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congrats muskan 4 new thread.......Dancing

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:11am | IP Logged

-truly magical-
part 76

he reached the door - are you going to college today
geet nodded yes feeling flushed.
she looked into the cards & blushed seeing her name emprinted as GEET KHURANA
she kept them in her purse. she left to college after the maid helped her do up the house. geet was so confused to supervising the maid, she called rano 10 times to know what exactly she needed to be done. rano smiled at her daughter settling with her house.

she caught up with Anni almost after a week.
anni - why didn't you come for classes, tumhara phone bhi unreachable tha
geet was not so close to her to tell that, she got marrid yesterday
geet - I was not well
arjun came from behind put his hand around geets shoulder - what happened sweetheart
geet snapped at once turning him down - don't u dare call me that
arjun had lopsid smile ignoring her sternness in her tone.
geet stepped away from him & wondered why anni was not saying anything
anni looked fine with him opennly flirting with her. when the whole of last
week they were litereally going arround.
in the class anni sat next to geet & arjun came & sat on the other side
geet swapped the place with anni.
geet whispered to anni why is he doing this?
anni - he is just kidding, don't take him so seriously
geet definitly didn't find any of his intentions funny or causal
it all seemed intentionl & delibrate. She began to hate his mear presence around her.

After the classes geet wanted to pick up stuffs for the house.
anni showed her the places & arjun tagged along
while they where on the way maan called
maan - hi jaan
geet was so delighted to hear his voice - hi
arjun noyiced the change in her tone
maan - kya kar rahi ho?
geet - main anni aur arjun ke saat shopping ja rahin hoon
maan - lunch kiya?
geet - umm, aur aapne
maan - I am just stepping out with the clients
geet - itna late
maan - kaam tha sweet heart
arjun hated her giggling & chatting like that.
geet - jaldi aana
maan smiled - umm
geet - bye
maan - suno
geet - umm
maan - don't forget to change the pin of the card
geet - ji
she was feeling so protected with him around, that could be one reason why she was
able to ignore Arjuns advances, somewhere she knew nothing could go wrong when
maan was there with her. 
Arjun was closely watching geet all the while. her gestures, her smile, her belongings
Anni didn't seem to notice all this, she had become crazy in his love.
Geet picked up all the basic groceries; salt, peper, turmeric..., she kept calling rano
again & again checking what she needed to cook & how much quantity to buy.
she moved to get vegitables, breads, meat, offcourse cooking ware.
Arjun kept poking his nose while she was selecting things for her house, which she totaly
didn't approve of. geet picked every thing in accordance with maans taste.
she exacty knew what he liked, his color choice, his fav fruits, his fav food
she had no idea how much she would have blown up...but well didn't matter it was
like a drop when it came to Maan Singh Khurana's account.
by the time she finished her shopping it was 6.00pm she quickly said bye to Anni & Arjun
and rushed home. the driver helped her carry the shopping bags.
she quickly took the recipe of pasta & spatchcock chicken. she put the chicken in the
oven for roasting first. she was in a total mess, she didn't get time to arrange the stuffs. after making the pasta she just rushed to change.
maan walked-in to see the whole house in a mess again. he just lost it this time.
maan shouted - GEET !!! GEET!! yah kya haal bana rakha hain ghar ka?
she came out wrapping the saree wondering what happened
maan held her from arms - what is all this, aaj kis baat ka gussa nikala rahi hoo?
geet was still confused - mainne tho kuch nahi kiya
maan - RIGHT!!! u never do anything!!! humesha meri galati hoti hain
GEET HANDA can never be wrong
he said it surcastically
tears welled down her eyes, she was not sure why was he getting so angry
she was anxiously waiting for him & his anger was total shock to her
maan again raised his tone - I am asking u...buzzzz..the ovens timer went off
she ran to switch it off. almost tripping her saree. maan held her from the waist
then he realized she was dressed in a white saree, he looked at the kitchen it was
not in a mess..looked like she was working & the aroma of the roasted chicken just filled
his senses, knocking sense into him what he has done.
she snapped out of his grip & turned off the knob. she lifted her saree & rushed to the room, maan ran behind her. she slammed the door on his face & pulled out the saree & crying...bahut soukha tha saree pehne ka, unhone notice bhi nahi kiya..
maan - geet sorry...please I did'nt know, woh ...
geet screamed - just leave me alone
she changed into her jeans t-shirt & walked out to the kitchen
maan walked behind her sorry jaan I really didn't realize..woh packets were all scattered around tho mujhe laga... kya laga aapko, jo bhi laga aapko , how dare you shout at me like this
maan - geet I am really sorry
still crying & pulling her hair up in a knot - damm with sorry
she pulled out the table cloth from the packet & spread it on the table
he tried to help, she yelled dare you touch my things
he came & pulled her from waist & kissed the nape of her neck which was exposed
now as she pulled her hair up. she snapped, he turned her from her waist in a jerk
sorry kha na sweety, please she hit him on his chest I hate you.
maan - umm..please don't hate me na...he drew closer to her, she moved back
I hate..he trapped her words between his mouth & hers. Geet didn't know what it was
about maan that she always felt like giving in to him. His hands roamed freely over her
soft & now hot body now to open the clip that held the hair in a knot, it filled
the air arround him with her scent which was driving him insane. The wall behind supported
her from behind as she plunged her fingers into his hair & kissed him back with the same'
passion that filled him. Suddenly the reality hit her full force, she gathered her wits
about her & forced him away...with tears in her eyes... how dare you shout at me like that
he looked every where else but her face jaan please suno tho...

what say maan gets to taste the dinner!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedConfusedWink!

hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments. Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.

Edited by muskanp - 22 December 2010 at 9:02pm

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:13am | IP Logged
wow me first today thank u dear for the lovely update.

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:13am | IP Logged

ok second on row

and ofcourse Maan will tatste the dinner
aakhir Geet ne itni mehnat se banaaya hai khana to padega
and with dinner kuch dessert bhi to hoga na Muskaan

Edited by smj1977 - 22 December 2010 at 11:20am

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Wovvvvvvvvv geet cooking for maan that too after wearing a saree.
Maan u missed good dinner,

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:21am | IP Logged
owww!! Nw geet has full ryt to be angry.....thnx for the update....loving their cute little family life...

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Hmm......plz make it ummy!
at least he can see that she can cook!LOL 

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