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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crms

Wonderful.  I could feel the softness, the tenderness in the expressions.  Too good.  U are versatile, Diya.  And at ease with both Hindi and English.

And yes, needless to add, it is for Gopi.  
 


Thanks Madhu Kaki... tenderness is what i want ahem to feel towards Gopi... this is Ahem thinking about a sleeping Gopi....

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Naina2127

you are so darn talented diyaben....first stories, now poems! awesome awesome! thanks so much for the english translations! they totally helped me out in understanding...

you see, my hindi is only limited to these saas bahu saps and dramebaaz LOL

Cheers!
~Naina


i'll do my best to help you, mom, bee and others as well if they want translations...
Thanks for liking it hun... try watching some historicals and you will find better hindi there....
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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by br2499

Hi Diya! Wonderful poem! I suits Gopi wonderfully! Thankfully you are out of melacholy! 


i tried to Bee.... its still not too happy but i wanted to portray yearning...Wink
Thanks for liking Bee


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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
that so cute diya 
marvelous...Clap

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sam1903

that so cute diya 
marvelous...Clap



thank you Sam...
i am glad you liked it...

will throw in some more later once i write new one

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
I dont thnk shez ever gonna open her mouth.. Stupid gopi..
Beautiful poem, sis.. I beg you to write a romantic poem for Rashi..lol.. Ek baar likh de meri ben

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