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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 1:37am | IP Logged
diya it was wonderful. just cant wait for the next.

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Really good Diya!! True poet!! So well said eh..written!!

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Diya - I almost understand it. Very beautifully written. You are now officially a poetClap.  Can you translate the following for me so that I can enjoy it more?



Jisne uske masoom mann ko chala

Woh chhaliya, bas ek patthar dil tha.

  

Insaan ban patthar, ghaat lagakar hai baitha

DJo chota chube nayan me

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ClapClapClapClap ...............................................

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 6:02am | IP Logged
This was nice and highly appropriate. Thx for such a wonderful work...

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruthi2010

diya it was wonderful. just cant wait for the next.


sure Wink.... thanks for liking it dear


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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by desisrock

Really good Diya!! True poet!! So well said eh..written!!


thanks for the compliment dear... am sure there are better talents here... i just write with the flow

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by br2499


Diya - I almost understand it. Very beautifully written. You are now officially a poetClap.  Can you translate the following for me so that I can enjoy it more?

Jisne uske masoom mann ko chala (the one who decieved her innocent heart)

Woh chhaliya, bas ek patthar dil tha.(that deciever was stone hearted)

this could also mean, the person whom she loves was not worth it and is a stone

Insaan ban patthar, ghaat lagakar hai baitha

man becomes a stone to wait for opportunity

meaning man is a stone hearted opporunist

Jo chota chube nayan me

youknow the very fine stone particles that which if they enter your eye irritate them and make you cry... this line talks about it.

small one pierces your eye, making you cry

thanks for the compliment Bee... i am not sure if i can be called Official Poet... Official Rambler is more the thingWink



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