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OS: Kajenlicious!!! UPDATED Pg9 (Page 7)

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
nice update once again fafi...I was smiling so much that my brother was teasing me...lol...I enjoyed the updateTongue

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 3:00am | IP Logged
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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Once again! I m very much overwhelmed by ur response n ur comments...Im verythankful to all of u forsuch great compliments as they are my source of encouragement...I'll make sure to give u all some more AR spice in my next part...Cool
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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
wow...i loved it yaar...it was a mind blowing part!!
u managaed to picture AR soo perfectly...i could almost imagine the whole thing....i wished the CV's would have ended it this way!!
keep me updated!!

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
Fafi! Finally I got the time to read your OS and I really enjoyed it. Please continue soon. Looking forward to read more of it.

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
wow mannn!!!!!! u an osso writer i loved you OS plzzzzz plzz write soon i am very exited for your next update and ya do add me in your pm list!!!! i'll send u frnd request so u cn easily pm me!!!:)

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Helllooo Dear Friends!!!!Hug Im back again...im sorry tht im updating my next part after a long gap as i ws bz studyingDead..Bt today as im nt feeling wellOuch so cnt study....i dnt knw if its a good thing or badErmm...bt i thought tht why nt update my OS as it will cheer up my mood n ill forget my illness n study as wellLOL...So widout any delay here's the next part....Cool
UPDATE
KAJENLICIOUS
 
