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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Diya... superb... you have a real poetic talent yaar.... what beautiful use of words... all the 3 poems were too good but i loved the 1st poem more ... could actually feel Gopi's feelings there....

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sujji0609

Diya... superb... you have a real poetic talent yaar.... what beautiful use of words... all the 3 poems were too good but i loved the 1st poem more ... could actually feel Gopi's feelings there....


1st was the one which i named as Gopi's heart initially.... thank you for liking the poem dear...
am glad you enjoyed itSmile

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Diya ben u did it..Poem for Aham....lovely hats off to u...

my fav line:
Is chehra bin kho na jaoon, aatankit ye mera mann hai

and u know I could not realize its on Aham till the start of third para......and then i read whole poem again keeping aham in mid as till then I was reading it for Gopi......
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

and thnx

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -tellyaddict-

Diya ben u did it..Poem for Aham....lovely hats off to u...

my fav line:
Is chehra bin kho na jaoon, aatankit ye mera mann hai

and u know I could not realize its on Aham till the start of third para......and then i read whole poem again keeping aham in mid as till then I was reading it for Gopi......
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

and thnx


thanks for liking it dear... let me go back and put an indication that its Ahem and not Gopi... else every one will be confused

thats what i felt was Ahem, in a favourable light... now poem can't be written for bad people... right???
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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 11:47am | IP Logged
It was just amazing. I m starting to pity ahamji after reading this. Tussi great ho yaaar!
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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khansk

It was just amazing. I m starting to pity ahamji after reading this. Tussi great ho yaaar!


Thanks for liking and enjoying it Sarah
LOLDon't pity him too much dear....
i feel as if he is kid who was not given his favourite toy to play... and as i said to sADHli, poem can't be written for bad people so had to put this light on Ahem's character... Don't know how Ahem haters will like it

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