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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 16)

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Pls Waiting update soon.

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
wow taani and anu already r so desperate and loved tht maan is going to take interest in business

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
awesomw update...!!

pls continue...!!

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:47pm | IP Logged

Part 6:

Geet and Taani runs to Meera's room and don't find her in her room and start to get worried

All 3 was impressed with him..

Pia- Now you look ready.. Well now i'm going to cook for you and leaves from their..

The door bell rings and Maan opens the door..

Postman- Are Maan baba aap?
Maan- Are uncle.. Kaise hai aap?
Postman- Mein thik ho.. Yeh lo beta.. check for you mom and gives it to him
Maan- Thank you uncle..

And postman leaves.. Maan looks at the name and it stands Handa on it..

Maan- Yeh Handa kaun hai? and is about to open it when his mom takes the post from him..

Pia- Idhar do mujhe..
Maan- Mom isme kya hai?
Pia- Kuch nhi..
Maan- Ok.. and goes from their..

Pia goes to her room and opens the check and this time it wasen't a check in it .. it was a photo.. photo of her daughter..

[PHOTO OF GEET]

Pia- Meri bachi.. Geet.. and hugs the photo

Anu comes in the room and Pia puts the photo aside..

Anu- Mom ... I have to tell you something and hugs her

Pia- Who is she? and smiles

Anu- Kaun? and wonder who she is talking about

Pia- Kaun? The one who has learn you to smile

Anu- Mom.. Ok.. Don't tell anyone specially don't Maan

Pia- Kyo? Maan ko kyo nhi?
Anu- He will not like it..

Pia- Acha naam kya hai uska?
Anu- Taani

Pia- Bohot pyara naam hai..
Anu- I know.. and smiles
Jai- Who are you talking about?
anu- Wo bhai.. the girl you are going to meet .. is Taani's sister Meera
Jai- ohh.. Mom now he is going on Maan's fotsteep.. See he has a friend..
Pia- Friend nhi beta.. Girlfriend
Jai- REally?
Anu- MOOOMM!!!

Maan runs in and wonders what is happening when Anu is about to say something Sameera comes in.

Maan- Sam go and change now! in stirn voice

Sam- Kyo Darling.. isme kaunsi kharabi hai?
Maan- Sam.. you are standing infront of my mom.. I won't tolerate that you are..
Sam- are wearing that kind of clothes.. You have said that to me for last 2 years..
Maan- And you haven't listen to me once..
Sam- But Maan after marriage I won't wear that kind of clothes
Maan- Marriage?

Jai, Anu and Pia are looking at them

Sam- you are going to marry me na? and was looking for a yes
Maan- Are you dumb? Me and marry? Never!
Sam- What? Damn you.. You have ruined all my plans
Anu- I feel bad for you and jai and he smiles

Sam- Why not Maan? I'm hot enough for you? right? and we have done everyhting.. Kya mein kafi nhi ho?

Pia,Jai and Anu was shocked of hearing what she was saying and Maan was getting embarresed..

Maan- Get out!
Sam- what?
Maan- Get OUT! It's over.. Finally i'm free from this animal...
Sam- Maan you will have to pay for this..
Maan- You do whatever you want!
Sam- I will do.. You just watch.. and leaves from their..

Maan- Mom.. I'm so sorry.. I apologize from her.. she is totally mental..
Anu- Finalyy is churail se picha chuta!
Jai- Ya.. Maan you did such a good job..

Pia- Acha chalo.. dinner is ready

Geet and Taani comes back home and shows Bua what she has bought..

At the same time Geet's dad enter and sees Geet like this and she remembers her mom alot..

Dad- GEET!

Geet turns back and looks at him..

Dad- Yeh gandh wagera utao aur apne kamre mein le jao.. This is a house not a shopping mall for you clothes..

Geet was taken back with that words and takes her clothes up and Taani also goes with her up..

Bua- Nikal liye apni bharas?
Dad- Ji hai bikul.. aur kuch?
Bua- Sudhar jao.. ek hi beti hai tumhari..
Dad- Tumhari bhi to 3 hai.. ya bolo thi ab to 2 hi hai
Bua gives him angry look
Bua- Listen bhai.. No one remembers Pihu in this house.. Alright...
Dad- How will someone remember her? Meera ka to mental balance ki wajah..
Bua-- Shut up! It wasen't Pihu's fault.. It was your fault.. Understand.. You are elder in this house.. If you could have accepted from the beginning my daughter would have been alive!
Dad leaves from their..

Geet goes to her room and started to cry..

Taani- Kuch nhi hota Geet.. Mom hai na hamere saath
Geet- I don't want to have dad's money..
Taani- Then where will you get money from?
Geet- I will earn money..
Taani- Earn money.. have you heard about Geet Handa and work? NEver..
Geet- Shut up! I will try..

Taani's mobile started to ring and it is Anu.. and she was angry on Geet still..

Taani- Haa Anu bolo! in angry voice
Anurag- Kya hua Taani?
Taani- What is it? and still angry.

Geet- Bhar mein jao tum samjhi.. and throws a pillow on her..
Taani- Abh tum gae kam se.. samjhi.. and runs after her..

Both started to fight and suddenly Geet throws Taani's mobile out..

Taani- Yeh kya kiya tumne? and is looking at her
Geet- Ab phone pe baat karo apne majnu se.. I'm going..

Taani sees her mobile and a glas of water next to it.. She takes her mobile and put in the water and leaves.. Geet is just standing their..

Geet- What the....

Precap- Anurag is shocked to see Geet in his kitchen with his mom

More coming up soon.. this week it will be Tere mast mast FF who will be uptaded.. and I will try to uptade Destroyed also.. whenever I have time.. Busy with school = )
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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
WOW..
Awesome update
loved it
continue soon
Thanks!

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Hehehehe Lol at Sam hehehe liked it

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