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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 41)

preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
loved ur ff................can u pl add me to ur pm list and cant wait to c when geet confess her love to maan...................

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SaVni Goldie

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged

Part 14:

After 15 mints the boys are already down and are sitting and waiting for the girls for come down..

Jay- Are clock is only What guys should we do?
Maan- Patha nhi..
Anu- Hey.. I have my PS2 with me.. We can sit and play that later.. What's say coke and game?
Jay&Maan- anu yaar... so smart you are
Maan- But girls will not like it na
Anu- We will play when they go to sleep ok? But I have to be with Taani before that
Maan&Jay- oye hoye... and stops because girls comes downstairs..

All 3 boys takes each sofa and sits on it.. Taani goes and sits next to Anu and don't let Meera sit next to them.. Geet sits next to Maan and Meera sits next to Jay..

Geet- so.. what's the plan?
MAan- Don't know..
Taani- hey.. let's go swimming? or we can build a tent outisde?
Jay- We can build a telt outside the water.. SO we can go swim today?
Geet- You are a geniue Taani and goes and hugs her..

All goes upstairs and bags their swimsuits and Geet is waiting for Maan.. Meera, Taani, Jay and Anu leaves and Geet is waiting for Maan.. She knocks the door but he dosen't open it..

Geet- Maaan!!! and goes in to his room..

There Mr. Maan Singh Khurana is sitting and cheacking his mails..

Geet- Maan everybody has left and I'm waiting for you

Maan tought that maybe this is the best time to make Geet confess..

Geet poke Maan's shoulder.

Maan- Geet and stands up.. All left? And is acting
Geet Yes.. mr.khudos all left!!! and makes a angry face
Maan- Why are you angry? and is smiling
Geet- Ey lo.. hai babaji.. inko thori aur akal di hoti na aur mujhe kiya chai tha
Maan- Kya matlab? Acha itni bate math karo .. chalo we are late.. and goes out from his room
Geet goes after him..

Maan- We are late because of you Geet.. and hurries from the stairs
Geet- My fault??? Maan.. and runs after him.. She takes the last step and don't find Maan..

Maan comes from the behind and drags her to the corner and holds her one arm..

Geet- Maan yeh kya kar rahe ho? Please choro
Maan- Say sorry first
Geet- Are you nuts? Main aur sorry? huh never

Maan drags her more closer and Geet started to breath faster

Geet- Maan... yeh aap kya kar rahe ho
Maan- Geet... I wanted to tell you something..

Geet looks into his eyes and both have a eyelock

Geet- Kya Maan?
Maan takes his hand to her chin and rest his head on her head- I...
Geet- closes her eyes
Maan- I ... Love you Geet

Geet opens her eyes and looks at him, a small smile comes on her face and tears are starting to build in her eyes..

Geet hugs Maan- Maan.. I Love you to

Both frees each other from the hug and Maan is about to kiss Geet when the phone rings.

Maan- mom ka hai
- Hello
Pia- Hello Maan.. Anu tumhare saath hai?
Maan- No mom.. woh to Jay ke saath hai..
Pia- ok.. I will call him..

Under the time Maan is on the phone she goes from their and runs out to the car.. She is blushing and smiling that Maan loves her but suddenly she get's angry on him..

Geet- ahahhhh maaan!!!

Maan- ok mom.. see you
- Geet chale? and turns around and sees no Geet..

He goes out to the car and sees her standing their and is angry.. He also goes in a style to her..

Maan- Kya hua? Ghubare ke tara kyo pholi ho?
Geet- Maan , tumne sabh kuch kharab kar diya
Maan- Abh mene kya kiya?
Geet- You know mene socha tha.. ke tum mujhe bohot romantic tarike se propose karo ge.. but uff!!
Maan- To yeh romantic nhi tha?
Geet keeps quit

Maan thinks* I have to make a surprise again for her, and this time with a ring also*

MAan- Geet be happy
Geet- thik hai.. But we will tell everyone ok?
Maan- what?
Geet- yes.. or else see.. they will not let us be once togheter
Maan- Are you so desperate to be with me? and looks at her
Geet smiles - Maan.. you are taking it wrong

Maan- Joking.. see we have reached.. and smiles at her.. But both's smile vanish because their both couples are standing and are fighting..

Maan and Geet comes and all 4 looks at them.. Maan and Geet are looking at each other then on them.. Anus phone rang and its mom..

Anu- Shut up guys.. It's mom
- Hello mom
Pia- Hi anu.. kaise ho. how is it going?
Anu- Everything is fine and you.. How are you?
Pia- I'm fine.. Anu.. Taani's mom came home today
Anu- Really? What did she say?

Everybody looks at him as who is he talking about

Pia- We have talked about you guys marriage.. So i'm going to fix a date.. You can tell Taani that she is a member of the house now. Ok have to go.. late for office today =)
Anu- Mooomm!!!! You are the best and hangs up.. Taaaannnniiiii!!!! and hugs her.. Everbody looks down and is smiling at his behaviour..

Taani- Anu.. yeh kya kar rahe ho?
Anu- No one can stop us for being togheter now! Mom called.. she said that they are going to fix a date for out marriage.. Can you imagine.. we are getting married =) and hugs her more..

Geet looks at Maan and Maan looks at her.. He know exacly what she wants now... He can see it in her eyes..

Precap- Geet- Make them stop Maan! They are not married yet! Maan- Geet I can't stop them now.. ohoh Iram wonders what is going to happend =)

I'm going to uptade this one regulary and Destroy in love on weekends :D Embarrassed
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Edited by SaVni - 08 February 2011 at 7:22am

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preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
nice update..............maan ne aise hi love u keh diya def need some surprise from maan for geet............

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
lovely update yaarClap

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged

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puth IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
awesome update savni.....
finally geet and maan confessed....
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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
loved it yaar...awsome one !!! wanna know geet's truth soon yaar..precap sounds !!

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cyum321 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
that was good but where was the shock of pia n bua's meeting???

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