Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

FF-Mannet***My Dark Lover*** THread 1 (Page 138)

-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 22 August 2010
Posts: 28638

Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:09am | IP Logged
update na keya...... pls pls pls.....

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


A8406 Groupbie

Joined: 22 September 2010
Posts: 51

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged

just finished reading all 21 parts, i never wanted to read it before i never liked Geets one night stand but seems like story is going to change .Loved it so far like your other FFs but why have you stopped Intezaar plz cont. All your FFs are good i liked Esoteris the most.Please update faster and plz cont. Intezaar.PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


BadGirlKiss IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 July 2010
Posts: 2573

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Pls update soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 October 2007
Posts: 10625

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
anyone fancy an update… :D

The following 6 member(s) liked the above post:


bono_jostna Senior Member

Joined: 14 October 2010
Posts: 594

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
me me me me me me me me

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


nan_10 Goldie

Joined: 24 September 2010
Posts: 1541

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
waiting till now

Edited by nan_10 - 07 January 2011 at 7:30am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 October 2007
Posts: 10625

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 7:31am | IP Logged

part 22

Maan looked at geet lovingly... He smirked with bite of apple... Geet turned her back towards him... Out of bloom she did started to enjoy this different lifestyle... Completely different... It's nothing same as her night club...
Tani- bhabhi What's you favorite color?
Geet- umm... I don't have any.
Tani- what? Don't you like any color?
Geet- no... I am not in to shopping.
Tani- bhabi what are you saying? We are girls... Shopping is our first priority.
Geet- umm... Na not for me.
Maan- don't worry Tani now she will start doing all the Girly stuff... Because that's my favorite.
Geet- what makes you think I will do anything that is your favorite.
Maan- do I have to mention?
Geet- yes.
Maan- like You wearing a blue color wedding set.
Geet looks at the designer.... Choose any color except blue.
Designer- red?
Maan- my favorite on you.
Geet gets irritated- no red or blue.
Desginer- green?
Maan- green brings out your beauty....
Geet- no... No red blue or green.
Designer screeches her head...
Desginer- pink?
Maan- perfect color for girl again my favorite on you....
Geet looks at him irritatingly- tell me a colour that you don't like...
Maan- actually I have nun.. I love all colour on you.
Tani- owo bhi you becoming more romantic day by day....
Maan- can you remember when I wasn't?
Tani- bhi... You are to good!
Geet gives him one of those I want you look....
Maan smirks further....
Desginer- done.... Wouldn't you like to choose what Designee each cloth should have?
Geet looks at maan.... Her eyes wasn't moving from his lips... She wanted to taste them badly...
Geet- Tanni you may have the pleasure to do that.... With those word Geet disappears in her room... Telling Maan to come with her with her eyes.....
Tanni exited... She have the best bhabi ever....

After 10 minutes Maan walks in....
Soon as maan walks in she closes the door.... It was broad day light... And they had perfect intention to make love again... Something maan start to have dought she is only here to make love... Nothing els..... But he ignored the thought for that moment....

Geet comes round and puts her hand round his neck...
Geet- you looking very hot today...
Maan- hmm.... Don't I all the time?
Geet- yes... But today extra...
Maan- acca....
Geet smirks- far as I remember you never ever seen me full naked in the broad day light.... She bites his lips....
Maan- that's something for us to do after wedding..... He slides his hand round her weist....
Geet- hmm..... Well after wedding we can find something more interesting to do....
Maan- yes we can.... I have big plan....
Geet laughs- bless those plan.... They will all go in vein....
Maan- maan sing khuranas plan never goes in vien... And with that word he kissed her tight....
Geet pushes him way... With a smirk...
Geet- you have to seduce me...
Maan- hmm...
Geet removes all her hair to one side and unzips her string... Moving round the room while maan not removing his gaze from her dark deep eyes... Geet through her dupatta towards him... She was waking hid monster up in him...
Geet hides behind the changing door... Taking of everything one by one... Maan looks at her through the loop holes...

There life was in a position where everything seems like a dream... There was something defiantly wrong here...

