Rang Badalti Odhani


Rang Badalti Odhani
Rang Badalti Odhani

ShaNak in Dhulwadi FF Part 14 Page 6 (Page 5)

rooj-i IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 09 January 2007
Posts: 13493

Posted: 30 January 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
U have to make it all like that...

I thought she was mad at him...

i loved it Aditee...thank god you are updating now...and don't u dare not update again! I will kill you!!!

so it seems Shaan is sexually driven towards her and she to him...so far no emotional talk yet...

i guess u are working on the attraction part first...

plz continue soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

rafia 24

OlicityFan IF-Rockerz

Joined: 31 July 2010
Posts: 6214

Posted: 30 January 2011 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
awesome ady!!....hopefully we'll get sum of these scenes wen they got o dhulwadi!...
thnx again
update soon....PM if possible!
-SYS- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 December 2010
Posts: 3154

Posted: 30 January 2011 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
I JUST found this and went through all the parts(in my opinion with these two you don't even need a part 1&2!)
BTW why didn't you tell me you had a FF going on?!

ANYWAY the first few words that come to mind: Cute, Hot(and how! I could totally imagine YasharanBlushing), Brilliant!

Loved how you put in their exact emotion at the time in brackets and love how the physical intimacy didn't solve the problem in Khanak's mind but Shaan thought all was well between them.The difference between girls and guys made so clear!

Please update soon and PM me when you do!Oh and where is part 11?

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

rafia 24

vaish_123 Goldie

Joined: 06 December 2010
Posts: 1683

Posted: 30 January 2011 at 3:55pm | IP Logged

Cute and Sweet.

Update soon and PM karo Please!

CVs Please come into the forum and read all FFs  to get ideas.

Edited by rbofan1 - 30 January 2011 at 7:50pm
rafia 24 IF-Dazzler
rafia 24
rafia 24

Joined: 28 July 2005
Posts: 2661

Posted: 30 January 2011 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
aditee  i didnt realise this ff existed loved it, love the fact shanak are in dhulwadi- man we've gone dhullwadi crazy, loved the jealous shaan in the mela, his disgust at the food, environmennt etc and wanting the best for khanak, his relationship with gopi, the secret kiss behind the curtain, khanak taking care of him whilst he was ill, them making up uhhmmmmEmbarrassed ROFLROFL and khanak still being our JKR and insisting she'll stay until she finishes helping her adaa even tho shaan is desperate to take her back home.
cant wait for the next part xxxx
Pragnyaa Groupbie

Joined: 29 January 2011
Posts: 185

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
This is amazing !!!  One thig I like about it is that you have managed to infuse the true ShaNAk emotions in their lines.. good Job!!
Will you be posting more ...looking forward to upcoming posts...
kubare IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 09 May 2006
Posts: 19907

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Aditee darling...
Wow wow wow...loveeddddddddddd it!!!!ClapClap
Hope the CV's read it and incoporate all teh Shanak scenes...
I noticed that I forgot to comment after part 10..though I read it when you posted it..sorry...loved all the parts from her going to the mela, his reaction her reaction to the kiss behind the curtain....to their nok jhok over teh books to her worrying for him and finding out that he was sick to her going over and getting emotional on deeing him all alone and thinking of his childhood...loved it all from him waking up after been taken care of his attraction to her and her to his...beautifully written dear.....
Now you better update regularly dear..oh loved loved how you had him wear the tee she was wearing while sleeping and having removed his own..superb dear....LOLLOL
Pragnyaa Groupbie

Joined: 29 January 2011
Posts: 185

Posted: 02 February 2011 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
When will u update next ??? I am egerly waiting for your next post !!

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
FF It's complicated||DISCONTINUED|| IMP NOTE-pg86

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 83 84

Author: yasharan.love   Replies: 667   Views: 110251

yasharan.love 667 110251 21 July 2011 at 8:27am by k.krithika
Noorya ShaNak Gallery (Anjaana/ni vm p26) 02/19

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 27 28

Author: ...Noorya...   Replies: 218   Views: 21692

...Noorya... 218 21692 14 April 2011 at 8:51pm by -Deepali-
ValentinesDay spl Shanak VM Nahi Samne-pg-36

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 36 37

Author: MFRanjini   Replies: 291   Views: 20687

MFRanjini 291 20687 16 February 2011 at 8:47pm by adventure_gurl
Shanak VM Factory - 3rd VM - Fools Rush In pg 6

2 3 4 5 6 7

Author: kubare   Replies: 53   Views: 8003

kubare 53 8003 12 September 2010 at 10:49pm by kubare
Miss Dhulwadi

Author: shriya84   Replies: 5   Views: 1027

shriya84 5 1027 02 July 2010 at 3:02am by rishani

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Rang Badalti Odhani Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index