~MG NEW FF- My Selfish Heart UPD: CH7-PG32 ~29 JAN - Page 20

lovely update simi👏👏👏👏
i was waiting for this precap since your last update😉
excited that the updates r now gng to be 3x a week👏👏👏

Gr88!!

OH SHI....*!  NOOOO WAYYY!!! 🤪 WOW WOW WOW! I LOVVVVVVVVVVVED THE WHOLE phone convo scene, shifting to Geet at VKC, and then back to phonecall which Adi-Sasha overhear..!! OH.. EM.. GEE!! WOWWWWWWW @ that part particularly!!

That end was freakin' FANNNNNTASSSSTIC TOOO!!! Yo Sim, you wrote in this part that Geet wouldn't cry over the man she hated / loved, so would that mean Vicky and then ANOTHER character who is yet to be revealed and possibly the person who shuts the door and says the line from the first precap?? aaaaaaa YOU MUST update tomorrow! I can't wait already! The precap are torturous - please reveal everything FAST! 😆

Awwwwwww ok, I HAVE to mention this - even though it was small, I LOVED the small mention of Romeo in Geet's thoughts. He's such an adorable character that it comes naturally to smile if / whenever he pops up lol

An undoubtedly brilliant update once again! I'm having another "mega-annoyed moment" right now = it's high time the "LOVE" button be invented on IF so that we can actually hit "LOVE" on a post too..! urgh. ESP when it's as suchaaaa megaaaa pleasing update like this!

Anywayyyys, womannnn!!! I AM SUPER HAPPY that you've chosen to add DRAMA to every part now - like HA-LOW, that's what fiction's all about - be it tv shows, ff's or cinema... DRAMA is a MUST, therefore... dramatise this to your hearts content!! =D There was plenty of drama in this btw, which, OMG... I LOVED every word of! So do keep that up with your lovable style.

On the whole, this was such an awesome update, cos it had So Much to it! You so wonderfully added shades of
HUMOUR
(with Maan's comment about having a RUBBER head after bumping into Geet??!! 😆);
SADNESS
(with Geet's stiffening at the idea of returning to VKC + then having to face what she didn't wanna);
SUSPENSSSSSE -
(MAAN AND DEV?? CONVO);
curiosity, frustration, mixed feelings and lots moooooore! Keep updating so wonderfully, looking forward to the triple treats a week =D =D =D 

Saz
x x x x x

and ohh! you're so welcome for the promotion in the Jalwa thread 😆 like I said before, this is tooooo gooood to miss out on! 😛

Lool they smacked their foreheads together. Maan please move out of geet's way and let her pass. Aww she is scared of being close to him, she is attracted to him.

 

How mean of maan to expect geet to do something wrong, me will not be happy if you make her cry. 😡Infact he would be most upset too.

 

Who is that evil guy? And my god why did geet scream? Me worried now😲

 

 

lovely ff...pls add me in your pm list...

and update soon

Originally posted by: shelly_08

if this continues....the story shud b renamed 2 ''seducing ms perfect''🤣

LOL me and Simmi were talking bout this cuz my ff's name is Seducing Mr. Perfect

🤣

that was awesome.. but OMG adi n sasha heard him 😕
cant wait for the next update cause precaps seem interesting

Originally posted by: Chotii

OH SHI....*!  NOOOO WAYYY!!! 🤪 WOW WOW WOW! I LOVVVVVVVVVVVED THE WHOLE phone convo scene, shifting to Geet at VKC, and then back to phonecall which Adi-Sasha overhear..!! OH.. EM.. GEE!! WOWWWWWWW @ that part particularly!!

That end was freakin' FANNNNNTASSSSTIC TOOO!!! Yo Sim, you wrote in this part that Geet wouldn't cry over the man she hated / loved, so would that mean Vicky and then ANOTHER character who is yet to be revealed and possibly the person who shuts the door and says the line from the first precap?? aaaaaaa YOU MUST update tomorrow! I can't wait already! The precap are torturous - please reveal everything FAST! 😆

Awwwwwww ok, I HAVE to mention this - even though it was small, I LOVED the small mention of Romeo in Geet's thoughts. He's such an adorable character that it comes naturally to smile if / whenever he pops up lol

An undoubtedly brilliant update once again! I'm having another "mega-annoyed moment" right now = it's high time the "LOVE" button be invented on IF so that we can actually hit "LOVE" on a post too..! urgh. ESP when it's as suchaaaa megaaaa pleasing update like this!

Anywayyyys, womannnn!!! I AM SUPER HAPPY that you've chosen to add DRAMA to every part now - like HA-LOW, that's what fiction's all about - be it tv shows, ff's or cinema... DRAMA is a MUST, therefore... dramatise this to your hearts content!! =D There was plenty of drama in this btw, which, OMG... I LOVED every word of! So do keep that up with your lovable style.

On the whole, this was such an awesome update, cos it had So Much to it! You so wonderfully added shades of
HUMOUR
(with Maan's comment about having a RUBBER head after bumping into Geet??!! 😆);
SADNESS
(with Geet's stiffening at the idea of returning to VKC + then having to face what she didn't wanna);
SUSPENSSSSSE -
(MAAN AND DEV?? CONVO);
curiosity, frustration, mixed feelings and lots moooooore! Keep updating so wonderfully, looking forward to the triple treats a week =D =D =D 

Saz
x x x x x

and ohh! you're so welcome for the promotion in the Jalwa thread 😆 like I said before, this is tooooo gooood to miss out on! 😛

 

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

hiiiii

awesome update

loved it

was maan taking 2 dev on da phone

adi and sasha heard

cant wait 4 c what they do next

pecaps look intresting

cant wait

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

 

GOOD GUESS 😉 & thanks for Commenting ! 😃

Originally posted by: ninand

lemme say this, I like your penchant for drama.. very much😆...  and the storys goin great... good work😃