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Unfaithful sequel 4 Kriya Climax

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Many of u wanted my ff Unfaithful 2 hav a sequel.I'm starting its sequel now

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Unfaithful sequel Part 1


Pratigya enters a room.She is surprised to see the beautiful decoration with lit candles.She sees the smiling face of Samar.
P:Samar!
S:Did you like it?
She smiles:Who can't love it?
S:I wanted to give you a sweet sight.I hope i'm successful in it.
P:Yes,it's really beautiful.
He holds her hands.She becomes uncomfortable and turns back.His face becomes dull.
S:We got married a few months back.Still you have not accepted me as your husband.Still you love Krishna.Right?
P:No.Don't utter that name.I hate him.Samar..i respect you.But if you always talk about Krishna...
She leaves the room without completing the sentence.
Samar thinks:I know that you are hurt by krishna.Because what he did to you can't be forgiven easily.But the truth is that it is not easy to hate the person we love.You loved krishna.So it's not easy to hate him.
Pratigya is looking at the moon.She sees Krishna's smiling face there.
She thinks:Why do i always see the person i hate the most?I married Samar only to make my mom happy.I can't love him also.Am i unfaithful to him?
She remembers Krishna apologizing to her.Her eyes are wet.
She thinks:Does he truly love me?No..a rapist like him can't love anyone.If he had loved me he would not have remarried.

Tamanna goes near Krishna.She is a ravishing beauty who is his wife now.But her beauty or status does'nt attract him.
T:Krishna..the party is going on.But you have not bothered to come down for the party.
K:I'm not coming.You go.
T:It's an important business party.Still you are not showing any interest.
K:I told you..i'm not interested.
Tamanna's face becomes red as she is fed up.She goes.Nikhila comes.
N:Why are you rude to Tamanna?
He is silent.
N:You know..after your separation with Pratigya,nobody was willing to marry you.But Tamanna married you.You got a good wife from a good family.
K:I never wanted to marry mom.You know very well that i can't love anyone else than Pratigya.Tamanna was willing to marry me.That's only because she wanted her baby to have a father.I married Tamanna as i wanted to punish myself.Because of my cruelty,a poor girl got pregnant.Unfortunately that baby saw it's death before seeing the world.I see my own baby's face in Tamanna's unborn baby.But i can't love her.
Nikhila's face is dull.



Edited by jasminerahul - 03 January 2011 at 6:30am

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 9:14am | IP Logged
So your back with another nice ffSmile.The first chp was very well written.Looking forward to the next chpSmile
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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 10:00am | IP Logged
ur back jasmine................i loved this update..keep on writing more............its getting interesting now..........Tongue
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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Hello Jasmine, it's great to hear from you after such a long time.Big smile...... Well, the sequel was so amazing and it was tremendously moving and heart-felt ! thanks for this wonderful story and plz update soon!
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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 6:50am | IP Logged

 

Krishna is sleeping.
Tamanna looks at him:Why is he sleeping now?
She touches his forehead.
T:My God!High temperature.
She puts a wet cloth on his forehead.

When he is awake,she gives him medicine.
K:Don't think i will believe that you are in love with me.You married me only because you want your baby to have a father for namesake.
T:You are right.I don't love you and you still love your ex-wife.I don't force you to love me.I'm taking are of you as you are sick.
Tamanna keeps the medicine on the table and is about to go.
K:Tamanna..i'm sorry.
He eats the medicine and smiles at her.She also smiles.


Samar is dictating something to his PA Meera and she is writing.
Samar takes the paper from her and reads it.He gets angry:Full of mistakes.You have not listened carefully.Where was your concentration?
She tells in her mind:I was looking at your face.
S:I know the reason.since past few months you have been showing special interest in me.But i'm married and i'm not interested in you.
Her face is dull.



Pratigya is looking at the stars.She closes her eyes.She sees Krishna's smiling face.
Samar touches her shoulders.
P:Krishna!
She turns back and looks at him.
S:You are uttering someone else's name even when your husband is near you.
P:I'm sorry Samar.
S:I don't want to hear anything.You say that you hate Krishna.But the truth is cthat you still love him.I'm fed up of you.
He goes away.She is upset.

Meera opens the door hearing the door bell ring.She is shocked to see the drunk Samar.
M:Sir!
He weeps:My wife does'nt love me.
Meera pities him.She holds his face:Don't worry..i love you.
He raises his eyebrows and looks at her.
M:I love you.
He feels that Pratigya is telling him 'i love you'.He becomes so happy that he embraces her.
S:I love you tooPratigya.
Meera becomes dull.
M:I'm Meera.
He moves away from her:I'm sorry.I'm going.
Heis about to.Meera holds his hand.
M:Where are you going?To your wife who does'nt love you?You have to be withthe person who loves you.Why don't you see my love for you?
His tears flow down.
He holds her hand and mtries to smile.She smiles with the joy of love.


While all are eating breakfast,Nikhila:Today is Tamanna's birthday.I have arranged a party.
Tamanna is surprised:Thankyou mummiji.

Party...
Tamanna comes in a blue salwar kameez.
Krishna:Happy birthday.
T:Thank you.
After cake cutting,they both dance together.
T:To tell the truth,you are very nice.I can't believe that you were responsible for a girl's misfortune.
It pains him.His face becomes dull.Tamanna becomes dull seeing it.
He goes and drinks.
Tamanna thinks:I should not have reminded him of his past.

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 6:58am | IP Logged
wow.. and then reality hits u lol come bak to earth ppl! lol this is so obsessive!
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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 8:43am | IP Logged
It was a very nice chp.So Krishna was responsible for maybe Pratigya's miscarriageConfusedAnyway,looking forward to the next chpSmile
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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Very nice chapter! but hate this Samar why can't he be patient and loyal to his wife?Angry Anyway looking forward to the next part!

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