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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 37)

bluedreamz953 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Wow...awesome part yaar

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ambbiha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 11:38am | IP Logged
nice part
waiting 4 camping

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SaVni Goldie

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 11:45am | IP Logged

Part 13:

Next day everybody is happy for they are going to camping.. Meera comes her own car because 6 people can't come in Maan's car..

Meera- Waise bhi Maan.. It will me more fun with 2 cars
Maan- Woh kaise?
Meera- We can race? What's say?
Maan- Sure.. nice .. i'm in on it.. Who are going in my car?

Jay,Taani and Anu nods a no and Geet is still in the house.. she took coffee for both her and Maan for rest loves tea.

Geet comes out and sees that everone is going to Meera's car and Maan looks at her.. Geet goes to Meera's car to give tea to them, Maan got angry and sits in his car and starts it.. He tought that Geet also will go and sit with them..

Geet- Are Maan.. WAIT!!
Maan looks at her in shock.. Her voice sounded so sweet when she tried to yell at him.
Maan- What? In stirn voice
Geet- Are gussa kyo ho rahe ho.. Main chai hi deh rahi ho.. aur abh aye gaye
Maan felt shamed becuase he tought that Geet didn't wanted to sit with him..
Geet sits next to him and the cars starts and they leaves...

Pia is waiting for the lady who did call her last night.. She tought she just go and fresh up maybe she will come..

Pia goes for fresh-up and Bua comes..

Nakuk opens the door and make Bua comes in and sit.. Nakul tells Pia that her guest are here and she comes down.. Pia comes down and still don't sees Bua face.. She is having her back to her..

Pia- Hello
Bua- Hello and turns around..

Pias eyes wided and is shocked to see moti ben..
Pia- Mote ben aap?
Bua- Pia tum?

Both feelt like 360 degrees had just turned and they still was in shock.. Pia was happy to see her after such a long time. 19 years.. Pia hugs her and started to cry.. Bua was also happy and both sits down..

Pia- Aap yaha kaise? Aap Geet ko lene aye hai?
Bua- Geet ko? Geet yaha to nhi hai, patha nhi wo kaha hai
Pia- Moti ben , Geet to yaha hi rehthi hai.. Kaam mangne aye thi paar mene isse iss ghar mein rehne diya..
Bua- matlab Geet thik hai, chalo shukar hai woh thik hai, warna hume to chitna lagi thi
Pia- Waise aap yaha kaise? aap hi woh phone
Bua- haa.. woh mein Anurag ke bare mein tumse baat karni thi
Pia- Ji, abh anu ne kya kar diya , yeh ladka bhi na
Bua-Nhi koi bori bath nhi thi , woh mein anu ka rishta mangne aye thi
Pia- paar bua , anu to kisi ko pehle se chahta hai
Bua- haa Pia, wo meri hi beti hai Taani. Kal dono shopping mall mein the to anu ne kaha ke woh dono shaadi karna chahte hai
Pia- Kya keh rahi ho aap, yeh to bohot achi baat hai na. Waise Taani ki koi photo hai? Bechari aaj andhar nhi ana chahti thi..

Pia sees it and likes Taani already.. - Thik hai hum date fix karke aap ko btate hai. and bua leaves

Geet is hungry now and Maan hasen't talked with her on 4 hours now..

Geet- Maan
Maan- hmm.. and still driving
Geet- Mujhe bhok laghi hai
Maan- Geet 1 hour intezaar kar lo..
Geet- Tum itne chup kyo ho?
Maan- Nhi kuch nhi. woh mein drive kar raha ho na, iss liye and looks at her
Geet- Woh age dekho and smiles
Maan- GEET!, and smiles after

Meera horns and ask if they should start their race as it is only 1 hour left to reach so they can reach little bith early?
Both cars stop and Meera looks at Maan and Maan looks at Meera and both nods and the cars starts..

They reach their on 30mints.. and everybody was laughing exept Jay, he was getting headache but didn't told them.. Everybody goes inside the farmhouse and looks where they should sleep.. It is 8 room in this house

Geet- Mujhe to apna room chai hai
Maan- Same here
Meera- Ok fine.. Aise karte hai.. ke we all take one room ok?
Jay- smart girl, he said sarcastic
Meear made a cute angry face and all went to their room..

Meera- Ok .. We all will meet downside about 30 mints
Jay- 15 mints.. why 30?
Taani- cause we need time to fix up?
Anu- oy hello.. We are just going to meet downstairs
Geet- To kya hua.. We want to come down looking nice and all that
Maan- But you are always looking nice however you comes

Everybody is looking at each other..

First Maan goes in to his room , then Geet , then Anu , Then Taani , Then Meera and last but not least Jay..

Precap- Anu get's a call from his mother and get's happy to know that he is getting married =) + confession

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
yayy another partDancing
gr8 part.......loved it
aww loved bua & pia'z reunion
cnt w8 4 confession now
cont soon Xx... ClapStarHug

Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 05 February 2011 at 12:03pm

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Tishuu Goldie

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
res 2
that was fun fun fun....hehehehehehe bechara maan thinking HIS geet will ditch him too!!!!!
and the race - wah wah
and ooooo cant wait for the precap to happen!!!!!!
heheheheheheheheheehhe i wonder how Geet's dad will take the news that Geet is living with Pia- hahhahahahahaha hmmmmmmmm but like i wonder why bua didnt ask her more questions as to where she was all this comes she is anu's mum??? blah blah
but yhh
ooooooooooo do do update wah re wah - erm...............can we get more???? i knw im being greedy!!!!

Edited by Tishuu - 05 February 2011 at 12:10pm

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
wonderful update
but the precap
interesting pls
cont soonnnnnnnnn
thanks pm

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puth IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
lovely update dear

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gangesegb IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
wow!wonderful updates....
loved it...
do cont soon.....

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