Next Day @ Sanjeevani: Everyone busy doing their assigned duties. AR r wid their respective responsibilities. However Armaan was busy yet his mind ws fully occupied wid Ridz. He was really missing her. then finally when he decided to meet his Basket smhow. So he calls all the interns to nurse station. While acting as a serious Doc he orders them tht they hv to keep chek on eachother so tht no one skips his/her duty..JP says: "Armaan Bhayya!!!" Armaan saw him wd seriousness so JP gt scaredLOL n said:"Sorry! I mean dr. Armaan agr hm ek dusre pe chek rkhen ge......To phr aap kya kaam krenge?"LOL Armaan gets confused n everyone watches hm wid suspiscous eyesLOL..He quickly figures out n says:" Dr. Jp aap mje mera kam mt sikhaen..Im a senior Doc..So ye main decide krnga k ksko kya kam krna hai?" Ev1 agrees. Then he says:"Aur haan agr ksi ne apne kam se nazr htai ya koi mje farigh nazr aya....to phr uski punishment ktni buri hogi wo aap sochlen"..Ev1 gets scaredOuch..Whereas Armaan in hs mind talks to hmself:" Wah armaan! tu to bara achha rob dalta hai..Dekh kese sbki shklen nanhe nanhe puppies jesi hogai hain"LOLLOL..thn he cms out of hs thoughts while clearing hs throat...JP whispers to Jiggy:" Arey inko kam wam kahan krwana hai..inko to Riddhima flower g k pass bhagne ki pari hogi..Subha se mile nahi hain na unse..is liye"Wink Jiggy also agrees..Armaans sense their talk n ask:" Dr. JP Aap kch keh rhe hain?" JP:" arrey nahi Dr. Armaan hm to keh rhe hain k boht achha idea ha apka..wah kya supervision ha apki...Hain bai senior doc ho to aisa...." everone agrees...Then JP continyues in hs thoughts" jo khud koi kam na kre aur sara kam juniors pe daal deAngry" LOL Everyone dismisses...Then armaan thinks how to go to meet ridz. Then he hs a plan. He goes to Dr. Keerti wd sm files. Armaan:"Dr. Keerti! mje apse kch baatkrni thi"..Dr K:"Jee kahiye"..Armaan:"Dr. Keerti yeh kch cases hn jo main ne aur riddhima ne sath handle kiye thay..woh apne kaha tha k main riddhima ko help out krdn unki presentation  me to i was thinking..." Dr K:" theek ha Dr. Armaan ap unki help kijiye" Armaan cheeers upBig smile n ws about to go...Dr. K calls him:" Dr. Armaan?" Armaan turns smilingBig smile:" Jee Dr. Keerti". Dr.K in a serious mood:" Aapko yad dilwa dn k aap Dr. Riddhima ki sirf help krenge.....us ke ilawa aur koi kam nahi hoga"..Armaan's smile suddenly vanishesLOL n he makes a cute face nodding yesSmile....Then he gets out talking to hmslef:"Yar yeh hitler kya antryaami hai?? isey kese pata chl jata ha k main wahan kya krne ja rha hn??i think isko CID me hona chahiye tha..Im sure yeh Khooni k khoon krne se pehle bta detin k khooni kon ha??"LOLLOLLOL Then he goes to Ridz cabin n sees her frm glass door. Ridz is as usual bz n tensed doing her work. Papers spread all over her table n she's working on laptop...Thn armaan enters smilingly:"Hey Riddhima!" Rid:"Hi Armaan!" she didnt c hm n says hi while focussed on her Laptop. Armaan while coming near her chair:"Basket! Kya kr rhi ho?" Ridz:"Armaan presentation bna rhi hn.. Aj mje kese b krke ye presentation khtm krni ha" Armaan bows down near her face looking towards her eyes n says in a light voice:"Main help kradun?"Embarrassed Ridz bz in her work dznt look at hm n says:"Armaan wo jo hmne last two surgeries ki thin unki file dena" Armaan who is nt in a working mood n as usual in hs naughty moodWink:"Surgeries???knsi surgeries ki baat kr rhi ho riddhima?Smile" Ridz staring him seriously:"Armaan!!!?Angry" then she gets up frm her chair n start searchng frm files which armaan hs brought,,While she ws standing in frnt of her chair Armaan sits on her chair frm the back he brings out a Banana frm hs Dr coat's pocket n start eating itLOL..thn he says:"Rhiddhima tm khamkha tension le rhi ho..PResentation ho jaegi ..Dekho main agaya hn na ab sb thek hojaega so just chill"Cool Ridz widout looking at him searching for file n thn unaware of armaan she takes file n sits on chair bt instead of chair she sits on arman's lapWink n she's surprisedLOL while she tries to get up armaan holds her frm her waist n makeher sit on hs lapsEmbarrassed..She ina confusing voice:"Armaan kya kr rhe ho chhoro mje..." trying to remove armaan's hand frm her waistWink Armaan:"Nahi chorungaEmbarrassed" then he rests hs head beside her shoulderTongue. RIdz again:"Armaan??koi ajayega chhoro mjhe...dekho mjhe boht sara kam krna hai..Sr. Keerti ko aj hi yeh presentation deni ha" Armaan who ws bz in mesmerizing wid her hair on shoulder n also eating Banana at the same tymLOL says:"Basket! tension na lo. main dr.keerti se baat kr aya hun. aur main tumhari help krnga..." thn he offers her hs half eaten  kela n says:"Tm ktna thk gai ho kam kr kr k yeh lo kela khaloLOLLOL" Ridz makes a yuk face seeing hs kelaLOLLOL Thn she again starts:"Armaan tm baaz nai aoge na apni hr katon se?" thn she starts to struggle to get out of armaan's grip bt Armaan is nt letting her go n after being done wid hs kelaLOL he holds her hands onto her waist n grips thm wd hsEmbarrassed n says:"Basket yar main subha se tmhe miss kr rha hn aur tm ho k kam kam...Tmhe main