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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 19)

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Gr8 part---loved it--Cont soon Xx... Smile Smile

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 6:57am | IP Logged
really loved tht maan finally left tht bi*** sameera
hope geet is a bit happy with her mom

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged

Part 7:

Geet- What the....
Taani- Bye i'm leaving.. and goes from their..

Jay stands up and says that he will leave now for the patient..
Anu- I will also come with you bro and stands up
Maan and Pia looks at him while Pia knows why he is going
Jay- chalo.. au ja..
Both leaves..

Maan- What is happning her?
Pia- Kyo?
Maan- Bro to kabhi bhi kisi ko apne saath kam par nhi le kar jate
Pia- Aisa hi samajhlo..
Maan- What? Ok mom.. I'm going today to office to see what is going on their..
Pia- Paar aaj mein nhi ja rahi to tum kyo ja rahe ho?
Maan- Just to see how it is going their..
Pia- Fine..

While otherside Geet is looking in the newspaper for a job and sees that mrs. Pia needs a housekeeper and will get paid 10 000 rupee/ week..

Geet- That's a good job.. But money hm.. 10 000 x 4 = 40 000.. Wow.. Monthly will be good.. =)

Geet takes the home phone and calls their..

Pia- Hello Pia speaking
Geet- Hello mrs. Pia.. I'm Geet and I saw an add on the newpapaer and saw that you need a housekeeper.. I would like to take that job
Pia was silent little bit and was thinking is it her daughter? but why would she like to work as a housekeeper? It can't be her Geet..
Pia- Sure.. When would you like to come?
Geet- Now as your wish?
Pia- You can come today and see how our house is.. and how you would like to work and all that..
Geet- Thank you.. I'm on my way..

Geet's dad hears that she is going to work as a housekeeper and get's total mad at her..

Geet get ready and is about to leave when her dad stops her.. with his sweet voice she always wanted to hear..

Dad- Geet ek mint rukho..

Bua and Taani sees him like that and wonder what happend to him?

Dad- Kaha ja rahi ho? and claps her head
Geet- Woh mein dad.. eh.. friend ke ghar ja rahi ho..
Dad- To apna bag bhi le jao
Geet- Ji dad? and didn't get what he said..

He takes out her bags with her all stuff

Geet- Dad yeh sabh?
Dad- Get out from my house in stirn voice
Everybody was shocked by this news..

Geet- Paar dad.. what happend? What did I do?
Dad- You will work as a housekeeper.. NEVER!!! I will never accept it.!!! And you are going to ruin my reputation! LEAVE FROM MY HOUSE.. AND STAY THEIR YOU ARE GOING TO WORK...

Geet was crying and didn't know why her father never liked her..
Geet- DAD..

Her father takes her hand and throws her out from the house... Geet is still crying

Geet- Dad please listen , she was screaming and all but her dad didn't listen to her..
Dad- Geet i always know that you will go in your mom's fotsteep.. Well... and throws her out.. and cloes the door on her face..

Geet- abh mein kaha jao gi?

She goes to Khurana mansion and rings at the bell..

Pia opens the door and is shocked to see her daughter infront of her..
Geet- Hi i'm Geet Ha.. and stops right their.. Only Geet
Pia- Geet.. and was total shocked that she had very good talking language.
Geet- You must be mrs. Pia? Right?
Pia- Yes.. mm.. come in.
Geet liked they way she talked to her..
Geet- Well aunty.. I wanted to ask you about one thing
Pia- Yes anything!
Geet- Woh.. I will be honest with you
Pia liked it
Geet- Woh.. my dad has thrown me out from the house.. And I wonder that if I can get I room on rent here? and was looking down
Pia was really angry with hearing what he did to her daughter..
Pia- Yes sure beta.. But you don't need to pay anything.. We say that it's included with the work?

Geet was really happy and hugs her.. - Thank you .. Thank you
Pia was happy to see a smile on her face..
Pia- btw.. you don't need to call me aunty you can call me mom like the other boys does
Geet- You have boys? and was surprised with that
Pia- Ya 3 boys.. or should I say 3 men.. haha
Geet- haha you have really good humor..

Pia - Well today you can rest.. As we don't have much work to do.. As now I will go and cook now or else they all will be shouting..
Geet- Aunty can I come with you? I love to see people when they cook and smiles
Pia- Come... Good then you will get to know where all things are

While Pia and Geet are cooking dinner.. Maan and Anu comes back home from office..

Anu- You go I will come.. he goes and calls Taani

Taani- Hello .. in sad voice
Anu- Kya hua taani are you alright? and started to worry
Taani- Woh.. kuch nhi Anurag.
Anu- Actually I like you more whne you call me Anu instead of Anurag
Taani blushed but she is sad of that Geet is not with her more..
Anu- Taani bta na kya hua?
Taani- Geet..
Anu- Kya hua Geet ko?
Taani- Mamaji throw her out from the house because she wanted to work
Anu- What?
Taani- I know.. He just throw her..
Anu- Don't think so much about it.. I'm sure that Geet will spend time with you
Taani- I know that.. btw tumhara bhai aya hai..
Anu- Oh.. ok.. btw I will call you later.. I'm going to see what mom is doing
Taani- Ok.. btw.. nhi kuch nhi
Anu- Kya hua?
Taani- Why was your brother smiling when he saw me?
Anu- Becuase he knew that you are the girl I love..
Taani- You said to everybody? And was shocked
Anu- I don't hide anything from my family.. Mom notice that but what could I do? =)
Taani- What did she say?
Anu- that your name is nice and she wanted to meet you
Taani- What? But Anu our relationship isn't that deep yet
Anu- I know.. But after 3 months for sure I will show you to my mom
Taani- Really?

bua - Taani!!
Taani- I have to go.. mom is calling .. bye
Anu- Bye.. Love you
Taani- hahah already ? bye

Anu goes to kitchen and is shocked to see Geet standing their.. he rubbes his eyes and then pinch himself..

Geet was aswell shocked of seeing him..
Geet- Anurag?
Anu- Geet?

Pia looks at them

Pia- Do you know each other?
Anu- She is cousine to Taani..
Pia- Oh.. really
Anu- Geet .. tum yaha? Taani told me ke
Geet- oh.. she did.. uske peht mein koi bath nhi rehti hai na..!
Anu- Wher are you staying?
Pia- Anu.. family memebers se aise kuch pochte hai kya?
Anu- family member?
Pia- To aur kya? Geet is now a family member
Anu - Really? that's such a good news.. But mama.. but your younger son maybe will have problem..
Pia- Kyo?
Anu- You will see it with time

precap- Maan and Geet fight

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged
WOWWW  nice to see Maan and Geet fighting.Awesome update.

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Loved the update---Awww loved Geet and pia's bonding---cnt w8 4 maaneets fight LOL Xx... Clap Big smile Big smile Cont soon

Edited by Shayma29 - 15 January 2011 at 7:33am

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 7:35am | IP Logged
how could he just throw her out???????????
sooo mean
omg omg omg cant wait to see the reaction on maan's face
hahahhah loved a bit confused so im gonna read it all again to get a clear head - n then if i have issues i shall knock at ur door Smile

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