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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 50)

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
awesome update...pls continue..!!!

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lol next part will be funny

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 4:51am | IP Logged
awesome part
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 5:45am | IP Logged
thats great.. cant wait to read maan's reaction ROFL

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
hey...kool yaar...u also updating...!!!

jaldiiiii......m so happy...u guyzzz are updating...!!!

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hey u updating then plz do fast as im waitinggggggg

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Part 16:

Maan hugs Geet from the back and Taani and anu leaves them alone..

Maan- Happy?
Geet- Maan.. yeh kya
Maan- I think you are right.. We should tell everyone about us.. but first of all I want to talk with mom about you..
Geet- ok... and hugs him and places a soft kiss on his cheack..
Maan also places a soft kiss on her cheack..

Maan- Once again.. Happy birthday..

Geet hugs Maan again.. and they goes back and sleeps in their telt..

Next day it started to rain and all was half awake and runed to the car..

Maan- See you guys at home hurry up.. They packed their things and left for farmhouse.. Geet comes out from the car and goes with Taani into her room.. Anu and Maan looks at them and don't care what they are doing..

Taani- I have to give you something
Geet- Kya dena hai?
Taani - yeh lo
Taani gives Geet a condom packet

Geet- Taani?
Taani- Trust me.. You can need them..
Geet- Mein inka kya karo?
Taani- Ask Maan
Geet- ok.. and is about to go out when Maan is standing outside her room..

Geet- kya hua?
Maan- Taani anu is calling you downstairs..
Taani- ok .. i'm going you both can be alone now hehe.. and winks to Geet..

Maan goes inside and looks at Geet who is holding a packet..

Maan- Geet.. What are you holding?
Geet- Woh Taani gave me them.. iss ka mein kya karo Maan? and shows the condom packet to him..
Maan takes them - YEh Taani ne diya hai? Aur tumne le liya?
Geet- Usne hath mein hi deh diya..
Maan- Ok.. We don't need this kind of stuff. alright
Geet- ok

Maan- Geet, have you heard anything from your dad?
Geet stops don't answer him..
Maan- Geet?

Geet- Maan please, don't talk about my dad today..
Maan- oh ok.. sorry.. and hugs her.. I didn't wanted to hurt you.. I tought that maybe he had wished you Happy birthday or something..

Everybody called Geet but still her dad hasen't called yet..

All day Geet let the boys to do what ever they wanted.. And the sat and played PS2.. While Meera, Taani and Geet was cooking food for them.. suddenly her phone rang and she answered it..

Geet- Hello
*-----
Geet- Hello ?Kaun hai?
*-----
Suddenly somebody started to breath heavly and Geet know who had called her.
Geet- DAD?
Dad- How does my bacha know me so well?
Geet- Dad..OMG.. dad and started to cry
Merra and Taani looked at her
Dad- Happy birthday Geet..
Geet- Dad i'm so sorry.. I miss you alot.. please dad i'm so sorry
Dad- Geet.. I also miss you alot.. Since that day I trowed you out I feel so lonley.. Everybody has their child to talk with but today I feel so lonly when I don't have my child with me..

Geet- Dad .. I also miss you.. You are everything to me..
Dad- Geet I have to tell you something.. before I can't say it..
Geet- Ji dad
Dad- Where are you?
Geet- Woh dad.. we are at camping why?
Dad- Geet I just want to say one thing.. Your mom is alive..

Geet- WHAT? she screams...

Suddenly it's so quit on the otherside line..

Geet- Dad.. .Dad...

Geet cuts the call and calls Bua who don't eithar answer.. Taani and Meera tried to console her but it dosen't work.. the boys comes into the kitchen and sees Geet like that.. Jay cheacks her puls and everything and says that it's normal..

MAan- What happend? Meera? Taani?
Meera- Woh Maan.. Mama ji called Geet.. And suddenly she became like that..

Taani's phone rang and she answered and got a shock and droped her phone..

Anu- Taani! kya hua?
Taani- Mamaji is in hospital.. Taking his last breath..

Maan- WHAT?
Everybody started to pack their bags and drived back home to the hospital..

Pia called Maan to cheack if everything is ok..

Pia- Hello Maan.. How are everything.. are you guys enjoying..?
Maan- Mom . woh we are coming back home
Pia- Why?
Maan- Woh Geet's dad is in hospital and she got a shock of this..
Pia- Kya? and also dropes the phone..

She rushed to the hospital but Maan and the gang had already reached their..

Everybody rushed their.. Pia also comes rushing..

Pia- Moti bhen.. kaise hai woh?

Everykid looked up to Pia and didn't get anything..

Geet raised her self and goes to her bua

Geet- Bua , where is my mom?
Bua and Pia is shocked to hear it
Bua- Kya matlab Geet?
Geet- Don't lie to me.. Dad told me that mom is alive.. where is she? Tell me
Bua- Woh Geet..

Pia- I'm your mom Geet.. and looks down

Maan/Jay/Anu was shocked of hearing it.. They didn't know that their gurdian urf mama had a daughter.. she never named her..

Maan- mom.. Geet ap ki beti hai?

Precap- Doc- He is very critical we are trying our best!

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