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FF-Maan/Geet*The Touch Of Fear*-*AN* PG 32* (Page 11)

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
maan playboy........... geet will change himWink......... best way to blackmail someone is to take their power away.........n they will do wht ever u ask them to do LOL.........thnks for PM Smile

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 1:01pm | IP Logged

Maan Singh Khurana


Aged 25 currently living in America in his apartment by himself

Has a Dadi who is currently forcing him to get married to a girl from India

Doesn't want anything to do with the girl who he is getting married too   

Has one younger brother who is married

Has a violent strike in him people are scared of him

 

just couldnt stop myself from asking u abt one thing... did u change Maan's character? by the sketch u gave, i was thinking he was going to be rude, arrogant,stubborn and "angry young man"... but after reading ur update he seems like a playboy. he could be rude but he wouldnt be angry n violent... again, ill wait for more updates from u... but i just had to ask u this...pls dont mind... Embarrassed



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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
the update was extremely short, but it was very enjoyable, please do continue soon!
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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
pls include me to ur pm list thanxSmile
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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhrashtee

it is indeed a short update!!... u asked us to comment abt the title of the FF after readign the update... but i cant seem to make out and opinion yet... probably after reading more i would be able to suggest... but as per ur update... Maan seems more of a playboy than violent... by ur update, i could see him treat Geet badly but not harshly... but ill wait and see how the story unfolds before commenting on Maan's attitude... lol.... so when r u updating ur other FF as well? waiting for more of this FF and more of the other FF... pls cont soon...

Thanks for your comment and yeah i sorter understand what your getting at...
that maans not really violent and yeah i sorter agree after reading the update myself 
he doesnt seem violent maybe i should just change the character sketch a bit then since i really dont know how to write about someone being Violent LOL!
 but i agree to what your talking about! 
i dont know when i will be updating the other one since im using my friends computer Atm but i guess i could update by my phone...

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhrashtee

just couldnt stop myself from asking u abt one thing... did u change Maan's character? by the sketch u gave, i was thinking he was going to be rude, arrogant,stubborn and "angry young man"... but after reading ur update he seems like a playboy. he could be rude but he wouldnt be angry n violent... again, ill wait for more updates from u... but i just had to ask u this...pls dont mind... Embarrassed



Dont be silly i dont mind i like comments like these... which is weird but yeah i get what your saying
i think what it is i couldnt really express maan's character in the update....
sooo i think i should just leave the word violent  the words a bit extreme and didnt really put down the idea i was trying to express across but oh well.....  

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 1:23pm | IP Logged

I liked ur ff ! Plz do pm me whenever u update plz !
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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
great update
con't soon!

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