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~For all SaaVan-ians~ pg2 (Page 2)

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by doc99




TIME: 11:45pm SAAVAN BEDROOM


saachi was sitting over the couch and lost in thoughts...... "15min baaki hai. Shravanji mere zindagi mein aane ke baad mera pehla b'day hai. mann lagta hai pehla wish wo hi kare. par wo kaise aa sakta hai? mai itna soch rahi hoon... par usko yaad bhi nahi hoga ki kal mera b'day hai. pata nahi ab woh kya karta hoga.......... "



11:45pm GARAGE


shravan was inside the car, looking at his watch. "15min.... mujhe saachi ko wish karna hi chahiye.. ph karoon?? nahi nahi.... directly wish karunga.. par maine abhi tak kuch bhi gift nahi laaya... kaise jaaoon??!!! abey shravan tu toh sach mein ullu ka patta ho... saachi ke baare mein itna bhi nahi jaante ho?? usko koi gift nahi diya to bhi usse koi farak nahi padta... saachi gifts ye sab ke baare mei zyaada sochte nahi hai... ab jaake wish karo... okay jaaoonga... baad me gift ke baare mei soch kar, kal party mei surprise doonga... saachi.... mai aa raha hoon..."



11:59pm SAAVAN BEDROOM


Saachi spread her bedsheet over the floor, kept shravan's gift beside her pillow, took his jacket and talking to that... " kya shravanji aap ko mera b'day bhi yaad nahi hai.. 12bajne waali hai. ph bhi nahi kiya aane. kya aap ko sach mein yaad hai ya nahi???!!!"


"kaise bhool jaaonga saachi? tum hi mere liye sab kuch ho.... mai tum se pyaar karta hoon saachi... you are the love of my life.. "


saachi's eyes welled up with tears of happiness....



wow!!! well writtenClapClap pls do continue soon...shravan better be the first one to wish saachi...varna uski khair nahiAngryLOL
this forum has so many great writers...i hope all of them put in their ideas in this post...it would be really nice especially now when we are missing SaaVan scenes so much....


Edited by ash91 - 21 December 2010 at 11:37am

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
well written sangeeta! loved it !
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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 7:29am | IP Logged

"shravan jee... Aap... mai aap ka hi intezaar kar rahi thi.."
she ran over to shravan and hugged him tightly "i love you shravan jee"


shravan was completely lost in her hug. he wanted to stay in her arms forever. The feeling that somebody is there for him, who cares for him, who loves him...only him.. It was amazing.

He slowly opened his eyes and looked at his room. Nothing has changed much, except that there was a bedspread and a pillow on the floor, along wit his jacket.. He didnt notice much wen he came inside..

He released sachi from the hug and asked her wit a pained voice.. "saachi, tum roz yahi pe sothe ho? Kyun?"

"haan shravan jee. Aap roz macharon ke beech me sothe ho, is halat mei, mai ye bed pe kaise so sakti hun? "

shravan's eyes wer filled wit tears, his voice ws choking "sach mei mai bahut lucky hoon.. Jab ghar pe koi bhi mujh par bharosa nahi karte hai, tabhi tum mere liye ye sab kar rahi ho. I love you saachi." saying this, he hugged her tightly, feeling her body completely in his arms.

After a while, he released her from the hug, took out a bunch of roses and gav to saachi
"To the most special person in my life.. Wish you many many happy returns of the day.."

"thank you shravan jee"

He cupped saachi's face in his hand, looked into depths of her eyes and moved forward to plant a kiss over her forehead. He then moved her closer to him, put a hand over her waist, other hand inside her beautiful silky long hairs.. Bent over her to take her lips inside his mouth, to explore her mouth, to kiss her lips for the first time..

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wow i reallly loved it !!o that this we real!!!!!!!

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