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FF-Mannet***My Dark Lover*** THread 1 (Page 61)

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE

any one fancy 2 -3 parts on this???
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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Oh! Atlast u came! 4 ur updates we r waitin any time sweet! Plz update animosity too as u told u'll finish it wit 4-5parts togethr nearby christmas, so plz update it asap whenever u get a chance i hope u get tat chance very soon.

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Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE

any one fancy 2 -3 parts on this???
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*~My Dark Love~*

part 12

Geet just looked at him... Blankly... There was something different in his please... Like he was truly hurt with her behavior...
Geet- I have never done anything for anyone. Or I will... You are nothing to me... Nothing. Your existence does not matter to my life. Or it will... It's your fault that you waisting your time on me... I will give you only pain... Nothing els...

Maan just stood there listening... Every word hitting him like a needles... He closes his eyes... Trying to ignore every single word...
Maan- I guess I have to try the hard way...
Geet- why don't you just give up on me!
Maan- I never gave up on anyone... I never have learned to give-up.
Geet- trust me... You will loose everything. I am not the type of person that you want to love.
Maan- I already have. It's too late.
Geet- don't...
Maan- too late...

Both looked at one another... Geet was trying her best to read someones eyes for the first time in her life... She wasn't sure why? Why would anyone even want to love her this much? Even Shive never felt anything about her except there physical attraction... But him... Geet was confused... The way he asked... She wanted to try... Some odd reason she wanted to try... But only thing she couldn't understand why would he do this? Why would he even try to help her.... She wasn't those sida sida type of girl... She difently wasn't. Or exactly the nicest. To be honest... She have all the bad quality a girl could have. She is not religious... Or a house wife type. She laughed at her thought. She couldn't find a single quality a guy like him would want in her... Only think he probably fell for my innocent beauty... But that's what everyone falls for... And she was susses full at breaking everyones heart... But him.... He is too possessive out of all... Just too possessive....

Maan looked at her... Still pleading inside him... Praying that she will agree... Will she... Geet suddenly spoke out...

Geet- no... I... No....
Maan- as you wish... I am giving you no choice now...
A Dr walks in... Dr Harsh keshab. Soon as he walks in his eyes were fixed on Geet... While geets on maan and maan on her.
Maan- she is ready.
Geet gives him another fuming glare.
Maan- she might create problems but don't worry I know exactly how to Handel her. I have brought a house near by. You have to come there to start her treatment. Her room is exactly like this one. You won't have any problem of treating her.
Dr harsh- geet...
Both Maan and Geet looks at him... Geet was surprised. She broke his heart big time... It took him years to recover... And now out of surprise he came to help her....
Maan- I hope you are ready Dr!
Harsh looked at him in surprise...
Maan- do you know Geet?
Geet- nun of your business maan!
Maan- everything about you is my business... Now learn to drop that attitude.
Geet- no one ever spoke to me like that. Don't you dare.
Maan- If you force me... I can't do much.
Geet- actually do whatever you want. I am leaving.
Soon as she was about to leave security guards started to come in.
Maan- I have told you... I will force you.
Harsh just stood there listening to there conversation...
Harsh- Geet... We will start the detoxification. It will run for 4 days. I will give you buprenorphin... This will help you to reduce the craving for your heroine.
Geet was about to swear and push the guards... Maan walks towards her and picks her up...
Geet- what are you doing?
Maan- chup... Bilkul chup!... He shouts angrily...
Those eyes really scared Geet... It could change from one phrase to another on matter of few second...
Geet lays on the bed... Maan next to her... Holding her tight.
Maan- Dr please do your job.
Harsh didn't hesitate at all... But he was concern about geets touch... Even her skin gives him shiver... Maan noticed'

prev-PART 11

next-PART 13

more on its way' I am loving all the comments...



Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 27 December 2010 at 4:55pm

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Loved the update... Hehe... More.
I can't wait.
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Edited by BadGirlKiss - 26 December 2010 at 2:52pm
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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
WOW...
AWESOME UPDATE
LOVED ITTTT
Hmm geet is feeling something..awhh
Harsh??
who is he?
Cant wait to read more
update soonnn

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chubzy

Oh! Atlast u came! 4 ur updates we r waitin any time sweet! Plz update animosity too as u told u'll finish it wit 4-5parts togethr nearby christmas, so plz update it asap whenever u get a chance i hope u get tat chance very soon.
 
yes yes keyams plz update animosity too dearCry

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
like how maan is spporting geet. Clap 
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