yad nahi ata...Meri koi fikr nahi ha tmhe?" he makes a puppy face which brings a smile on ridz faceBlushing She smiles looking at hm n says:"Armaan??dekho hm kam krlen phr hm khoob sara wqt sath guzarenge.Thek?"Smile Armaan gives thinking expression n thn says ok..Ridz while getting up:"chalo phr tm aisa kro ye file..." she ws about to say smthng when armaan grabs her back into hs lap in a way tht she's lying in hs armsEmbarrassed,,Armaan supporting her wd 1 hand on her back n other on her waist while holding her one handEmbarrassed...Then there's a sweet kajen eyelockEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..Their faces close to eachother n they r lost into eachother's eyes...Both staring @ eachother's lips n eyesWink.Ridz one hand holding armaan's shirt collar n othr is held by armaan tightly...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Ridz gets back to reality n says confrusingly in a low voice:"Armaan!Chhoro mujhe...koi ajayega" Armaan who is still lost loses hs grip on her hand n puts away ridz hair frm hair falling on her face..thn he caress her cheek n chin wid hs soft hand n fingersEmbarrassed Ridz gets shy n looks down while smiling...Again she ws about to get away frm armaan whn he again grabs her n ths tym too close tht they   cud sense eachother's breathBlushingBlushing.Their lips r sooo close as if they r about to kiss. Armaan slowly moves hs face on side of her cheek while brushing hs cheek wid hersEmbarrassedEmbarrassed n thn he gives a deep kiss near her earBlushingBlushing..Ridz closes her eyes on the touch of hs lips. She cud feel the softness of his lips n ths kiss ran a current through her body. Now she pulls her hand off hs collar n her hand ws on hs bare chestBlushing (As we all love itEmbarrassed).Armaan coming face to face to ridz holds her hand close to hs chest n press it closer while looking at her. Both r smiling n their noses brushing against eachotherEmbarrassedEmbarrassed. Then Armaan says:"Dil chahta ha k yeh lmha yahin ruk jae aur main apni puri zindagi aise hi guzar dnEmbarrassedEmbarrassed" Riddhima replies while giving a shy smile:"Hamri puri zindgi guzarne k liye aise kai lamhe hamara intezar kr rhe hain...Bas ab thora hi to itnezar baki hai"EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Listening this armaan stares at ridz lovingly n says in hs typical style:"Oyye Hoyye" thn he ws again trying to rub hs face besides ridz whn sudenly Dr. Keerti knocks at the door frm outsideOuch..They both gt confused n gt back to reality n stood up. Ridz started looking at files in confusion n armaan acts as working on laptopLOLLOL Dr. K comes in:"Jee Dr. Riddhima n Dr. Armaan! kesi tayari hai presentation ki?" both of them acts serious n replies:"G g Dr. Keerti boht boht achhi ja rhi hai". Thn dr. K says:"Good! Main jaldi farigh hogai thi socha aap dono ko guide krdn takey kam jaldi khatm hojaye" Both of them look at eachother n reply:" yess ma'm kam bas thora sa hi hai" Dr.K thn staring at armaan n says:"Dr. Ridhima! I hope Dr. Armaan ne apki kafi help ki hogi" Ridz n armaan look at eachother.Armaan gives her a naughty smile n asks ridz to tell through hs eyes(You knw eye talks of ARWink). Ridz replies in a confusing voice:"Yess Dr. K Dr. Armaan kafi helpful rhe" Armaan then teases ridz while making a serious face:"Haan Riddhima! Btao na Dr. keerti ko k abi hm kya kr rhe thay?"LOLLOL Ridz again confused n gives a stern look to armaan to which armaan winksWinkLOL Dr.K looking at thm..Ridz confused:"G g woh hm..." Armaa:"Well! hm baat kr rhe they k snjeevani mein kese hm patients ka khyal rkhte hain aur kese hm unka dil behlate hain jski wja se yahan ka environment bohaaauuttt achha rehta hai..aur patient ki sehat pe achha effect prta hai"LOL Ridz stares armaan in a shock..Thn armaan continues smiling at her:"aur ye b k kese hme patients ki khwaishat ka khyal rkhna chahiye takey woh depress na feel kre...aur uske dil o dimagh ko sakun miley"EmbarrassedLOL dr. K while looking at files nods n says:"hmm thats gr8.Is se hamre hospital ka achha impression parega..i think apko is pe kam krna chahiye" armaan gives a big smile to ridz listening thsLOL Ridz makes an angry face at hmAngry.. Then Dr.K says she's leaving n get her ths presentation 2morrow morning...after she leaves Armaan laughs out n ridz hit hm on hs arm:"Armaan yeh kya keh rhe they tm?? Tm seedhe se Dr.K ko bta nahi skte thay k hm cases discuss kr rhe thay?Smile" Armaan:" Riddhima main seedhe se hi to bta rha tha k hmen patients ka kese khyal krhna chahiye kese unka dil behlana chahiye" while saying tht coming frm back he holds ridz frm her waist n rubs hs nose into her open hair giving her small kisses into her hairBlushing...Ridz fr smtym feels shiver in her body n close her eyes while smiling as if she's enjoying wht arman is doing...Blushing thn she says:"Armaan!!!.." no response.."Armaan??" armaan:"Hmmm!!!" He's still busy n lost in her hair fragrancen is about to rub hs nose on her neck side whn ridz broke hs grip frm her waist n turns to hm n says:"Armaan!!! plzzz hm kaam khtam krlen?dekho Dr.K ko yeh presentation subha deni hai.Kal hi yeh present krni hai to plzz ab thora sa kam krlen?" armaan staring at her cute sweet face n smiling..Ridz:"Armaan plzzzzzzzzzz" Armaan smiling:"Ok!"Smile then they both start working on presentation ths tym Armaan seriouslyLOLLOL..Meanwhile he's also shown getting koffe 4 hmself n basket n they both finally complete the presentation.Tongue 
