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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sujji0609

Awesome Diya.... loved reading it..... especially these two lines...

Kyon kabhi ghatti nahi, mushkilon me bhi, jeene ki aas

Kyon bujhti nahi, unke pass hone par bhi, deedaar ki pyaas




Thank you dear... am elated that you guys are liking my ramblings...
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by upasana.diya

Originally posted by Jake-neil

Beautiful poem... Lotz of "anjaan" words. Jaldi translate karo.. Last 3 stanz suits me,lol


Thanks Bro, for saying its beautiful even with 'anjaan' wordsWink

translation is done
arrey tum toh lajawab ho.. Forum sarojini naidu ho.. Toh anjaan words ke saath be teri poem toh zabardast hogi na? I lyked the way u wrote, samjhe?

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 1:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jake-neil

Originally posted by upasana.diya

Originally posted by Jake-neil

Beautiful poem... Lotz of "anjaan" words. Jaldi translate karo.. Last 3 stanz suits me,lol


Thanks Bro, for saying its beautiful even with 'anjaan' wordsWink

translation is done
arrey tum toh lajawab ho.. Forum sarojini naidu ho.. Toh anjaan words ke saath be teri poem toh zabardast hogi na? I lyked the way u wrote, samjhe?

samjhe.....
LOLLOLLOL..... i know what you meant bro... i was just pulling your legWink
LOL

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 1:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by upasana.diya

Originally posted by Jake-neil

Originally posted by upasana.diya

Originally posted by Jake-neil

Beautiful poem... Lotz of "anjaan" words. Jaldi translate karo.. Last 3 stanz suits me,lol


Thanks Bro, for saying its beautiful even with 'anjaan' wordsWink

translation is done
arrey tum toh lajawab ho.. Forum sarojini naidu ho.. Toh anjaan words ke saath be teri poem toh zabardast hogi na? I lyked the way u wrote, samjhe?

samjhe.....
LOLLOLLOL..... i know what you meant bro... i was just pulling your legWink
LOL
hey, i might fall off.. Dont pull lyk that

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
@ diya---very eloquent.............inspirational poem.Clap

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 3:08am | IP Logged
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb diya....

but can u plz check first two lines of hindi version....as "Nahi" is missing it seems....
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Diya
 
The last stanza is awesome.  In this Kaliyug it is more relevant.   Altruism,compassion which is still prevalent needs  to be protected.
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Wow Diya! Sudden spike in your creativity! beatutiful poem Diya! please write more!

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