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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 14)

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 1:56am | IP Logged
awesome part........... really loved it

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 11:48am | IP Logged
awsome update loved it
sweet maaneet fight
plzzz update soonxx!!!:)):):):):):)

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 7:05pm | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
oh so maan's mom is her mom???
btw nice update!

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Part 5:


Geet and Taani runs to Meera's room and don't find her in her room and start to get worried..


Geet- Meera kaha hai?
Taani- Don't know


Suddenly they hear a voice from the bathroom and opens the door... they see Meera playing with a knife on her wrist...


Geet- Meera!
Taani- Di..


Meera looks up and got a smile on her face..


Meera- are... yeh dekho knife-i ... Geeto ae hai... and talk childish

Geet- Meera.. chori ko choro! and smiles to her sametime

Meera- no... mera friend gussa ho jae ga

Geet- Nhi hue ga..

Taani- di .. chor do na
Meera- knife-i dekho Taani kya kh rahi hai.. and drops the knife..


Meera hugs Taani and Geet bends down to take the knife when suddenly Meera lose her balance and falls in the tub and Geet cuts her wrist..


Geet- aaahahhhhhhhhh....


Meera- ooohh.... khhoonn... aaahhhh...ahhhhh and faints..


Bua comes in and is shocked to see Geet's wrist cut and Meera faint..

bua- Taani call the ambulance now!


Taani does that and the ambulance comes after 5 mints..


Geet and Meera goes to the hospital..


Geet gets her hand bandage while Meera is under treatment..

The doctor comes out and looks disappointed at Bua

Doc- Bui.. I have told you early that why don't you hire any doctor?
bua- I'm scared that she will not improve

Doc- She can improve.. but the way today when she saw her sister has come back she has giving us a good improvement..

Bua don't give a answer but Taani and Geet are looking at Bua and Doc

Geet- Tujhe kya lagta hai? What are they talking about?

Taani- Ptha nhi..

Geet- Do you think they are flirting? And teases Taani

Taani- Shut up..


Anurag calls Taani he just wanted to hear her voice again.. Taani looks at her mobile then on Geet

Taani- isse to kaha tha ke 2 din bad phone kare .. phir iss waqt?

Taani- Mein abhi athi ho..

Taani press the yes button

Geet- Tu kahan ja rahi hai?

Taani- who.. ehh. Pani peni.. tumhare liye lao?

Geet- ya fine.. and still was looking at her bua


Taani- Hello? And was shaking little bit

Anu- hi.. sorry I couldn't hold myself for 2 days.

Taani- It's fine.. what's happening?

Anu- Nothing' just came home now.. And was going to sit with my brothers but thought that I can call you before and smiled

Taani- hehe acha..

Anu- What about you what are you doing?

Taani- Nothing I'm in hospital

Anu- Kya hua? Are you fine?

Taani- Yes Anurag I'm fine.. Who actually Geet has cut her wrist and my older sister is under treatment

Anu- How is Geet now ?
Taani- she is better

Anu- What happened to your older sister?

Taani- She is ..

Anu- kya?
Taani- she is mental disturbed .. she is not normal

Anu- But dosen't her doc say anything?
Taani- Who actually mama don't want to have a doc for her .. she is scared of that she can hurt the doc also..

Anu- If I can help you I will.. btw

Taani- yes

Anu- My brother can help you guys? He is also a doc for mentally persons..

Taani- It's called patient hahah

Anu was smiling while hearing her laugh

Anu- Well I can ask Jai bro and then tell you'

Taani- Ok.. btw I have to go because Geet will start asking

Anu- ya ok.. I will text you back alright?

Taani- ya fine bye

Anu- bye


Taani goes back and Geet ask for her water and Taani forget it.. Bua comes back and says that she have to look for a doc for meera..

Taani- Waise mama.. meri ek dost poch rahi thi ke uska bhai doc hai and Meera can be his patient..

Geet- Really?

Taani gave her a look for shut her mouth

Bua- Acha? And was happy that she didn't had so much for to do now..

