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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 21)

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Awesome part... loved it

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged
awsome.cant wait to maaneet.
do continue plz

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged
Nice part
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
nice part

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
nice nok jhok
i lovee

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
awesome updateeeeee luved itttttt
anu n tanni r sooooo cute
n precap is funnnn

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged

Part 8:

Anu- You will see it with time and goes from their..
Geet- Mom mera room kaha hai?
Pia- Mom?

Geet realised what she said - I'm sorry.. woh anu ne kaha to mere mo se bhi wohi nikla
Pia- You can call me mom.. waise you do that.. kyo ke you are my daughter right?
Geet- Really? and hugs her.. Thank you mom

Pia- your room is on upstairs 2nd door to left..
Geet- Ok.. I will go and fresh up and then come for dinner
Pia -Ok

Geet takes her luggage and goes to her room... She puts her cloths in a nice way and fix her bed.. and everything..

Maan is in his room and thinks that he want to change room becuase his room is to cold .. and goes to the room next

Geet is changing in her room and is wearing her bra when Maan enter her room..

Geet takes her kameez and wear it. Maan at the same time looks at her waist

Maan- Nice figure
Geet- You.. What the hell!!!
Maan comes out from his thinking and sees that she is the same girl from the airport
Maan- Oye jungly billi what are you doing in my house?
Geet- You.. and realised that she is going to live with this animal
Geet- Tumse matlab?
Maan- Mere ghar mein mujhe hi dhamki?
Geet- Tumhe pata nhi ke kisi ke kamre mein ane se pehle knock karte hai .. like this and shows him how to knock
Maan- oye.. I didn't you that you were in this room.. warna mein knock hi kartha.. Waise have you lost weight?
Geet- WHAT?
Maan- I remember that.. last time tum bohot moti thi
Geet- KYA? Dekho mera kyo mood nhi hai tumhe fight karne ka..
Maan- nhi see.. tumhara waist kitna kaam hai and legs... where is all your skirts and all that
Geet- YOU.. this is india not england..

Anu goes inside the room of hearing noices.. and sees them fighting

anu- Well tum dono bad mein ladna.. Geet mom tumhe neche bola rahi hai..
Geet- mom ko kaho ke mein abhi ae
Maan- Oye meri mom ko apni mom na bolao
Geet- oye! Mom ne khud ka mein unko mom bola sakti ho
Maan- Acha.. Aaj meri mom ko apni mom keh rahi ho kal ko tum sabhko meri biwi kaho gi
Geet- Patha nhi! and teased him..
Anu laughed at Geet answer..

Anu- Well aren't she good Maan? and goes after Geet
Geet and Anu walks down togheter and both were laughing..

Pia asked what happend and Geet told her everything and she also laughed with her.. Maan comes down and gives a kiss to her mom and then shows Geet that she is dead!

Geet is still laughing at him.. While eating Maan stamps on Geet's foot..
Geet- ahh in low voice
Maan- laghi? whispered back as he didn't wanted everybody to know what they were doing
Geet- noded a no
Maan does that again but little harder and Geet did it back.. They both didn't eat their food and Pia looked at them..

Pia whispered to Anu

Pia- Don't you think they are cute togheter?
Anu- Mom! don't say that to him.. but when he looked he also find them very good togheter..
Pia- Trust me.. the way they are fighting they will fall in love with each other
Anu- I also think so..
Jay- I will give my vote to Geet instead of Sameera.

All 3 started to laugh and Geet and Maan still didn't react on their laugh..

Geet- STOP IT!!!!

Pia- Kya hua Geet?
Geet- mom, Maan is stepping on my foot
Maan- Only me? huh? no she is lying
Pia- Both of you stop it! btw Geet you didn't tell me anything of your family or something
Geet- oh yes.. umm.. I have a dad , bua and her 2 daughters
Pia- I know that
All 4 was shocked that how does she knows that
Geet- Aap ko kaise patha?
Pia- woh.. tumne abhi btaya na iss liye hehe
Geet- ohh acha hehe.. well aur I have studies in London.. and now i'm back to India.. was looking for a job and you gave me that..
Pia- I think you deserve a much better job.. I would like to ask you if you want to work with us in our company?
Geet- Ji main?
Pia- You can be Maans secretary..
Geet- Iss ki? and pointed at him..
Maan- eyy.. apni finger neche..
Geet- hey..
Maan- awaz neche!
Pia- Maan yeh kaha se sikha hai?
Maan- Action Repplay.. Their you know mom akki says Awas neche to everyone .... And she talks very much..
Pia- you two keep fighting as tomorrow I ahve to go to office and I have to get my sleep..

Pia leaves from their.. Jay and Anu also goes and Geet and Maan are cleaning the dinner table..

Geet- Don't come to my room in the night also.
Maan- What?
Geet- Like before you came from no where..
Maan- I don't think that I will come into your room.. I think you will come into my room.. You are that horriable do you know that?
Geet- Really? Then what are you doing with me now? I think you like to fight with me don't you?
Maan- Me and fight? uYou are really dumb!
Geet- see.. Well why can't we be friends?
Maan- Friend with you?
Geet- why not?
Maan- hmm.. let me think.. ok.. done..
Geet- Really? and was shocked that he agreed
Maan- But we will have rules alright for each other?
Geet- rules? like?
Maan- I don't know.. But like if we do something wrong then we will make a rule for it
Geet- Done..

Anu&Jay were standing and watching them for the first time talking nicly to each other and smiled and mad a heart with their hands and laughed..

In the night both Maan and Geet couldn't sleep at all Geet made coffee for herself and goes up to the terace she sits their and thinks about her relationship with her dad and then looks up into the sky..

Geet- I miss you mom..

Maan goes also to the terace and sees Geet their..

Maan- Why aren't you sleeping? he is asking with a smile
Geet- What If I ask you the same question? and smiles
Maan- You have a very cute smile
Geet- Thanks.. see you are not that bad ..
Maan- I know that.. But I love to tease every hot girl I meet first time.

Geet looks at him..

Geet- Hot and me? You said that i'm fat and all that? and gave a big smile to him
Maan- hmm.. that cause of your legs seem to be skinny but the fat is total over .. to much

Geet punch him on his arm but instead she gets hurt...

Geet- Damn.. kaise body bnaye hai?
Maan- You liked it? and was surprised that actually someoned liked it..
Geet- yaa... Can I see? and behaved childish
Maan- Actually.. mene apni body kisi ko abhi tak nhi dikai.. paar tum woh pehli ladki ho sakti ho...
Geet- Your girlfrineds must have seen your body? Like you do everything with them right?
Maan- Actually I don't like to show off with my body.. Whenever we do something like that.. I never take off my top..
Geet- Trying to playing hard ? and laughs

Maan again is lost in her smile.. but then wonder why is he liking her smile..

Precap- Meera back to normal

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Wow I am so happy she's now living with them but does this mean Maan and Geet are siblings lol!
Thanks for updating
Love you yaar
Please update soon!

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