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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 31)

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great part....loved cont soon.....

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thats gg to be fun they accept their feeling towards eachother

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awesome update...maan taking care of geet...!!! maan pls don cancel holiday trip ...m really looking forward to that...!!!

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LOVELY UPDATE..................

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Part 11:

Pia- ohoh.. what is happening? Maan in kitchen?
Maan- Woh mom.. Geet is sick
Pia- What?
Maan- can you make soup I'll go and change my clothes.. and runs to his room..

Soup started to boil and Maan had changed his clothes quick.. Maan takes the soup and goes to Geet's room.. Pia also follows him.. Geet wakes up and feels like she is not well.. and in same time she is shocked to see Maan with soup in his hand and mom next to him..He is not sure that they should go for holiday when Geet is sick

Geet- Mom , Maan.. aap log kya kar rahe ho?
Maan- Geet soup pe loon, in his sweet voice
Geet- Paar kyo? Mein to bilkul thik ho na?
Pia- Geet tumhe bukhar hai.. Please Maan ki bath sun lo
Geet- Le... mom aap bhi na and takes the bowl from his hand..
Maan- Mein pelatha ho na
Geet- No thanks.. And is angry with him..

Geet drinks the soup in 5 mints and both are shocked that she drank that so fast..
Pia get's a call from the office and leaves.. Geet is looking at Maan who is still looking at her.. with sad eyes

Geet- Maan.. kya hua? btw hum holidays par kabh ja rahe hai?
Maan- I don't think ke hume holiday paar jana chai hai
Geet- KYYOOO?? and screams
Maan- Geet, look at you.. you are sick.. and still want to go for holidays..
Geet- Paar Maan.. Mein kal tak theek ho jao gi na
Maan- Thik hai.. Kal agar thik ho gaye na..phir dekhe ge
Geet- Ok... and gave him sad baby face
Maan- Don't try this on me and wink to her..

Maan stood up and kissed her forhead and Geet's eyes wided.. Maan is thinking why he did that..
Geet- What the hell was that?
Maan- I don't know.. I just felt like you will get better! in his stirn voice
Geet- Acha baba Maan Singh Khurana.. You can stop talking rudely with me! and acts as him
Maan- Acha .. tum pehle jaldi se thik ho jao.. phir dekhte hai..

Anu and Taani are sitting in a cafe and are talking about how their wedding should be..

Anu- Taani.. tumhari list to bohot lambi ho.. thori choti to karo
Taani- Anu..please.. mein apni list nhi kam karne wali.. aur waise bhi I think you are not intressed in getting married with me
Anu- No baby.. it's not that I don't want to get married with you.. bas tumhari list hi itni lambhi hai ke mujhe tension ho rahi hai
Taani- ok fine baba.. I will make it shorted
Anu- Waise are you reading for camping?
Taani- Yaa..her phone rings and it is bua

Bua- Taani come home soon.. We are planning some things that you both can take with you
Taani- Ok mama. i'm coming

Taani- Please drop me
Anu- As always it is me who will drop you..

Jay is getting uncomfartable with Meera day by day.. Sometimes he thinks that she is wearing such clothes for tease him.. But no she is wearing it for herself.. Her short dresses and all that.. But today he couldn't stand her more

Meera looked up at him - Kya hua jay?
Jay- Please go and change your clothes..

Meera tought that maybe he can't controle himself and goes closer to him.. Jay stands up and push her away..

Jay- I said na .. Go and change.. I don't like that you are wearing
Meera- You don't like these kind of dresses? and looked at him in shock =)
Jay- No.. I rather prefer simple girls.. Not mini-skirt types.
Meera- Ohh.. I will go and change..

Meera goes and takes out a pink anarkali and wears it.. She changes her make-up and goes infront of him..

Jay- See now you look more beautiful... and bits his toungh...
Meera blushed..
Jay wonders why she is blushing like he has said that many times but this time it seems to be diffrent .. He also got a smile on his face..

Geet was sleeping all day and wanted to get well soon so they can go for holiday because she wanted to confess to him but was not sure if she is ready to confess..

Geet is much better now and Maan still thinks that htey should not go for holidays yet.. But she is Geet she will never listen to him.. Geet is sitting and is eating a orange when Maan looks at her.. Geet knows him very well and knows that he will do anything for cancel the trip..Maan goes to her to talk to her last time if he dosen't agree then he have to cancel it..

Maan- eh.. Geet..
She looks at him and gives him an angry look
Maan murmes- Lagta hai ke abh to jana hi padega.. Warna iss ne to pure ghar ko upar-neche kar dena hai

Geet- Kya hai? In angry voice
Maan- Woh tum bhabs ko keh do ke packing start kar le
Geet- bhabs? yeh kaun hai ?
Maan- Taani, apni behno ko keh do packing kar le
Geet- SAchi?'We are going and stands up and are clapping
Maan- iss pagal ladki ka mien kya karo?

Precap- Geet helping Maan with packing

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