Next Day: Everyone at nurse station...Armaan hd already took reports frm juniors so tht Dr. K dznt get to knw wht he did to thmLOL...Dr.K comes:"G Dr. Riddhima apki presentation ready hai?" Ridz nods yesss.Then Dr.K to Armaan:"Dr. Armaan apko jo main ne interns ki supervision ki report bnane ko di thi is it ready?" Armaan nods n gives the report to Dr.K. All the interns stares at hm angrily n armaan gives them a stern look to stay quite or els he'll kill themLOLLOL..Evryone is assigned duties n Ridz is asked to go to Meeting room n get ready for presentation. Scene shifts to Ridz who is searchng for armaan in wards n corridors n talking to herself:"Yeh armaan kahan chala gaya? ek to yeh kabhi apni sahi jaga pe nahi milta...kahan chala gaya" thn she cms across the fire escape n sees armaan sitting there..She gives a stern look at hm althought its hs back n thn she goes down. "Armaan! tm yahan bethe ho aur main tmhe puray hospital mein dhund rhi hn" Armaan who ws reading comics n eating sandwich smiling at the jokesLOL replies:"Arey riddhima! aao na tmbhi yeh parho itne funny hain..mera to hans hans k pait main dard hogya hai..aur isi liye bhook b lg rhi thi"LOLLOL Ridz grabs comics frm hs hnd n talks in a strict voice:"Armaan! meri wahan itni imp presentation hai aur tm yahan  beth k comics enjoy kr rhe ho?" thn she makes a sad face n says:"tmhe koi fikr nahi hai meri?" Armaan replies:"Arrey basket! fikr hai na isi liye to main kal tmhari help krne aya tha"Embarrassed Ridz:"Help? tm usko help kehte ho?agr yeh tmhari hel hai to plzz ainda kabi meri help na krna" ridz ws about to go whn armaan hold her wrist n makes her sit"Arrey rridhima!! Babby!!LOLLOL...Naraaz kyn horhi ho...? achha btao tmhari presentaion kesi prepare hui hai? aur tm mujhe kyn dhund rhi thi? Meri boht yad arhi thi?Embarrassed" While sayng ths armaan holds her both hands close to hs chest n gives a small peck on her hands...Riddhima gets into a normal mood n says:"Nai woh main bs chahti thi k tm mjhe good luck kaho takey meri presentation achhi jaye..U knw im very nervous" Armaan:"Riddhima nervous kyn ho? yeh koi tmhari pehli presentation to nahi hai na? aur jtni mehnat is pe hmne ki hai naaCool....." armaan notices ridz look while he sd "HUM" n changes hs sentenceLOLLOL:"I mean jitni mehnat tmne ki hai to achhi to hogi na..ab bs tm jao aur ja k achhi si presentation de k ao..." Ridz smiles n feels a bit relaxed n says:"Ok ab main jati hn" while she ws getting up armaan holds hr back again wid her wrist n says:"Ek minute!" Ridz standing facing him:"Kya hua?" Armaan looks into her eyes n says:"Tmhe goodluck to wish krna bhool hi gaya"EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Ridz realise wht e's upto n smiles gazing down while armaan gets close to her..He makes her stand by the wall holding her hands frm hs both handsEmbarrassed thn he cms close to her n brings hs face near her..Ridz gets shy n looks at hm...she's confused as usual n dznt knw how to get away frm hmEmbarrassedEmbarrassed its lyk she wnts to go away bt also she wnts to b close to hmEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.Armaan slowly brings hs lips near her ear n whispers:"I knw k tm boht achhi presentation dogi...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed" Ridz cud  feel hs breath crossing her ear..she enjoyed hs each n every word. Thn armaan gives a kiss on her cheek in a way tht she cud feel the wetness of hs lips on her cheekBlushingBlushing. She closed her eyes n ws struggling hard wid herself not to lose controlEmbarrassed..Thn armaan comes face to face wid her n staring lovingly into her eyes says:"I LOVE YOU"Blushing Ridz smiled at him n replied:"I love you too"BlushingBlushing then both give eachother a Tight hugDay Dreaming n then ridz leaves...Armaan after she leaves close hs eyes, smiling n says:"Hmmmmm....I lover her very much"EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Scene shifts to presentation room. Ridz giving presentation n everyone praising her effort. thn the session ends n everyone congratulates her for a wonderful presentation.She's very happy n while meeting all she sees armaan standing at the door staring her smilingEmbarrassed..She smiles at hm.He gestures a clap to her n then gives a her a flying kissBlushing Ridz gets shy n gazes awayEmbarrassed...Dr.K,Dr.Shubh.Dr.Shanshank congratulates her... Dr.K tells Dr.Shanky tht armaan also helped her. Shanky praised their joint effort n recalls how they both hv always made him proud of their work. They both end up smiling at eachother....Tongue
 
to be continued....
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Plzzz do commentEmbarrassed
 

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