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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 82)

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Part 24:

Anu goes direct to Taani and tells her everything Maan said to him and both looks at Geet and when she looks at them they pretends that they are flirting,

Geet- How sweet and goes to them

Geet- Can't you guys hold on for a sec or something? and teases them
Anu- Why are you worring? You have Maan right? Go to him

Geet looks at him and leaves in anger.. Taani gives him look go after her now.. Anu goes after her and stops Geet.

Geet- Please Jiju
Anu- What happened?
Geet- what?
Anu- exacly.. What happened between you and Maan?
Geet- Nothing
Anu- I can see it clearly..
Geet- ....
Anu- Please tell me.. Oh so you don't trust me and turns his back to her and is about to go when Geet stops him.
Geet- No Jiju, aise kyo baat nhi hai. Woh.. Maan dosen't love me anymore!
Anu- WHAT! Geet how can you say this?
Geet tells him everything how she was in his office and everthing and how he said to leave and everything.
Anu- But Geet, he maybe said leave from the office? He didn't meant like leave from my life?
Geet- I don't think so.. Don't you see.. That jenni is total over him 24/7.. Like that see.. and points there Maan was talking with Jenni.
Anu- I think you are misunderstanding him jenni is..( Geet's cut him)
Geet- If you are going to take Jenni's side then please do it.. But leave me alone.. First your brother is total heartbraker person... I just made a mistake of loving him. I will never forgive him.
Anu- But Geet listen but geet just left..

Seeing Geet leaving Maan runs to Anu to know what she said and Anu says that he will tell him later, as she is very disrubed with hearing Maan's name all the time.

Geet goes to her room and brakes down totally, she started to cry, she sat there and remembered all the memories with Maan. And at the same time she hears Anu's voice in her head, all the things he said.

Geet- Maybe Jiju was right, maybe did Maan meant to leave office, OMG hai babaji yeh mene kya kar diya, mene sabh kuch ghalt le liye, paar Maan ne bhi haad kar di.. Mujhe ek baar bhi nhi milne aya jab mein hospital mein thi, aur woh Jenni! huh, Maan ke upar to total latoo hai, mujhe Maan se bath karni hue gi, I can't let this go to far now, and goes to Khurna house, she enteres the house and goes straight to Maan's room but he is not in his room. She decides to sit and wait for him.

Maan comes home late and goes straight to his bedroom, he takes off the jacket and throws it on the bed, and Geet chaths it..

Geet- oww.. Somebody is not in good mood

Maan turns around and is shocked to see Geet..

Geet stands up and walks to him
Maan- What happened?
Geet- I'm sorry Maan! and holds her ear. I'm really sorry and hugs him

Maan was very happy now.. Finally .. finally his Geet is back.

Maan place a soft kiss on her forhead and Geet rolles her eyes

Maan- Abh kiya hua?
Geet- Comon Maan, Itna acha mauka hai, and you didn't give me the first kiss.
Maan- Sorry I didn't tought about it..

Maan cups Geets face and slowly goes closer to her and Jenni openes the door.

Jeeni- Geet? and is shocked to see her this time.

Geet- Hi and smiles to her.

Maan murmer* Jab bhi mein iska kareeb jata ho koy na koy ae jata hai, abh jenni ko kya hua?*

Maan- What happened my sweet sister?
Jenni- I come to say that I got a work in Sanjeevani so i'm going to work tomorrow, so you don't walk into my room and starting to look after me, btw now I should leave and closes the door..

Geet tried to hold her laughter but she didn't manage to do it,

Maan- Why are you laughing? in angry voice
Geet- I'm laughing at you, who can't even kiss his girlfriend for the first time without somebody poping up and continues laugh

Precap- Maan is naughty

Edited by SaVni - 05 March 2011 at 12:05pm

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Atleast MU is cleared
Awe Maan couldn't hav his first kiss wiv geet wivout som1 interfering
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