Unfaithful sequel 4 Kriya Climax (Page 4)

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 10:18am | IP Logged
JASMINE... Hieeee. Finally Im back.. Must say MINDBLOWING.. U knw D best thing abt ur fan fic IS dat U updt fast, New concept and lastly... I LUB UR FF... I thought U dissappeard after Dark Shadow.. Bt UR back with a BANG.. Waiting 4 ur next

Edited by KriYa_life - 25 December 2010 at 10:40am

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One week later...

Krishna is alone at home.The door is open.He is thinking of Pratigya.
K:Why i'm thinking of Pratigya now?
Pratigya enters the front room.Shiv can't believe his eyes.
K: Pratigya!
He does'nt know how to react.
P:Krishna...i..i'm sorry.I will get peace of mind only if you forgive me.
K:Why are you apologizing?You have not done anything wrong.
P:I came to know the truth.You are innocent.You have not done anything bad.But i gave you so much of pain.I'm sorry.
She cries.
K:You have not done anything wrong.We both were forced to believe something which was not true.It's our fate.
Krish wipes her tears.
K:You should not cry.I don't like to see your tears.You know that.Right?Now you smile.
She smiles.
She sees a lot of baby's pictures in the wall.Krish sees Pratigya looking at those pictures.
He turns back and looks at the pictures with a smile.
K:I'm eagerly waiting to see Tamanna's baby.I can't wait to be a dad.I promised our unborn baby that i will be a best dad in this world.
Pratigya 's face becomes dull.
She thinks:Krishna has moved on in his life.He is trying his best to be a good husband and a good father.I should not be an obstacle in their happy life.
P:OK Krishna..i'm going.Bye..
Pratigya goes away.
Krish thinks:I feel so much of pain when Pratigya goes away from me.I'm helpless though i want to call her back.I should not betray Tamanna.
Krishna's and Pratigya 's hearts sing for each other:
Tum ko bhi hai khabar
Mujhko bhi hai pata
Ho raha hai judaa
Dono ka raasta
Dur jaake bhi mujhse tum meri yaadon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna..{Kabhi alvida na kehna}.

Pratigya is in the airport.Neev,Nandini and Avantika are there with her.
Avantika blesses her.
A:How will you live alone there?
P:I will not be alone mom.Krishna is always with me in my imagination.
N:All the best for your job in London.
P:Thanks a lot.
Neev:I know that you will shine in your new job.I'm happy about your decision to move on.Forget your past and enjoy your present for your future.
She smiles.
She feels that Krish is waving his hands to bid bye to her.
Pratigya flies to London.

Pratigya is putting sheet on the bed.Somebody stands close to her.She looks at that person.It is milind.His mesmerizing smile attracts her.She is completely lost in him.She can't take her eyes off him.Within a few seconds with his disappearance she realizes that it was only her dream.She becomes upset.
P:Atleast krishna visits me in my dreams.Thank you krishna.
Her heart sings:
.....Mere Sapne Gulaabi Neenden Ho Gayi Jawaan
Lo Aake Teri Baahon Mein, Ho, Lo Aake Teri Baahon Mein
Maein Kho Gayi Kahaan
Haazir Hai Jaan, Jaan-E-Man, Jaan Ki Qasam,
Tere Naam Se Shuru...{Waaris}.

After a year...
Pratigya is on the plane with a smile.
P:I'm back to India to attend Neev's and Nandini's wedding.
She reaches the wedding place.

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PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 10:26am | IP Logged
YIPPEE... first to Comment.. Awww... Pata Nahi wat will happen now?? KRISHU is so stupid.. Getting ANGRY on him... Bechari Prats.. Waise, LUBLY CHAPTER.. I Knw Im being greedy but... Updt soon..

Edited by KriYa_life - 25 December 2010 at 10:37am
mushiroxx IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 10:38am | IP Logged
oh pratz n krish didn't meet.....Ouch
shahbara Senior Member

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
Nice to know Krish kept his promise and is loyal to Tammana.....but still i want to see him's a beautiful story Jasmine.... thanks! Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 6:14am | IP Logged
u updated!!!!!!i lyk ur ff so much cz ur updates r so quick.......!!!!!!
Krishna let pratigya go??????hw?????hw can he let her go n live without her for 1 year...???????glad that pratigya is back to India........hope he dont repeat the same mistake this tym.......
PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 6:30am | IP Logged

update pls.........

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Pratigya looks gorgeous in her traditional red saree and jasmine flowers on hair.
She goes to Nandini's dressing room.Nandini and Pratigya are excited to see each other.
N: Pratigya..atlast you came back.
P:How can i not attend my best friends' wedding.
Neev and Nandini get married.
Pratigya wishes Neev and Nandini:Wish you both a happy married life.
She turns back is surprised to see Krishna with a baby in his arms.
K:Hi Pratigya.How are you?
K:I saw you earlier itself.I thought i will come to you after the ceremony.
He looks at Neev and Nandini:All the best.
Pratigya keeps looking at him and the baby.
Krish returns to her.
P:Your baby looks so cute.I'm sure it's name is also cute like her.
K:Yes,she has got a beautiful name.Her name is Tamanna.
P:Tamanna?The daughter has her own mother's name?By the way where is Tamanna?
M:Her mother is not in this world now.So i named her after her mother's name.Through the little Tamanna she will remain in our memories.
Pratigya is shocked:Tamanna...?
K:She left us soon after her delivery.
She feels sad for the baby.She takes her in her arms and pampers her.
K:Usually she does'nt go to anyone.But she did'nt make any fuss for coming to you.She is not crying.She is very comfortable and cheerful in your arms.
"Every baby is happy with the mother".These were Neev's words.
Krish & Pratigya stare at Neev.
N:What i said is true.Tamanna sees her mother in Pratigya . Pratigya was like her own mother to her now.
He looks at Pratigya: Pratigya..did you not feel that she is your own daughter when you took her in your arms?
Her eyes become wet.She nods her head.
N:God has decided that Krishna and Pratigya must be Tamanna's parents.That's why first she reached krishna's hands and then now Pratigya 's hands.
Krish's and Pratigya 's eyes are full of tear drops.
Nikhila takes Tamanna in her arms.
Nikhila:What neev said is true. Pratigya..why don't you join us back?krishna misses you a lot.Tamanna needs you.And i'm sure that you also long to be with krishna and Tamanna.
Pratigya looks at krishna.He can't face her.She turns back in confusion.
She thinks:krishna did'nt say anything.
Suddenly she hears his voice: Pratigya!
She turns back and looks at his eyes.
K:Will you marry me?
She can't express how happy she is.She becomes very emotional.
She nods her head.

Nandini dresses Pratigya as a bride.Neev dresses krishna.
Nan:Look at your mehendi.It's bright red.It shows how much krishna loves you.
She blushes.She looks at her mehendi with a smile.
Pratigya is brought to the mandap near krishna.He and Pratigya smile at each other.
They walk around the sacred fire.
krishna ties mangalsuthra around her neck and fills her forefead with vermillion.Finally they enter into the eternal bond of marriage.

The end

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