd, unsure how to spell it out. She made his breakfast still feeling the scent of him around her. She chuckled sipping the milk & smiled thinking about their closeness. She wanted to comfort him, tell him she felt happier from inside to have made him feel that way but she turned pink & cold when he walked to the breakfast table. He didn't know what to tell her he was feeling little teased with her silence. She definitely didn't  want him to feel that way. She served him the toast, omelet & coffee. She went back to the kitchen not able to hide her feelings. She closely watched him from the kitchen, she noticed he was restless. He finished his breakfast tacitly. He took his files, laptop & the keys, he played with key before opening the door.
Geet whispered - maan
rushing out of the kitchen. He stood at the door holding the knob. She inched towards him looking down. He watched her wondering what she wanted to say, was it about his lasciviousness, he took a deep breath & awaited her next move. Her cheeks were pink & eyes sacred to meets his. She took him by shock by slipping her arms around him & placing a soft kiss on his lips accepting his lasciviousness. He was delighted & his emotions felt sheltered. He smiled & took in her lips holding her closely. She smiled softly turning deep color of pink on her cheeks. He kissed her forehead & said bye. She just nodded. After he left she closed the door & hid her face in her hand feeling really shy.
She had a shower, thinking about maan. She really felt nice & hearty. She looked at herself in the mirror  & saw the bite mark on her neck & blushed. She got ready & went to college after the maid had  finished the work. Geet could stop thinking about maan & how she made him feel. Those moment just played back again & again in her mind. She kept smiling to herself. 
Maan felt pleasant & cheerful. He couldn't take his mind off her. Her acceptance, her understanding for his discomfort was warm. She always knew to win him, sweep him off his feet with her unexpected demeanor.

Geet walked into the class lost in maans thoughts. She sat in her usual place & kept smiling to herself. Arjun walked in & sat next to her. She didn't even notice. Arjun was fuming seeing her attitude. After few lectures geet still looked lost. She came to her senses when her phone rang. She took her phone & ran out excusing herself from the class. She panted & answered the call & didn't say anything
maan smiled hearing her breath so furiously
maan - miss you jaan
her smile widened
maan - u look beautiful when you smile with those pink cheeks
she covered her face in her hands
maan - umm, aise karogi tho main tumhe dehkonga kaise
she immediately looked around
maan - I don't have to be there to see you
she smiled again
maan - ok get back to your class, bye
he was about to cut she whispered maan
maan lovingly - umm
geet - miss u too. & quickly said  bye & cut the call. he hit the phone on his head blushing.
She smiled & turned to bump into arjun who stood crossing his hand in front of her.
She ignored him & walked other way to her class. He pulled & pressed her on the wall woh kaun hain?
Geet snapped out of his grip at once - it is nun of your business
he pushed back holding her arms - waise tho you behave sati savitri types, but what ever you doing in his arms yesterday. She almost raised her hand to hit him.
He kept her captive of his gaze & hold - kaun hain ? tumhara boyfriend, lover
she looked into his eyes which was spitting fire & his grip hurting, she pulled aside, away from him. Kyun your are feeling ashamed that your little serene imagine is ruined. Aise bhi kya rishta hain tumhara uske saat. Geet hated him questioning her relation with maan. She didn't want to answer his any stupid questions. Why should I answer you. You are no one in my life. Woh tho ... she almost blushed thinking about maan. Arjun held her woh tho kya? She fumbled feeling shy but her fumbling was confusing to arjun. She looked down &  moving out of his grip - he is my husband. This was first time she voiced it out almost accepting their relation. Husband word tickled her stomach
Arjun turned to face her - don't lie, you are just cooking up some crap now.
Geet - just get lost I am not interested to answer any of your questioning.
Arjun - you will have to
geet - I will not
and walks back into the class pushing him out of her way.
arjun punches the wall - tum jhoot bolrahi ho!! I can see that in your eyes.

romantic dinner

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mishtiiii...., loved the first part.. wonderful dear.. it took me to another world..........Hope we will get to see the real one sooooon EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

kill that Arjun dear SmileSmile   How dare he touch Geet  ???...what about bringing the Terrorist  to London and they shooting Arjun thinking it's Maan...or we will do one thing.. Tie Arjun on a chair and making him forcefully watch Kektha serials whole day LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

Precap :- Romantic dinner... .. ha dear.. I am waiting for after dinner WinkWinkWinkWink

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wonderful updateClap
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