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MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 (Page 11)

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 8:44am | IP Logged
soooooooooooo gud just tooo awesomeeeeee

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeee part.
Maneet fight!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
nice ff luved it n maan is such a flirt omg nvr xpected tht n luved it update sooooooooooonnnnnnn

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
nice updates.... liked the flight scenes.. luved the flirt maan.. do continue soon

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 4:02am | IP Logged
hey dear,
loved both the parts.
love
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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Awesome continue soon

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Part 4:
The plan is now landing and Geet is angry on Maan about what he said to her ..
 
Geet- Idiot..
 
Taani looks at her
Taani- Bas bhi kar Geet.. kisko itni galiyan nikal rahi ho?
Geet- You don't know Taani what he said to me..
 
Then taani remembers what Anu said to her that his brother is such a flirt and all..
Taani- Jane de na! and was trying to avoid it
Geet- No please listen na!
Taani- I'm not intrested to listen alright.. You just sit here quit.. btw change your clothes on the airport.. Cause you can't go home with your shorts and shirt..
Geet- Please ghar ja ke change kar lo gi na! and was trying to convince her but she was not listning
taani- ok.. ghar ja ke please change kar lena.. but safe is that you can change her..
Geet looks at her bag and looks on her..
Geet- Thik hai.. fine I will change.. on the airport
Taani- Thik hai.. But don't take much time ok?
Geet - Ok
 
Now has the plan landed and Maan is angry with Anu for not letting him sit next to the girl.. But what Anu said was right also.. Last time he was so near to get catch by Sameera ...
 
Maan and Anu are waiting for their bags to come and so does Taani and Geet also..
 
Maan- I think you are right Anu.. Sam will get mad at me if she will get know what I did on the plan
Anu- If she is intresed even
Maan- Kya?
Anu- Kuch nhi.. I don't know she is strange.. But you love her
Maan- Naa... not direct.. she is good time pass
Anu- Oh now she is time pass...
Maan- Listen i'm not serious with her
Anu- And her dreams about getting married to such a rich guy?
Maan- SHUT UP!
Anu- See.. If we say something about her you get mad but when you says something about her then you don't mind.. what's wrong with you.. Are you even ok..
 
Suddenly Maan's eyes goes to Geet who was standing their and looks at him very angry
 
Maan- Hello baby
Anu- What?
 
Geet- Woh raha... Idiot..
Taani looked up but looked insted to Anu and waved her hand to him..
Geet- Tu kya kar rahi hai..
Taani- Come.. You have to meet someone..
 
Taani goes to Anu and Anu is giving a shy smile..
 
Taani- Geet this is Anu.. and he is so nice.. and Anu this is Geet you meet on the plan
Anu- Hi Geet
 
geet and maan was looking at each other like they will kill each other now...
Anu- oh oh.. wrong timing
 
Geet- U .. i will kill you
Maan- What you said that be honest...
Geet- You are so mean... do you know that?
Maan- Shut up! and said in a loud voice that everyone started to look at them..
Geet- You raised your voice to Geet HANDA?
Maan- ya so ?
 
both started to fight
 
Maan- you are so fat did you know that
Geet- now are you crossing your limits..
 
Anu and taani was looking at both as they were feeling embarresed..
 
Anu- Bas kar Maan.. Let it be..
Maan- She started
 
Geet- You monkey... ugly ughh...
Taani- Come Geet we leave her..
 
Taani takes their bag and is about to leave when Anu ask her nr and she gives it..
 
Taani- Don't call me on 2 days.. because she will otherwise lose her temper..
Anu- Ok...
 
Maan- Bye , nicely to Taani..
Taani- bye
Maan- Bye jungly billi.. and pointed at her curly hair..
Geet- yyyooouuu!!!
 
Taani and Geet goes out and hugs their mom...
 
Geet- Bua didn't dad come?
Bua- Tu janti hai apne papa ko.. Kaam se fursat kaha hai une?
Taani- ok thik hai.. never mind.. let's go home i'm so hungry
Geet- Let's go
Bua- Yeh kaise kapre pene hai tumne Geet.. Tumhare papa kya kahe ge?
Geet- Bua .. ghar ja ke change kar lo gi na!
Bua- Thik hai..
 
While Maan and Anu runs to their mom and gives her a kiss on both cheaks..
Maan- Bhai kidhar hai? he didn't come
Pia- he is sitting outside..
Anu- oh let's go home.. I really missed home so much..
Pia- maan.. Sameera bhi ae hai
Maan suddenly put a force smile on his face..
 
Jai, Anu and Pia didn't like Sam.. she didn't have the respect.. or to behave infront of them all..
 
Sameera- Maan.. and comes and hugs him and kiss him on the lips..
Maan suddenly takes a back from here..
Sameera- Kya hua?
Maan- Nothing not in mood..
Sameera- Kuch nhi hota.. Let's go home..
Maan- hmm...
 
When they reach home Sameera get's a phone from the agency and she have to go to her modeling assainment
 
while Geet and Taani enters Geet runs to the washroom and changes her clothes and comes out..
Her dad gives her a small smile and Geet is happy with that..
 
Bua- Beti ghar ae hai.. Will you not even hug her?
Dad- ji motiben..
Geet- No it's ok.. I will go up and meet Meera ..
Taani and Geet runs up to Meera's room while Bua is angry with her brother
 
Bua- Yeh kya hai.. Geet ae hai woh bhi itne salo ke bad and you...
Dad- What can I do? I  can't ..
bua- It's not her fault.. You didn't even tell her the truth
Dad- What truth?
Bua- That she is still alive?
Dad- and has 3 sons?
Bua- It's not her sons.. And it's your fault!
Dad- Ya right.. you also believe in her story of it not her son's? What are she doing in that house then?
Bua- Where should she has gone? You throw her out.. Then she now take care of 3 sons..
Dad- ......
Bua- fine you don't want to talk about this topic then leave it...
Dad- .... i'm going to office.. And I have left some money for Geet.. If she want to shopping or something
Bua- Fine!

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