#Devil's Den# The dance of Pain - Page 26

I don't think the screen play was upto the mark- I do not understand what the dance was doing in the episode- there was absolutely no build-up or any logical connection between the dance and what came before. It started abruptly and ended equally abruptly. Who starts dancing without asking their fiance why she is crying/upset? Maybe I am being too pragmatic- but I found it very out of place! Why could you not show a 1 min build-up to the dance? I do not think it would have taken more than that to set the stage. The last lap sequence could be shifted to tomorrow- 6 days a week and all, I thought you guys would be all for dragging! The team needs to find a healthy balance between going to fast/glossing over issues and dragging too much. Both are equally off putting for the viewer. 

On a standalone basis the dance was good...

However, I loved how both of them are so in sync/attuned to each other. Maan's reaction to a distraught Geet was really beautiful. His frustration, confusion, angst all shone through.

I liked Geet and NES interaction too. NES' lines were a bit OTT. Though I do not understand why Geet would not come out and tell NES the truth. She herself called NES dost and family. I guess that story is being saved for a rainy day. Both the actors were very good in the episode.

Editing was way below average today. The team needs to deliver on episodes for which so much hype is built through spoliers/SBS/SBB. You cant raise expectations and then do a poor job in putting together the final product.

Precap is looking  very interesting.  At the risk of getting ostracized from the den- I am beginning to like NES and NEB- they are right now keeping things interesting! Especially NEB. I am enjoying the fact that the character and his motivations remain a mystery to the viewer. I also thought that in today's confrontation NEB came out tops over MSK. (Now to pucca se I am getting thrown out of the den!). You need to build a backstory for NES- where was she all this while? Why did she not attend Dev/NT wedding- since she clearly does not know who Arjun is. I am assuming Dadi would have thrown her other grandson an equally lavish wedding!

Overall- I liked the episode. The story is moving in a very interesting direction.  7/10 from me (My first rating!) and I am ignoring the misplaced dance!

Future tracks

Err-Jun &MSK: Clash of Titans..Love you MSK for not listening to daadi and not trusting

 Err-Jun at all😆 ..Sumtimes she is too much into emotions..

 

Annie& Geet: I don't think anyone is wrong among these two.Geet is not saying anything bcoz she has a fear tht annie won;t believe her as she is a stranger to her. Annie is surprised tht her brother's name has been cancelled jus bcoz of one girl how did she put daadi and maan both under her control? I understand their POVs equally Ish MSK & Daadi at fault for not confronting annie abt the truth..

 

Maan Self Talk: Apt I want them to share evrything and not hide it which will end up in a misunderstanding.😃and he says exactly wat I said when she is in his lap..

 

Geet Self-Talk: Loevd tht too she is worried whether Annie will choose the truth or her brother coz she knws Khurana siblings change colours chutki mein😆

 

Maaneet: Loved What Geet said give her a chance to fight for her life so tht she is strong too but kurri why talking in Paheliyan Talk to him straight instead of giving moral lessons

I love Kurri she said what I wanted to say "I am ur wife not ur 18 year old bacha"😆

 

Choregrapher:And I thot he was VICKY😳

 

Maaneet Practise: He sent teh choregrapher away coz he wanted to test sum moves on his wuld be wife..

First when he caressed her back and slowly went up to her chest giving her shivers..He knows if he bcums passionate with her..she will open her mouth...

Loved the last bits especially after geet lets go off him and then cums bak after that it was awsommee..Theere were so many emotions described thru the dance..WOW dance can express millions of emotions passion, love, intenisty, fear, anger😳and teh security she was feeling in his arms when they hugged😳

@Choreographers: Awsome Job👏

@GC&DD Sizzling Chemistryyy ☺️Ahhh I love you guys especially Drashti I was jus so worried everytym u were swung around or picked up coz of ur back u did not make it visible..hats off to ur dedication👏

@Gunjan&Sandip: You guys RUINED itThose spider web transitions😳

This always happens Pics are out whole forum goes LALALALA and then original mein everything bcums PHOOOSSSSSSSSHHH tht is why I was not excited to see the episode anyway😆It has happened before too with RTM and here again I learn from my mistakes

so if you wanted to see sum sort of kiss or sumfin 2night u might be upset but I loved it coz I had no expectations no hopes and the logic is there if u see it..It was not out of nowhere..

 

he picked her up 18th time😆Yesh I am sad I count😆

LOved how Maan asked her in a starightforward manner instead of bcuming khafa wid her...He remembers all her lines😃and Thanku geet for opening a bit coz you know ur Munda is very clever he will figure it out instead of pestering you more..

Totally Adore MSK's character tht he figured it all out on his own👏

 

Precap: haha brii did u knw they were gonna show Areet in precap tht is why u made the poll for areet😆Interesting I am looking forward to it...😛

 

New VM

 

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@Geetu Love ur analysis⭐️and the way you have described it👏👏👏