Taani- Mein usko phone kar ke kehti ho ke humein koi problem nhi hai.. woh apne bhai ko poch le

Bua- Chale yeh acha hua.. Geet see Taani does so much why don't you go and get Meera now

Geet- At your service madam and runs to Meera's room


Geet opens the door and sees Meera talking with herself..

Geet- Di..

Meera didn't gave any response..

Geet- Meera and smiled

Meera looked up and looked at her like a 4years kid..

Geet murmed- Yeh mujhe aise kyo dekh rahi hai? And was scared that she will maybe hurt her again

Meera- Idhar ao.. behto'

Geet goes to her and sit with her..

Geet- Chalo kapre peno.. we have to go home

Meera- Acha.. waise mein har 2nd month yaha kyo ati ho?
Geet- Patha nhi


Geet comes out in strange mood because of Meera was saying something that she didn't get anything off..

Bua- Kidhar hai?

Geet- yeh rahi and pointed at her..

Bua- Taani ask your friend if she can ask her brother to come so soon as possiable

Taani- ji mama

Geet- Bua do you have some cash? I mean I want to shopping now.. and I think that papa didn't gave me cash and gave a weak smile

Bua- Tumhare papa ne tumhare drawer mein paise rakhe hai.. But take my card but I want to money back in cash from your room..

Geet- Yes boss.. Taani you are coming with me..

Taani looked at her and was glad that she was wearing salwar kameez..


Shopping mall:

Taani and Geet was going around in the shopping mall when Geet suddenly was hungry and both sits in the restaurant.

Anu msg her that his brother says it's no problem for him..

Taani's smile had changed it was not Taani taani smile it was shy Taani smile'

Geet- Who is he? and looked at her with a big smile

Taani- Kaun? And tried to not look at her

Geet- You know who.. His brother is a doc
Taani- ha..

Geet- then tell me who he is.

Taani *shit yeh mene kya bol diya,*

Geet- Listen Taani when you have said A then you have to say B aswell.. And sometimes C also

Taani- ok fine.. but please don't get shocked or something

Geet- Nhi baba.. for the first time Taani has a boyfriend

Taani- he is not my  boyfriend we are just frineds

Geet- Let's see if I know him

Taani- Anurag

Geet- Anurag? We don't have any friend with that name.? Where did you meet him?

Taani while texting him back- In the plane

Geet- plane.. suddenly Geet rememberd that guy

Taani- What happened?
Geet- Who? Who sat next to me? Is it him ? Ohh Godd.. I feel so bad for you.. btw when did you gave your nr to him? Huh tell me?
Taani- no.. it's not him.. It is that guy who said to you to take his seat? Remember that cute guy

Geet- that gol gappa type? And smiled

Taani- Not funny huh

Geet- Well he is much better ten that guy who sat next to me.. he was so rude..

Taani- Well Geet.. what is your planning to do now?

Geet- now matlab?

Taani- Will you search a job or what?

Geet- I will see about that..


While at Khurana mansion

Jai , Anu and Maan was sitting with their mom..

Jai- btw mom how is business going?

Pia- It is going good..

Suddenly Maan got a idea that he can take over the business and help his mom

Maan- Mom what you say about that I can help you now in business?
Anu looks at him

Anu- mom yeh?

Pia- That's nice thinking Maan.. But I don't think that you are in mood of working..

Anu- I can join you mom.. btw we only has 3 months left in our course

Pia- sure.. You can maybe take over the business..

Maan- How mean mom' He can but not me

Pia& Anu- We know what you will do

Maan- What?

Pia- Looking at girls instead of files?

Maan- Mom.. and laughed

Pia- I just don't find you  ready yet..

Maan- But mom after 3 months? And was serious now

Pia- Aur sam? When will you give her time?

Maan- If I join business then she have to understand that work comes first..

All 3 was impressed with him..

Pia- Now you look ready

Precap- Postman- check for your mom Maan..  and gives it to him

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