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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 5)

sanjulee Goldie

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 6:54am | IP Logged
its looks nice...
nice intro...
add me in the PM list...
& update soon...

Edited by sanjulee - 22 December 2010 at 6:55am

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SaVni Goldie

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 7:00am | IP Logged

Big smileEmbarrassedPart 1:

It was 12am and Taani was in her room and crying.. She missed her home.. Today after such a long time she wanted to go home..

Geet knocks the door and is total drunk.. Taani opens the door and sees her like that and take a deep breath and gives her a angry smile..

Geet - So..Sorry and still drunk..

Geet looks at her and sees that she has been crying..

Geet- Roh rai thi? Main yaha nhi thi iss liye?
Taani- Tere liye kaun roh raha hai? And is trying to change her clothes..

The phone started to rang and Geet answer..

Geet- Ha.. Hallo ...
Bua- Geet tere awaz ko kya hua hai
Geet- K.. Kaun? and is sleeping
Bua- Batemeez.. Mein teri bua bol rahi ho.. Besharam
Geet- Buaaaaaa! And started to scream

Geet throws the phone to Taani and runs to the room and Taani looks at the phone..

Taani- Namaste mama!
Bua- Yeh Geet ko kya hua hai?
Taani- ehh woh... mama... eh.
Bua- Drink kiya hai usne?
Taani- Nehi... bilkul nhi..
Bua- Janti ho usko... Iss liye to kuch nhi kaho gi usko
Taani- Mama... Waise ghar mein sabh kaise hai? I really miss you guys
Bua- Ghar mein sabh thik hai.. To tum dono wapis kyo nhi ate?
Taani- Yeh Geet agar ana chahti hai tabhi to
Bua- Usko koi na koi bahana btao do...
Taani- Ok and smiles
Bua- Bye ... Phone kar ke btana
Taani- Thik hai.... Wait..
Bua- Kya hua?
Taani- Di kaisi hai?
Bua- Mat pocho.. mujhe uski chinta rehti hai
Taani- Ok.. bye

Taani is thinking how her sister has turned mental but on this topic Geet is more intrested.. Both want to know what happend that she is not normal anymore..

Taani- Geet? and start looking after for her... Yeh kidhar gae hai...

She looks into all rooms and don't find her.. Then she goes to the terrace and sees her sitting their with a bottle in her hand..

Taani- Are Geet bas kar.. aur kitna phi gi?
Geet- Aaj pino do.. aaj mein bohot khush ho
Taani- Woh bhi kis waja se? and looked at her
Geet- Kal hamare results ae ge na
Taani- really? Kisne btaya?
Geet- Geet Handa ho mein thik hai..
Taani takes the bottle from Geet and takes her to her room... She makes Geet change into night suit and sleeps next to her..

Next morning Taani and Geet wakes up late..

Taani - shitt.. Late and on the last day.. Wake up!
Geet- Acha baba... Geet sits up and holds her head
Taani- Abh Queen Elisabeth ko kya hua hai?
Geet- I'm having a headache
Taani- Btw. Kal maza aya?
Geet- Kabh?
Taani- Mama ka phone jab aya tha

Geet looks at her and then looks down.. she takes a pillow and throws it on her. Taani started to laugh and runs into the washroom.

Geet phone started to call and she looks at the number

Geet- Armaan?

Geet- Hello? .... Whaat? When? Sure will be there.. Haa baba.. Taani will also come .. See you.. bye

Taani comes out and see Geet smiling..

Taani- Kis ka phone tha? and start to get ready...
Geet- Armaan ka tha.. He is getting married next week on saturday
Taani- Really? He finally accepted Ridzi?
Geet- Of course..
Taani- Chal ja .. get ready.. I want to know the results
Geet- Results ... Wohi hoe ge na.. jo hamesha se hote ae hai
Taani- Kya pata? Geet tumhare results ki zada fiqr hai
Geet- Acha.. phir tum fiqr hi karti raho ..

Taani push her inside the washroom and waits for Geet.. After 15 mints she comes out.. And takes out her skirt and shirt. After 40 mints get was ready to go and Taani was getting angry on her.

Both reach the school and runs to the board where everyone was around.

The principal sees them and goes to them

Pr- Geet and Taani

Both looks back and looks at him
Geet- Yes sir.

Schools principal is a young guy who likes Geet and that's why he always is around her.. And is teacher to Taani also

Pr- I wanted to say that you both have toped this year also..

Taani didn't like at him but Geet could do anything to top the school only for her dad.

But today Geet was also not in mood of talking to him..

Geet- Oh.. That's nice.. But we have to go now..
Taani looks at her and then on the principal and gives a small smile.

Geet- Dekha kaha tha.. Hamesha jo result hote hai wohi hai..

1girl- Taani.. Congrats for beating Geet this year

Taani looks at Geet and Geet at the girl

1girl- Geet you come second this year that's nice .. letting your sister to reach 1st..

Geet- I don't care who of us is toping right Taani?
taani- Right.. Waise bhi did you pass?

1girl- No.. I didn't came last months so ..

Geet- Ohh.. That's bad.. Well see you..

Geet goes and taani looks at her behaviour

She takes her hand and drags her little bit side

Taani- Tumhe aaj kya hua hai? And is worried

Precap- Armaan wants that his friends should learn dance from Geet.

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Edited by SaVni - 25 December 2010 at 3:17pm

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 7:10am | IP Logged
loved it........gr8 part

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SahSah IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 7:20am | IP Logged
nice update

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..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 7:20am | IP Logged
wow geet and taani topped
i think geet drinks to forget meera

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Awesome yaar
Please continue soon
Love you!

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 7:30am | IP Logged

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 8:34am | IP Logged
nice one...

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