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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 126)

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Part 35

Geet started to feel dizzy and started to go like she is drunk or something

Maan- Are, mama aur uncle iss ko aise nhi dekh sakte.Geet rokho and goes after her.

Geet goes out and says hello to them and throws colour on everyone,

Maan takes her arm and she puts colour on him very softly and says

Geet- Maan, itna gussa mat kiya karo and sees a laddo on the food table and goes there
Maan-  Mein kabh gussa karta ho? and follows her

Geet eats like 6 laddos and Maan is surprised to see her eating so much.
She takes up a bhang ka glas and makes Maan drink it, he drinks maybe 4 glas and Geet 3,

Anu have also drink 2 glas and makes Taani also drink but she refuse and goes and stands next to ridzi, they are playing holi.

Ridzi- This time I feel it very diffrent, I have all I love, my family and new members also
Taani- Acha, that's good news.
Ridzi- Bhabhi dekho, Anu bhai is very drunk so watch out tonight and laughs
Taani- Besharam and runs after her with colour.

Both runs and Ridzi bumps into Armaan and he catches her and holds her from the waist.

Taani stops and watches them and leaves from there

Ridzi- tum yaha? and was really shocked

Atul, Rahul, Armaan, kirti , shubankhar everyone comes and hugs her.
Ridzi- ohh, when did you guys come her?
Atul- aur kya ridzi, Dr. Jay called us so we all come
Ridzi- You mean my brother?
Everyone- WHAT?
Kirti- Kya dr.jai aap ke bhai hai?
Ridzi- Ji dr.kirti
Armaan- woh, he is the new boss in the sanjeevani and he invited them
Atul- Are tujhe bhi to invite kiya tha na
Armaan- Nhi woh, Maan ne invite kiya tha

Everyone leaves and plays holi while Ridzi and Armaan are standing there.

Armaan was little taken back with she is not saying anything to Maan who is standing there and playing holi with another girl(Geet).

Armaan- Ridhimma
she looks up to him
Armaan- Tum Maan ko kisi aur ke saath kaise dekh sakthi ho?
She now get it
Ridzi- Armaan, between me and Maan it is nothing, she said it very cold
Armaan- I'm sorry
Ridzi- Don't say it again, I don't think I can forgive you, what you did to me Armaan, you left me when I needed you, you didn't even called me once, you just told muskaan that you will never come back,
Armaan was still quite and was listning to her, he wanted her to finish
Ridzi- Tum jante ho Armaan, jab tum mujhe chor ke chale ge te na, tab mene jeena chor diya tha, Maan aur yeh sabh the tab mere paas, tumne kabhi ek bar mujhe phone nhi kiya, aaj agar mein zinda ho to woh sirf Maan aur jay bhai ke wajah se
Armaan looked down and was feeling really guilty
Ridzi- Tumne to mujhe ek bar bhi nhi yaas kiya, kabhi ek bhar peche mor ke.. and Armaan closes her moth with his palm.

ARmaan- Bas karo Ridhimma, mein tumhe kaisa phone karta, kaise milta, jab ke Muskaan ko sab kuch pata tha aur mujhe laga ke tumhe sabh kuch pata tha, paar ab jab tum Maan ke saath zindagi bitar rahi ho, I'm happy for you
Ridhimma gives him a thight slap

Ridzi- Tum aisa kaise soch sakte ho! and yells at him she takes him from the collar,
Ridzi- Armaan, Maan mere bhai hai!
Armaan- Basket and takes her hand
Ridhimma froze at the moment when he tocuhes her hand.
Armaan- You don't need to lie about you and Maa..

he didn't even finish his sentence when Maan comes and puts colour on her face

Ridzi- Nhi bhai and tries to make him stop

Armaan didn't get why she is still saying bhai to Maan, he looks at them and he looks at Geet who is coming also with colour and Armaan stops her to ask her if she knows anything

Armaan- Geet
Geet- Happy holi, and puts colour on him, she is drunk
ARmaan- Happy holi, hey can you tell me something
Geet- sure what?
Armaan- What is going on between ridzi and Maan?
Geet eyes widend and he is despreatly waiting for a answer
Geet- Are you joking? ohoh, heheh what kind of doctor are you who can't even see the reletionship btween two siblings and laughs at him and goes

ARmaan- Maan ridzi ka bhai hai and looks at them

Ridzi- Stop it Maan! then she realise that he is drunk and laughs at him and pushes him over to Geet

She is standing still when she sees ARmaan sitting down on his knees and looking at her
Ridzi- Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?
Armaan- I... I'm sorry, Ridhimma Khurana, will you forgive me for everything I have done to you. I love you

Ridzi - Armaan and has tears in her eyes she hugs him
Ridzi- I love you to


Meera and Jay are trying there best to get Maan and Geet in controle as their parents is her also so they should take it easy but they both were sitting on a corner and was laughing at everyone who passes them

Meera- Jay, abh to mama aur mamo se in dono ko chupana hai
Jay- I will do everything by myself? Help me!

While they are trying to hide them and Taani and Anurag sees them and laughs at them thinking that they have gone mad or something playing detective or something.

Anu goes to them and Taani follows

Anu- Yeh bro, what are you doing?

Both jumps up with Anu coming up like that

Jay- Kya anu, darra diya mujhe, kuch nhi , Maan aur Geet ko chupa rahe hai
Anu- To kyo ghana gao, phir to sabh ki nazrein tum dono paar hoe gi
Meera- Fuuny? sabh party chor ke chale jae ge agar meri awaz sone ge
Anu- To Taani ghati hai na
Taani- Pagal ho kya? Mein nhi karne wali

Maan- Hollliii haaaiii
Geet- Holi day
Maan- It's not holiday today, fish
Geet- It's holi day Maan

They all 4 look at them and started to laugh at them

They all dance on RAng barse

Rang Barse
Rang barse bheege chunar wali, rang barse
Are kaine maari pichkaari tori bheegi angiya
O rangrasia rangrasia, ho
Rang barse bheege chunar wali, rang barse...


Sone ki thaali main jona parosa
Are, sone ki thaali main jona parosa
Haan, sone ki thaali main jona parosa
Are, khaye gauri ka yaar balam tarse rang barse
Holi hai!!!

O, Rang barse bheege chunar wali, rang barse...

Launga elaichi ka, are launga elaichi ka
Launga elaichi ka? Haan
Are launga elaichi ka beeda lagaya
Haan, launga elaichi ka beeda lagaya
Chabe gauri ka yaar, balam tarse
Holi hai!!!
O, Rang barse bheege chunar wali, rang barse ...

Are, bela chameli ka sez bhichhaya
Bela chameli ka, sez bhichhaya
Are, bela chameli ka sez bhichhaya
Haan, bela chameli ka sez bhichhaya
Soye gauri ka yaar, balam tarse
Holi hai!!!
O, Rang barse bheege chunar wali, rang barse...

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Aweome update 
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for d update

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