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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 8:54am | IP Logged

Guys, I am extremely sorry, this sequence threads has not been posted frequently as I can not spend  much time for updating due to some personal reasons. but I still try to make the sequences interesting one and also try to avoid cliche's. the most IMPORTANT thing i want to convey to you is that i have written downed the sequence in such a way that if you read more times, you will enjoy more. so enjoy guys.

Seqquence-28

Nandini: Hello kaun? Muje Veer se baat karni hai. Main nandini bol rahi hoon.

Nihal: Nandini buaa, main Nihal. Aap kaisi ho? Arnav kaisa hai? Mainein aap ko aur Arnav ko chachu aur masi ki shadi mein bahot miss kiya. Aap wapas kabhi aaogi?

Nandini: bus beta, itne saare sawal ek saath karoge to buaa jawab kaise dengi? Hum donon thik hain. Aur bahot jaldi se wapas aaoongi. Achchha ab chachu ko phone do phir main masi se baat karoongi.

Veer: haan di aap kaisi hain? Arnav kaisa hai.

Nandini: main thik hoo. Arnav bhi thik hai. Mainein tum logon ko shaadi ke liye badhaai deneke liye phone kiya hai.

Veer: Di sab to thik thaa bus aap logon ki kami nazar aa rahi thi. I wish ke aap oos din humaare sath hoti. Muje abhi bhi aap ki bahot yaad aa rahi hai.

Nandini: Achchha ab tum meri bhabhi ko phone do.

Ayesha: ji didi aap aur humara Arnav kaisa hai?

Nandini: main thik hoon aur Arnav bhi thik ho raha hai. Doctor ne ghar jaane ki chhutti de di hai. Baki saari baatein baad mein karenge. Veer ko phone dena main use sab samjati hoon, wo tumhein samja dega.

Veer: ji di kahiye.

Nandini: Veer main ek week ke andar aa rahi hoon. Ayesha ko ye baat bataa dena.

Now nandini put up the phone.

Veer informs her and Nihal about Nandini. Nihal is too much excited.


Sequence-29

Ayesha: Veer, mainein aaj hi didi aur Arnav kaa room clean karne ko keh diya hai. Kitnaa mazaa ayega naa jab hum sab saath mein khana khaayenge, saath mein baahar ghoomne jaayenge, Nihal aur Arnav saath mein khelenge. Nihal ko jab mein akela dekhti thi to aisa lagtaa thaa ki kaash Arnav aur didi saath hote.

Veer: tumne humesha se meri parchhayi banker mera sath nibhaya hai. Ab to tumhein thanks kehne ke liye meri zubaan bhi nahin uthti.(EmbarrassedDead)

Ayesha: Veer, tumhein thanks kehne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Main tumhein achchhe se samajti hoon. And she (Hug) him.

 

Sequence-30

VeeSha goes to office. Ayesha informs Veer: Veer, humaare manager keh rahe thae ki jo log humari hotel ki naukri chhod kar gaye thae wo ab waapas aana chaahte hain. Unhon ne jo  bhi kiya thaa uske liye wo bahot embarrassed hain, isliye unhon direct humse baat karne ke bajaaye manager se baat ki hai.

Veer: kaun kaun joint karna chaahta hai?

Ayesha: Mini, Mrs Dixit aur Chowksi kaa to muje yaad hai. Baki ka muje yaad nahin hai.

Veer: yeh to bahot achchhi baat hai. Humare purane log humein joint karna chaahte hain isse achchhi baat kyaa ho sakti hai?

Ayesha: lekin wo log humse maafi maange bina joint nahin karna chahte.

Veer: thik hai unhein bulaa lo.

 

Sequence-31

Ayesha: Veer, agar……… hum………. gym aur spa banaaein to……………Smile

Veer: haan, lekin tumhein achanak se kyun sujha?Confused

Ayesha: Veer, actually, ye to bahot pehle se mere dimaag mein thaa. Mainein socha ki tum mera Day care centre ka sapna pura karne ke liye itnaa kuch kar sakte ho to kya main itnaa bhi nahin kar sakti?

Veer: thik hai. Tumhein jo karna hai wo karo, main tumhaare saath hoon.Approve

 

Sequence-32

VeeSha still confused about the place for honey moon. They are more confused about Nihal, Nandini and Arnav rather than their honeymoon. They are discussing about the honeymoon and suddenly phone call is ringing. Veer picks up the phone.

