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Deceived- MG FF ~Part 13~ on pg 66 & impt note (Page 16)

krati5 IF-Rockerz

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update it plz

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awsome................ plz add me 
preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 2:22am | IP Logged
loved ur ff...................y maan not telling her that he loves her................but this mysterious maan is also lovable................cant wait for their marriage
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asmara19 Senior Member

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hey guys heres the next part. it might be boring and u'll have to wait for a while for the excitementBig smile

'toofan se pehle ki khamoshi hai ye' Wink

anyways do comment plss and i'll update the next part before going back to hostelTongue till then plss do give ur lovely commentsEmbarrassed and i hope u enjoy this part


"ub ap kanya ko magalsutra pehnaye" geet looked up at maan and maan saw all the mixed emotions in her eyes and he nodded his head assuredly to her which was supposed to console her and it did. She could feel it in her bones that this was all right. This was meant to happen. This was destined. But she couldn't accept the reality. How could a man like him marry her?

     Her thoughts vanished as his hands slipped around her neck tying the mangalsutra. His touch made her shiver and tingle making her eyes close. She realized that he withdrew his hand after caressing the back of her neck lightly which was meant to soothe her. She didn't know how she could sense all the caring gestures of his, but the fact was that she could. She knew he wanted her to calm down. Just when she looked down to look at the mangalsutra, he filled her maang with sindoor, taking her by surprise and she looked up in his eyes. He had a slight smile on his face of satisfaction.

    She was his now. No more running away. No more fear of loneliness. No more jealousy. No one could take her away from him now. His geet. He would love her till eternity. He would give her all the happiness, the whole world, that she would forget all the doubts she had in mind and she would have no choice except to love him back, he promised in his heart  

   Besides satisfaction, geet saw something else in his eyes and face too. Reverence? Maybe. Something she couldn't name but it made her feel as if she was someone special for him and meant a lot in his life.

    Finally the wedding was over. She sat in her room, maan's room, which was now hers too. She felt awkward to be sitting in her boss's room, let alone his bed. She was looking around with her mind blank. It was all silence in the house. The guests had left and it was late at night. She was exhausted. Both annie and dadi had left to see the guests off while leaving her in the room. Maan was nowhere to be seen. She got up and roamed around the room finally standing near the window letting the cool breeze soothe her senses. She closed her eyes for a moment and then began to take off her heavy jewellery. Just as she took off both her earrings and rubbed her ear lobes as they were hurting because of the weight of them, the door opened with a click. She whirled around and saw maan coming in who stopped in the door way seeing her standing near the window and taking off her jewellery.

     She stood there quietly, watching his moves while he closed the door and came around to sit on the bed and took off his shoes. He stood up and started opening the buttons of his sherwani and she finally spoke,

"ap…kiya kar rahe hain?" her voice was crooked and he smirked to himself that she was nervous as hell that's why she stood in the corner as if she had seen a snake whereas he had no plan to bite her just now.

"geet, sone ke liye kapde to change karne padenge na" he spoke and geet felt the tension releasing from her body. He turned around to face her,

"tum bhi change kar lo or sojao" his voice held the softness she had never heard before.

"per yahan kaun soyega?" he could hear her voice coming back to normal tone but she was still nervous. However, he wouldn't allow his wife to sleep somewhere else other than their bed.

"hum dono" he spoke firmly,


"don't worry. Kuch nahi hoga" he assured her and went off in the washroom giving her no time to argue. He would give her all the time she needed to get used to this new relationship and he would help her all the way. He knew she might be difficult to deal with but he will let her take everything easily. He wasn't going to force her for anything. Marriage was needed because she was quickly attracting male attraction to herself as she was the vulnerable one. She was innocent and could have been easily trapped and he didn't want that. Selfish, he had been but he had no other choice. He couldn't see her with anyone else.

     When he came out after taking a shower, geet was already lying in the bed on the opposite side to his. Literally, at the edge of the bed in her wedding clothes. He sighed and went to her side, but her eyes were shut tightly and he knew she wasn't asleep but was pretending to be sleeping. Instead of saying anything to her, he went around to his side and lay down on the bed. Slowly he pushed the blanket with his foot to geet's side so it touched her feet. He glanced at her flinching body and knew that she was aware of the blanket. He closed his eyes quickly as he felt her moving. After a while, the movement stopped. He opened his eyes and saw her covered in blanket. He smiled and rolled to his left, with his back to her, and slept away knowing that at least she won't be cold now.

