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NEW COMBO FF=) ~*Mohabbatein*~CH12 ON PG 14 (Page 14)

Kaval05 Senior Member

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
really like it update soon

kahkashansakina IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
awesome update.. 
pls cont soon ....

kashish_s2 Senior Member

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged
Guys I am so sorry that I havent updated for soo long and i so have reasons. Firstly I had one of my really important exams and I didnt want to get distracted so I stayed away from the internet and then there was Ram Naumi and I didnt have any time. but I have finally written an update and it was really hard because of the whole Maneet separation at first and I had no inspiration. Anyways here is the update. Im sorry guys


Chapter Twelve

Recap: He walks inside the mandir and gets a handful of SINDOOR and FILLS KHANAK'S MAANG!!!!!

Khanak is shocked(u know what they do where they freeze the screen on their faces, yeah that's it)

Her hand goes up slowly to touch her mang and feel the sindoor as her tears dry out.

Shaan: mill gaya aapka jawab.yeh aur koi sawaal hai. And he grabs khanak's hand and walks out. YG walks behind them. When they reach home, Khanak walks to their room and looks at herself in the mirror.

Khanak: yeh kya hogaya, ek hi pal main, meri zindagi aise phalti ki, main Khanak Gujral se Khanak Kandelwal hogayi. Main kisiki patni hogayi. Jis insaan ko main 2 din pehle mili who mera pati.

Shaan is standing with his hands folded in front of YG.

YG: nahin beta aaj tumne phir mujhe bachaliya. Us bhar jaan bachayatha aur is bhar izzat, mujhe tumse acha damad nahin miltha and he hugs him.

Shaan: thinks to himself: haan aapko mujhse acha damaad nahin milta aapki bethi ki zindagi barbaad karne ke liye, aapko thodne ke liye. Aap rowege(cry) tho anso bhi aapka saath nahin denga, aise halath main choddege aapko.

YG : jao betha rest karo. Shaan obliged and walked to his room and went in the shower(blush)

Shaan thinking: yeh maine kya kardiya. Par jo  hi howa thik howa, Khanak mere pyaar ke jaal main phas bhi nahin rahithi aur mere paas waqt nahin tha. Par is thara mujhe uski zindagi ke saath. Nai Shaan! jo howa uske pita ke wajarse howa aur shayat uperwala bhi yahi chahtha tha.

He got out of the shower and decided to go meet Khanak. Khanak was still standing in front of the mirror with sindoor over her forehead and dried tears over her cheeks. She was clearly in shock

BG Music: tum mere kaun ho from yahan main ghar ghar kheli in Zee TV

Teri meri raahe saari milthi hai

Tere mere aahu ka bhi mel hai Shaan stands at her door

Jaane kesi haatho ki hai rekhaye Khanak looking at her hands with sindoor,

Jaane kese rekhao ka khel hai

hum haste haste rone lage camera focuses on her smiling picture and then her

Tum milke humko khone lage

Tum mere kaun ho she turns around to find Shaan

Maine yeh na socha tha ki aise bhi

Zindagi leyagi is mudh pe Flashback of the sindoor scene

Tere mere haatho ki rekhao kho

Jese bhi rakhthiki jodh ke

Koi mane ya na, dil mantha Shaan moves towards her

Koi jaane ya na dil jantha

Tum mere kaun ho

Shaan: Khanak… Her name sounded so good from his mouth but why?

Khanak: Shaan mere paas mat ana, Kyon ? Kyun Kiya

Shaan moved towards

Khanak: NAHIN! Wahi rehna mujhe chune ki koshish bhi mat karna, kya samjthe ho tum apne aap ko. Huh? Meri zindagi ko ek pal main hi.

Shaan: Khanak sab thik hojayega

Khanak: Nahin thik hoga Shaan(crying) Kaise thik hoga. Na tum mujhse pyaar karte ho na main tumse toh zindagi bhar ke yeh rishta, Kaise? KAISE SHAAN?

Shaan slowly closed in on Khanak and khanak started hitting him with her fists and finally gave in as Shaan pulled her in for a hug. They both felt at ease, complete.

Khanak cried for long time as the sad version of RBO title went on. And shaan patiently held her, hurting inside. Isn't this what he wanted. YG came to check on Khanak and smiled as he saw them together. His first promise to his dead wife was fulfilled. Khanak had found her love.

Next morning Shaan had to leave, he  wanted to stay with Khanak, he was pinning yet  went to take YG blessings and Yg hugged him and wished him a safe flight when they heard a thud. Both looked up to find Khanak in a light pink creamish saree with hands full of chudiyan, hair open and pined with her mang with sindoor holding a suitcase. She came down and hugged her father. YG understood. He was proud of her daughter and somewhere Shaan felt at ease but now was dreading going home and facing his family. She looked at him as if asking him if he would take her, if he would accept her, if he would do this favour on her. Shaan patiently moved towards her and took her suitcase." Main gadi main rakh detha hoon" Her eyes filled up with tears and relief. Shaan knew she was going with him for her father and his respect in society. After crying hugging her father, she sat in the car waving until she couldn't see him anymore. They got to the airport and while waiting he sat next to her.

Shaan: Khanak hum dono jante hai ki hame pyaar nahin hai par dosti zaroor hosakthi hai, hai na.

Khanak simply nodded.

Precap: Damini and Prithvi- wats going on?. Maaneet moments

So here it is guys. Im so sorry again and hope you enjoy this update. Please do comment and read on =)

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:17am | IP Logged
loved it yaar ...after a long time !!do continue soon ..wanna see some manneet moments 
Yasharanrocks IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged
shanak r awsme.plz cont soon............
scorpiodreams Goldie

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
lovely.....waiting for more PirDa and Maaneet momentsSmile
..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
loved it so shaan n khanak married hope she meets damini n geet in delhi
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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Gr8 part.... loved it

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