Tadap - Poem Collection - 11th Verse Page 34 - Page 26

Originally posted by: upasana.diya

sure dear
as and when i get the inspiration, i'll put them down for you all

also, since your hindi is perfect, would you like to tell me if there might be anything that i didn't do justice to in the translation i gave.. PM me and i'll correct that

sure ill check it and let u know, as far as am in college i wont be able to explain so, will do later on, promise

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

diya even though i live in the UK
i dnt even need translation
my hindi is perfect
speak it 24 hours and watch alot of dramas so :)

i agree dear... am just asking you to point out if there are any mistakes in my translation and not to hesitate

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

sure ill check it and let u know, as far as am in college i wont be able to explain so, will do later on, promise

OK
Edited by upasana.diya - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: br2499

Kavitayini Diya! very nice poem. NOW you are back! welcome dear! enjoyed it! I am still waiting for a happy poem.

diya is a "nirasha kamuki"😆

Originally posted by: Jake-neil

diya is a "nirasha kamuki"😆

oye duffo bhai... where is niraasha...
i said ppl who can be with you even in your time of hurt are the only ones to trust.... its basically truth.... and if truth seems niraashavaad then i can't help you....
because only when you find that true other will you be happy for lifetime

Tsk..tsk.. Somebody is hurt! 🤣

diya i have done it, check it out

Very emotional poem Diya................good thoughts though......like it.
Wat about the FF....is there gonna be an update soon.
Welcome back

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

did u get the pm diya,

thanks dear... i PMed you

Originally posted by: simran15

Very emotional poem Diya................good thoughts though......like it.
Wat about the FF....is there gonna be an update soon.
Welcome back

i will try to write it once i have my laptop fixed dear... right now am using my cousin's laptop and i don't have the doc on this system...

thanks for liking the poem Sim

Originally posted by: Jake-neil

Tsk..tsk.. Somebody is hurt! 🤣

Then where are my chocolates