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Deceived- MG FF ~Part 13~ on pg 66 & impt note (Page 46)

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 8:49am | IP Logged
awesome...loved it...

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Loved the update!Big smile

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 8:56am | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4  d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged
hi dear just read your fic
lovely story
plz continue soon and add me in your pm list

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
ahhh.. You are back with a bang.. Loved how Maan is teasing Geet.. unknowingly telling her that he will claim her very soon.. with all the love and trust... So there is a challenge between them going now.. wow.. it is going to be great.. waiting for more...
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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ninand

man i loved this update.. the way Maan finally brought out in the open the tension between them and changed the dynamics..ooOh Blushing..
Love how much Maan seems smitten with her , amused at her antics and that laugh! god! I imagined a 'Maan Laugh' and let me tell you that was nearly the death of meDay Dreaming dee-vine!

then the predatory teasingEmbarrassed, the way she was completely flustered and he was unrelenting , was superb..

ah and the rules, and his repartee to thatROFL.. man that shut her up!BlushingThese two have suddenly sent the temperature shooting through the roof..Nuke

please do post the next part soon.Embarrassed


hehehehehehehe glad that u liked it Big smile and i will post the next part soonBig smile 
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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by esha143

woww its so nice...Maan is trying to gradually reduce the distance between them by making advances on her n she is also eager for the same...ab pata nahi Annie kitni baar innko romance karthe hue pakdegi aage jaakeLOL...hmm...they r playing challenge game with each other...some spice to their romance...that'll be so fun to watch...wonderful update...loved it...pls continue soon...Big smile

thanks a lot dearTongue and i will update soon... gosh i love the commentsLOL
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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonu4ever

Hayeer yaar. You killed me. Loved it completely.
Your writing style made it all the more beautiful and enjoyable.
These two are shoo cute :D
Loved their encounter in the kitchen :) *blush*
poor geet she felt embarassed afterwards hehe.
Rules setting huh :D great idea lol.
Cant wait to see geet opening up to Maan ;)

Do update soon dear, cant wait for their dinner :)

thanks alot and they both will open up really soonBig smile 

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