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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 35)

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
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PArt 12:

Geet is so happy that Maan changed his decision for going for camping.. She calls Taani but her nr is busy

Geet- Lagta hai Anu phone par hai.. hehe dumbo..

Then she calls Meera and she answer her phone in 1 bell..
Geet- wow.. di.. ek hi bar mein apne phone pick kar liya? Kya baath hia?
Meera - Are Geet.. tu bhi na.. mujhe chor.. aur kis khusi mein phone kiya hai
Geet- Yeh kehne ke liye ke aap log apne apne bags tiyar rakho.. We are going for camping baby! hahaha
Meera- Really.. But Geet what should I pack?
Geet- Di that you wear.. your shorts and all that
Meera is about to say that she don't want to take them with her.. but says ok she will start packing..

Geet is in her room and is going trough her wardrobe.. Maan comes in and is in tension and Geet saw that

Geet- Maan kya hua?
Maan- Kuch nhi.. Geet.. I don't know what to pack for camping
Geet- Don't worry.. I can pack for you.. But I will not pack any of your office suits
Maan- kyo? ek bhi nhi?
Geet- no no mister.. agar office suit hi le kar jane hai.. to woh raha darwaza aur woh rahi apki car.. aap office hi chale jao
Maan- ok baba.. sorry.. itna gussa to mat ho.. Geet tum to typical wify ke tarah ho patha hai tumhe
Geet- Kya hua agar mein wify nhi ho... huh ho to jao .. and stops..

Maan looks at her and smiles and goes out from her room
Geet- Geet yeh tu kya kehne ja rahi hai? Controle your feelings
and goes after him..

HE takes out all his dresses and Geet is helping him with packing.. Maan is still smiling about what Geet was going to say to him..

MAan- Iss ka matlab Geet loves me.. hmm.. Maan singh khurana ab to tumhe kuch karna chai hai.. Confess to yehi pehle kari gi and looks at her..
Geet knows that Maan is looking at her and stops at once..

Maan- Kya hua?
Geet- Kya hai?
Maan- huh?
Geet- haa kya hai? Mujhe kyo dekh rahe ho bar bar?
Maan- Geet mein tumhe thori na dekh raha tha..
Geet- acha? To kis ko dekh rahe the
Maan looks behind her - Mein to apne phone ko dekh raha tha
Geet turns around and sees his phone on the dressing table - ok ok..

Jay's feelings for Meera is growing more and more day by day.. But now he want to tell her.. - Mujhe Anu se tips lena chai hai, paar anu kabh ghar ae gha

Taani and Anu are going around in the mall and Taani sees her mom coming infront.. Bua sees her with anu.. and is not shocked at all..

Taani- Anu .. jaldi karo..
Anu- Kya hua Taani?
Taani- ssssh..

Bua- Taani!
Taani- mom? DAMNT!!!!
Taani turns around and is looking down.. Bua is acting like she is very angry on Taani going around with a boy..(Taani haven't told about anu yet)

Bua- TAANI! yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?
Taani- Woh.. mom aap yaha kaise?
Bua- tum ne to kaha tha ke tum apni friend ke ghar ja rahi ho.. aur yeh to?
Taani looks at Anu then on her mom
Bua- Yeh to bohot.. cute hai
Taani and Anu looks up and then on each other

Both- Ji?

Bua- Taani tumhe kya laghta hai, mujhe patha nhi tha ke tumhare paas ek boyfriend hai
Taani- moom
Anu- Are Taani.. tumhari mom kitna open minded hai..
Taani- ohh anu you to.. Mom please..
Anu- Taani.. rehne do na.. Waise Aunty.. I really love Taani..
Taani looks at him in shock
Anu- Aunty I want to marry Taani
Taani looks down and is shying.. and Bua looks at her..

Bua- ohh ho.. To baat shaadi thak pounch gaye? hehe.. beta don't worry.. I will talk with your mom..
Anu- Thanks and hugs her..
Taani- ok ab hum chale.. mom see you later
Bua- bete.. apna ghar ka nr do de do..
Anu- Ji aunty.. and gives it..

Bua goes home and dials the nr and Pia answer it..

Pia- Khurana house
Bua- Hello.. I want to talk with Anurag's mom
Pia- Yes it is me
Bua- Oh.. hello.. umm.. I wanted to ask you if we can meet somewhere.. cause I need to tell you something
Pia- ok fine.. btw who are you
Bua- Myself Anchal when can we meet
Pia- Tomorrow i'm free.. At my house?
Bua- Ok.

Precap- Kids leaving, Bua and Pia shocked

Sorry for a short one ,, I'm going to uptade regulary now because then I can have time to post it :d Thanks for all loving commments
More coming = )

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Nice part!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Haye geet nearly said she was going to be his wife soon so cute and maan smiling and glancing realising that geet loves him sk sweet and haha Jai falling for meera bu needs tips and love bua but she will be in for a shock when she sees pia anyways great update and can't wait to read more Smile

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
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