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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 91)

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Part 26:

Geet- I'm going to have my periods... NOOOOO!!
Taani- ohh.. I tought something worse had happened
Geet- This is the worst thing, every month this problem and makes a sad face
Meera- ohoh .. How could I forgot that when Geet is having her periods she turns into a devil

Geet- funny? and looks at her..

Bua calls Taani down as she has to start to get ready..

Geet looks at Meera as she should also leave now.

Meera- Acha meri maa, don't be so angry now. and leaves

Geet opens her wardrobe and looks at all her clothes..

Geet- What should I wear? she looks at her clothes once again, I can wear this white one for a while. Just in seek if they need any help.

Geet goes down and Meera is laughing at her
Geet- And why are you laughing?
Meera- You dosen't feel well and are wearing white? Btw that blue ribbon did suit you

Pia and Bua understood what they were talking about and started to laugh, and Maan entered.

Maan- Hello mom and aunty and takes blessings from both
Pia- Jete raho, how come you are here?
Maan- Woh Jai went today to office as I had took a leave from office today, as I can help you here
Bua- Pia, your son is so smart, ok fine go and help...
Pia- Geet, Go and help Geet, she will probably need your help soon.
Maan didn't get what they were saying and went to Geet's room.

He was stunned when he looked at her room. It was first time he ever saw her room, he thought is maybe will be pink and all girly stuff, but it wasn't like it, it was cream colored wall and purple things in it.

He knocks the door and Geet opens it

Geet- aap?
Maan wondered what happened to her, when did she started to call her aap?
Maan- Are you fine?
Geet- Yes? What are you doing her?
Maan- Mom said that you can need my help so I went upstairs to your room.
Geet- Oh yes, can you choose the roses, I don't like any of them.

Maan looks at the flowers – ehh you can take , then Maan realize that Geet is not listning to him.
Maan- I'm talking to you

Geet was looking at his lips and got a smile on her face.
Maan- GEET! I'm talking to you, common
Geet goes to him, and puts her hands on his neck

Maan understood what she wanted. Maan puts his hand on her waist and pulls her more closer to himself.

Maan- Oh,

Maan takes his finger and drags it from her face to her arm. Geet started to shiver with Maans touch. Maan takes his hand and cups her face with it. Geet closes her eyes and maan looks at her lips. He strokes her lips with his tumb and Geet started to breath faster. Maan takes her underlip into his mount for just give a small kiss. He started to nibble on her underlip. Maan stoped immediately. Geet opened her eyes and Maan saw how she was turning pink and was smiling.

Both were quite now for a while.

Maa- eeh
Geet- Maan
Maan- umm
Geet- i think you have kissed many girls
Maan: Geet!
Geet- finally, you should say finally
Maan- Stop joking! and said it very rudely

Geet got angry in once.

Geet goes and opens her door and looks at Maan.

Geet- you can leave!
Maan- What happended?
Geet- LEAVE!!
Maan- I'm sorry na!
Geet- LEAVE!!! Geet takes his hand and drags him out from her room and closes her door when she had taked him out.

Geet- how mean! And started to look for which dress he should wear.

Maan- How rude this girl is.. and bumps into taani who saw everthing and started to laugh at him
Taani- I feel bad for you
Maan- Bhabhi! What has happened to her? Why is her mood bad today?
Taani- it's becuase of she is going to have her periods, thats why
Maan- Ohh... But I have never seen her in such bad mood.
Taani- That's becuase she is trying to be calm when she is with you. But If you make her mood good again then she will be ok and leaves

Maan- Alright, Plan A fix Geet's mood

Precap- Mahi Mahi + Wedding

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
awesome update 
loved it
pls cont soon

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged

Great part..

Thanks for the pM..
Continue soon!!

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loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
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Gr8 part... loved it

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