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-truly magical- MAANEET thread 7 (Page 133)

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 1:03am | IP Logged
Tie Up Loose Ends
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-truly magical-
part 85

Arjun shook is head feeling low. Its ok atleast she didn't leave immediately after I did, she atleast sat with you for few minutes alone, that's a great improvement she giggled. He smiled feebly.   

It was a month since that incident. Geet refrained herself from meeting anni alone. She knew arjun would some how drop in. she played really smart. Every time they plan to go out for anything, geet would modishly walk out of it.

It was a Thursday night geet was tired from her college assignments & sat in the couch sipping her Hot chocolate waiting for maan. He barged in & walked straight into the bedroom. She was shocked to see him in such hurry at this hour of the day. She kept her drink down & followed him to the bedroom. He removed the back bag which seemed heavy & he dragged her out of the house, checking for the lights & other appliances. He looked at her once again & quickly got her jacket & cap. She wore it while he was locking the door.
Geet - kya huwa? kanhi jaa rahen hain?
He maintained a stern look - I am kidnapping you    
she smiled & put her hand around him challo !!!
they sat in the car & the driver took them to the airport where maan had arranged for a private jet. Geet just followed him through the security check & other paper work. Geet realized maan was upto something, but what she wondered. They boarded the jet while the assistant helped him with the luggage. She cuddled up & sat next to him. No questions asked even though she was so curious. Captain called on the intercom & took maans permission to take off. Maan finished the formalities while the air hostess came to take their order. Geet quickly covered maan with the blanket & held him closer. He smiled resting his hand on hers. He remembered their flight back to delhi & wondered she hasn't changed a bit. She dossed off after having her milkshake & woke up only after the flight had landed. She mistily opened her eyes & followed maan.
As they stepped out of the flight she cuddled closer to him feeling the icy & chilled breeze caressing her skin. She looked around the place it looked so quiet & beautiful. As they boarded the limo that waited for them - hum kanha hain?
He kept quiet. She looked out of the window trying to figure out. The place had some of the most impressive architectural designs ever imagined. It contained several of the most prolific architectural styles all in one location from Renaissance and the baroques. Her eyes widened with the view & a spark struck her eyes. She knew she was in the most beautiful part of the world like couple of hours away from London, she tried get her geography to answer her questions. But the awe of the place was spell bound she couldn't think much just enjoyed the spectacular view crammed into a small area. When they drew down the ancient stone streets she noticed palaces and churches around every corner. She looked at maan in disbelieve..I know this place...umm!!! are we in ITLAY...OMG OMG OMG '.she screamed & kissed him. He smiled & kept looking at the spark that filled her eyes.

The limo stopped near a tall building. The back of the building definitely faced the canal. The driver opened the door for them & maan led the way into the building giving her a key to an apartment.
As they reached the door it was almost 11.55pm. She was about the open the door, maan just held her back & took her lips into his. She was surprised by his sudden kiss in the corridor of the apartment. But it was all so romantic & dreamy she didn't think much, she just slipped into the moment & their tongue played along, wetting their desires. He madly tucked her closer & his hands passionately caressed her back and now her hair. She leaned in to him & burning into his touch. 12.00..happy birthday he whispered into her mouth. She opened her eyes in shock. & a blush spread across her cheek. She bend her head & hit his chest. Andar ja kar bhi kah sakte the. He didn't reply. She opened the door
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!! scream from all over...balloons, flowers, streamers candles...with a huge birth day cake ...filled the room along with armaan, prem, raj, ridz, naina & mukti!!! she stood SHOCKED...maan whispered in her ears...I wanted to be the first one to wish u. she turned & looked into his eyes, the love the care, the desire to be only hers !!! she hugged him & kissed him again in front of every one..

.all of them ooowwwed!!!!! she blushed & hid herself behind maan. They all pounced at her, wished her hugged her. They got her presents, flowers & chocolates. They had so much to catch up, almost three months now!!
the cut & cake & shared it. She gave the first bite to maan & he fed her. Then she fed each one one of them & they hugged her.
geet sat midst of her best friends while maan sat comfortably checking the mails in the room.
Mukti & ridz went off to sleep while naina sat cuddled up with raj.
Armaan - he didn't tell you at all?
Geet - no
prem laughed
geet was annoyed & made a baby face complaining to raj
raj - No one says anything to my gudiya aaj uska b-day hain
she went beside him & cuddled on the other side. Naina slipped her hand around her now.
Prem still trying to control his laughter - we have been planning all this over couple of months now
geet was shocked - couple of months???
raj - actually maan called us & requested if we could join u guys for your bday.
Armaan - he arranged for our VISA's
prem - can u believe he arranged a private jet for us!!!
naina pressed her had softly - he really loves you a lot.
She blushed. She was still not able to comprehend they were here with her for her birthday.
They sat up chatting until 4am & slept cuddled up in the carpet. Maan got up latter & looked for geet, he went out wondering where she was. She looked so happy sleeping cuddled up with armaan, prem, raj & naina. Maan got a comforter & covered them all. Also got some pillows for them. Raj smiled with the droopy eyes & took the pillow. Prem & armaan were too fast a sleep. Maan slowly slipped the pillow under their head. He was so tempted to kiss her forehead but he couldn't do it in front of them. He just gave a flying kiss to her, for his surprise she blushed in her sleep. He shook his head & went back to the room.   

birth day in Venice!!!

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Edited by muskanp - 01 January 2011 at 8:03pm

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First one to comment today and that too on my favourite FF...
Geet should thank Muskan for helping Maan to plan such a beautiful birthday.... WinkWinkWinkWink
It was all soo dreamy as I always say it.... WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
Birthday in Itlay with Maan Singh Khurana and ur best buddies....
and to the best of all there wasnt much of Annie-Arjun drama... WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
For Geet it must have been the best birthday ever...
But y did she sleep with her friends...
Poor Maan, how will he sleep now... He has got a habit of sleep with Geet cuddled in his arms....EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Geet should turn into a responsible wifey now.... WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
I am jealous of her yaar... She has such amazing friends and above all such a loving and caring husband.... EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Please update soon...

Edited by zaqxsw - 31 December 2010 at 1:18am

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tat was one of the best part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

totally loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

maan is sooooooooooooooo sweet......................

nd geet, she got the best b'day gift

well glad tat u bought the friends back......,actually wer missing them

amazing part.......... 

a big hug for u........HugHug

nd whether u will update khamoshi??????????

Edited by dia_ditz - 31 December 2010 at 1:16am

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maan is such a romantic guy

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 1:20am | IP Logged
tht was sooooooooooo cool reminded me of my bday whn my frnds gave me a surprise
luved itttttttttttttttttttttt

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wow!! So romantic and gorgeous!! Loved it..

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That was such a rocking surprise Party

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 1:25am | IP Logged
so romantic update..

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