Geet slowly walks out.... Maans eyes were looked in her... Gazing her up and down... Even though they made love so many time before... But this was something new... Like she is a Pari.... Perfect... Beautiful... Lascivious.... Sexy.... Maan couldn't remove his gaze... He couldn't.... He wanted to feel her every part... Every curve that made her look this sexy... He walks towards her... Slowly... He strokes her private part then gently moves his hand upwards...
Maan- you are really....
Geet- sexy....
Maan nodes negatively...
Geet- then?
Maan- beautiful...
Maan slowly cresses her cheek....
Maan- I could never stop to explore you....
Geet- who have told you to stop....
Maan smirks... A naughty smirk... There was mischief behind those lips...
Geet comes close and pushes him to the bed... Sitting on him... Slowly taking his shirt off kissing him....
Maan stops her.... Even though he wa loosing him self... He stops her...
Maan- not today...
Geet- why? Don't you find me attractive enough? She bites his lips...
Maan- if I didn't love you I wouldn't have gone through this much hassle...
Maan covers her with the spread... Before he could loose him self completely…

next- shive is bcShocked

helloo.. i have shower of updates… 2day… for this heheh… back to keyama styly… but only 2 for now… then 3-4 parts 2 night :D


also i am starting my new shower update with my new FF… soon as i finish our ANIMOSITY… :Dxxxx

leave comments love keyama


love u for all the one u lot left

The following 124 member(s) liked the above post:

snehag10pyarisaheliharikashiva25inlwgeetsan1989Candy_jsvAnzIiEegeetoznikitaagarwal06kavitamundharaSalmankatsansheen99AISHAJSzainah320bpinkykasturi11A8406payal956asmi123trendyfriendschoudhary.ammishra1lakshmisalvadiannie03taannihemvbguru-ki-dewaanibhakbhartifanjuhi_ansarimamon.moonhansasmapreciuspearlPaloma_Dcyberprincessmaaneetfan123varshakhedekarbono_jostnarostshruthiruchsThugAngelperfectflirt8Moon002Nesanshekiprabha75greshuAzmiimaaneetfanaticManpreetmannNav2010nan_10Rohini20Lakshmi86-Premeena-dreamy4everbobbydolldoosheeka-LOVE-Arshi-maansi007shivangi783TishuuanshimanshitrishaplodyNirjhor105Prettychoco90bluedreamz953-shamima-maanujaanuPaintedSkyHanoAhmedputhCutee999.ramya-gurtian.BadGirlKissRocks.DharaJayaRanmirzakshubhangivasavi_sri-Veritaserum-nehakapoor7basicquestion118mypridepaponeconRamhariMaaneet.LoverWater.wajiha-1Krishnaluv94ramaheshsmj1977.shruti-pixie-shruthiRblueopalpunjabi.princessweet cherryanjucool-afsha-namita25CrazzyBusykooliioSahSahsweet scorpiomitzi11swetha10charmed onesFallen Angelrsroopalimaansee..hinal..KaSh-Maneet-Fant_areebShalvechsweety22impoojavermaJayeeta_06Madhuri53cookie.pickachu-Mrinalini-felicitysmoak.notfadedawayJanakivallavDownhill

-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 22 August 2010
Posts: 28638

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Fantabulous update Keya...Clap

Yipee i'm first to comment!Dancing

I think its time for Geet to crave for Maan's touch!!!Wink

Shiv is back????? Nooo... Problem ye hai ke i can't hate Shiv!!!!Cry

Anyways... I'm waiting for the shower of updates!

dunno if i'll be able to comment first on the next update as well....

Anyways... open a new thread babes!!!!

I'm going to the market and coming in 15 mins!!!

Love u...


Edited by -Mrinalini- - 07 January 2011 at 7:43am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
FF.manneet-**ANIMOSITY** Thread 1 pt 16 new thread

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 143 144

Author: FireSafireFiree   Replies: 1148   Views: 338656

FireSafireFiree 1148 338656 02 March 2013 at 4:33am by sushfiza
MG FF:Limitless -Thread 3- NEW THREAD LINK PG1

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 131 132

Author: maan-ki-sanjana   Replies: 1055   Views: 158037

maan-ki-sanjana 1055 158037 03 November 2012 at 3:31am by Sona257
FF-M&G-**ANIMOSITY** THREAD 3- link to thread 4

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 126 127

Author: FireSafireFiree   Replies: 1014   Views: 238298

FireSafireFiree 1014 238298 29 October 2011 at 6:54pm by maaneetfanatic
FF-Enigma- THREAD 7 (thread 8 link on 1st page)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 116 117

Author: FireSafireFiree   Replies: 933   Views: 167981

FireSafireFiree 933 167981 05 July 2011 at 3:55am by khwaishfan
-kashish-maaneet ff THREAD new thread add

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 142 143

Author: muskanp   Replies: 1136   Views: 263697

muskanp 1136 263697 15 March 2011 at 7:54pm by preethia

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index