 

Sequence-33

Veer: main ek business client se mil kar aata hoon. Main aa jaaoon, phir hum sath mein ghar jaayenge. Veer leaves for the same. In the meanwhile, Nihal returns from school and directly reaches to the hotel Ayesha is surprised and asks, arrey Nihal, tum? Yahan?  (Confused and then Smile )

Nihal: masi mainein socha ki aaj main aap logon ko milne aajaaoon. Chachu kahan hain?

Ayesha: tumhare chachu kisi client se milne gaye hain. Tumhein bhook lagi hai na! chalo hotel ke restaurant se kuch khaa loTongue.

Nihal: masi, main baad mein khaa loonga. Pehle main aap ke paas to baithoonga.

Ayesha: achchha chalo aao uss sofa par baithte hain. Nihal lies down his head on Ayesha's lap. Nihal: masi, achchha huaa aapne chachu se shaadi karne ke liye haan keh di. Varna chachu ne summer camp mein jo kaha usse main to dar hi gaya tha. Muje laga ki wo sachmuch mein…………

Ayesha: sachmuch mein kya?Confused

Nihal: masi jab aapne summer camp mein chachu ki angoothi fenk di thi tab main bahot dar gaya thaa. Chachu ne kaha tha ki wo aap ko phir se manaayenge.Mainein chachu se kaha thaa ki masi agar nahin maani to kyaa hoga? Tab chachu ne kaha thaa ki wo apni jaan de denge. Masi, agar wo humein chhod kar chale jaate to humaara kyaa hota? (ConfusedUnhappy)

Ayesha: remembers that Veer indeed, had proved that falling off cliff. So she is (Cry). Nihal asks the reasonConfused she tells,  with Smile kuch nahin Nihal, bus tumne kaha tha to main bhi dar gayi thi. Achchaa chhodo ye sab, chalo main tumhaare saath aati hoon. Kuch kha lo. They go to the restaurant.   

 

Sequence-34

After having dinner, they are sitting in the drawing room. Veer takes Nihal in his lap and asks him, beta, aaj school mein aapki mam ne kyaa padhaya? He describes the entire day. Suddenly Nihal is silent so Veer sees that Nihal goes into fast sleep sitting in his lap. So he says chalo ise bistar par lita dete hain.

 

Sequence- 35

They go to Nihal's room. After that they go to their room. They watch television in their room. After that they discusses about the day they have spent today. Suddenly Veer says, Ayesha, humari shaadi ki ek rasam ab bhi baki hai. Ayesha says kaunsi?Confused

Veer: shaadi ke dusre din dost aur saheliyaan suhag raat ke bare mein poochhte hain. Ab tumhari to koi saheli hai nahin jo tumhein ye sab puchhe. To ab chup chaap se tum muje hi ye sab bataa do, kyunki main tumhara dost bhi hoon.Wink

Ayesha: very smart. Agar nahin bataaya to………EmbarrassedWink

Veer: to muje apne dost Dhruv ko ye sab bataana padega aur is tarah se rasam puri karni padegi.Wink

Ayesha: wo to mera dost hai.

Veer: wo tumhara dost THAA. Ab wo HUMAARA dost hai. Ab tum muje apni suhag-raat ke bare mein bataati ho yaa main…………. Dhruv ko bata doon?

Now Ayesha is (Blushing). So she submits herself and describe about their wedding night to Veer. Veer says: tumhari in baton se muje kuch bhi maza nahin aayaUnhappyWink. Muje to pura wa-qe-aa (incident) saamne chaahiyeWink. And……………………(BlushingHeartWinkHeart)

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Your writing make me give the feeling of watching JPSYA with my eyes again
VeeSha scenes are superb
Nandini and Arnav's coming back is a joyous news
VeeSha in last scene is too good


Edited by take_ten - 21 December 2010 at 1:41am

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 4:19am | IP Logged
you brought the other characters who are important very superblyClap
great writing like the experience of watching it.veesha's scene in the last sequence is marvellousWink

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Very well written update..Clap..Sequence- 35 is awesome...Wink
can't wait for the next part.....Smile

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