    He opened his eyes in alarm and quickly rolled on his back but the bed was empty. Geet wasn't there. He sat up in panic and looked at the clock. It was just 7am but where was geet? He got up quickly and knocked at the washroom door,

"geet?" no reply. He opened the door slowly and peeked inside but she wasn't there. Where was she at this early hour? Had she left? Where could she go? Had she talked to dadi or left without telling anyone?

     Maan came out side with all the queries in his mind and quickly ran down the stairs but stopped as soon as he saw dadi maa sitting on the couch relaxed with the newspaper in her hand and her glasses on,

"dadi maa geet… geet kahan hai?" maan asked hurriedly.

"kiya hogaya apko maan betay? Koi pareshani hai?" dadi maa looked up from newspaper and took off her glasses.

"dadi maa geet kamre main nahi hai"

"wo kamre main kaise hogi jab wo yahan kitchen main hai" dadi maa smiled.

"kitchen main? Geet wahan kiya kar rahi hai?" maan frowned confused but got relieved that at least she hadn't left.

"breakfast bana rahi hai"

"itni subha?" maan glanced towards the kitchen.

"wohi to hum bhi soch rahe thay ke shadi ki pehli subha itni jaldi kiya zarurat thi per usne kaha k wo banayegi to hum ne roka nahi. Per ap kiyun pareshan hogaye itnay?" dadi maa smirked knowing very well that maan had gotten worried for geet. No matter what maan said, dadi knew that maan loved geet a lot.

"nahi…kuch nahi" maan went off towards kitchen barefooted, in his vest and trousers.

"geet?" he called her after a moment because he got lost in her appearance. She was wearing a sari of his choice but she didn't know that it was chosen by him. Light green chiffon with light pink embroidery and her hair tied in a loose ponytail.

"ji?" she turned around with a surprised look and he was taken aback by her beauty. She was wearing absolutely no makeup and yet she looked breathtakingly gorgeous in those simple and elegant small earring, and two kadas that dadi maa had given her and her wedding ring.

"tum itni subha…kitchen main…?" he spoke coming out of her trance.

"han. Nashta banane ayi thi. Custom hai na k nayi bahu pehle din sara khana banati hai to bus isiliye main agayi" she replied with a smile which made his heart skip a beat and he couldn't say anything else except,

"umm theek hai."

"ap change kar aen tub tk main nashta lagati hun" she said with a nod of her head and he came out like an idiot and went upstairs in his room but sat down on his bed. He had wanted to tell her that the bride was not expected to wake up early in the morning after her wedding night and she must have gotten up at almost 6am to prepare breakfast. What was dadi maa supposed to think seeing her daughter in law up so early?  Besides he had wanted to tell her that such traditions were not compulsory in their family and she wasn't supposed to work like a typical daughter in law but her smile had taken him off ground and he had forgotten everything. He had expected her to be stubborn and angry like she had been before the wedding but she was behaving as if everything was all right.

"wow geet you are awesome. Simply terrific. Sub kuch itne maze ka hai ke bus" annie praised as soon as she finished tasting al the dishes.

"waqai geet sara khana bohat acha hai" dadi maa praised as well while geet blushed and smiled. Maan couldn't stop looking at her dumbly.

"You won't believe I don't even eat parathas because of all the fat but this is so yummy that I can't keep my hands off it" annie couldn't stop herself from praising.

"maan apko kaisa laga geet ke hath ka khana?" dadi maa asked maan and maan shook his head coming back to reality while geet glanced at maan slightly waiting for his response,

"haan it's delicious. Bohat acha hai"

"thank you" geet replied softly and maan once again started staring at her while she started eating herself. This girl was definitely going to drive him nuts with her smiles. 

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preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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loved the update.....................hope geet is not planning something behind this sweet attitude................
cant wait for next update
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Y she was so nomal but loved it........ Waitting 4r
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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 3:20am | IP Logged
awesome update..............maan can now tell geet that he loves her...............
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Lovely update. Beautifully written :)
Do update soon Please :D



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