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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 68)

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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 7:51am | IP Logged
i hope maan will be able to clear all geet's misunderstandings!
continue soon!

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged
hey dear
awesome part
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
awesome update

pleasse add me to ur pm list :)
update quick :)LOLTongue

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
loved it
gr8 part
plz clear this MU fast
cant see them like this
cont soon

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
hey dear,
good job!!!!!!!!!!!
nice part

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SaVni Goldie

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Part 23:
Geet- ohh..she is that girl!

Dadi maa goes to Maan and asks him if he can take care of Jenni cause she wants to go home.. Now it's for the youngster to start their games..
Geet is standing their and watching him and goes from their.. Maan sees it and wonders what happend to her.

Maan- Jenni go to Jay and rest of the gang I will get Geet.
Jenni- oh I really want to see her.
Maan goes after Geet but can't find her.
Maan sees her standing and talking with some other girls.. He looks at her back and sees that her kurti's hook is open. Geet looks back and sees Maan standing their and looking at her. She excuse her self and goes away from them. Maan is standing on the other side and when Geet goes beside him he takes her hand(that one who is not hurted) and pulls her to her.

Geet- What are you doing?
Maan- I missed you sooo much and hugs her tight.
Geet- Leave me Maan.
Maan- Geet, how can I leave you like this.. he turns her around and puts her paranda on her right side. He touches her back and it send cold shiver to her. Maan closes the hook and gives her angry look.

Geet- Can you leave me now! and snappes out at him
she is about to go when Maan holds her tight from the arm.. She screams of pain and Maan looks at her arm and are shocked to see the scratches she has..
Maan- What happened Geet? How did this scrates happened?
Geet takes his hand and pushes him away .
Geet- W*H What's wrong with you? she started to bleed
Maan- Sorry Geet.. But what happened?
Geet- All this is because of you.. You destroyed me Maan. How could you? I hate you. thank god i'm free from you. And leaves him in shock
Maan- What did I do? WHAT? He looks at her in anger.. I know these girl.. now I know why she did come so close to me.
Geet goes and stands next to Taani and are behaving like everything is fine.
Maan comes their and stands next to Geet.  Jenni asks Jay who is Geet and he points to her.
Jenni comes and is about to hug Geet when she back out and gives her a strange look.
Jenni- Hi I'm jenni
Geet- so?
Jenni was taken back with her words. She looks at Maan who was getting mad at Geet. Maan comes there and holds Jenni by her waist which made Geet mad.
Maan- What happened jenni?
Jenni- Nothing, you haven't introduce me yet to Geet?
Geet- Listen Jenni.. I don't know you.. I don't want to have contacts with wrong people
Jenni- But you are Maan's girlfriend right?
Maan- Have you lost it?
Geet looks at him and is shocked.
Maan- Please Jenni.. just leave the dust here. We goes and enjoyes ourselfs..
Geet looks at him - dust? and cries..

Taani sees it and starts getting worried for Geet. Anu also looked at them and then saw Geet hurt like this he couldn't stop himself for taking her side, he goes to Maan.
Anu- MAAN!
Maan turns around and looks at him like what happened?
Maan- Ja bro!
Anu- What happened between you and Geet?
Maan- Who ?
Anu was taken back with who
Anu- Who? Maan I'm talking about Geet
Maan- I don't know what happened to her. I think she needed a break from me.
Anu- Geet? Geet needed a break from you? I don't think so. You must have said something to her. I remember how many bad things you said to Sam when you left her! Tell me the truth
Maan eyes goes to Geet who is trying to put medecine on her sctraches.
Maan- Woh anu bro , what happened to her arm?
Anu- You don't know? She had a accident that day when you left for London.
Maan was shocked of hearing that. Accident? His Geet had a accident? No
Now anu didn't get a thing of what happened between them.
Maan was about to go to Geet when Anu stops him and nods a no for him.
Anu- I will try to talk to her first! ok
Maan- Please Anu asks her what happened to her, why she is changed so much? My Geet wasn't like this and looks down is embarresed.

Precap- Anu knows why she is angry and Geet will never forgive Maan now!

Edited by SaVni - 03 March 2011 at 4:07am

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
oh teri ye kya keh diya maan ne gussey mein.................its going to b hard for him to manofy geet now.............oh pl yaar baat ko aur mat bigadna................

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged

u said that  MU will be solved soon,

but now it seems like it will last for few updates,

nd it will be hard for maan to manofy her now!!!!

wonderful update........loved it!!!!!

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