Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 9)

amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
amail1601
amail1601

Short Story contest runner up
Joined: 08 March 2007
Posts: 14027

Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Destiny-

Originally posted by amail1601


ShockedShockedShockednormally toh I steal Henna ke thoughts...yeh nainsaafi hai!! LOL
 
resist toh kar liya.. Wink
 
umm...you can take sid n kabir...abhay ko I'm keeping. Embarrassed
 
glad to know girls are falling in love with MY crazy characters. EmbarrassedLOLLOL
 
 
  

Hmph  is it  not o  teeny  winny  bit possible to   keep all  the  guys of your FF  for my self\??? Nopes. Abhay is mine, and Sammy liked Sid first. LOL

*ducks  just In time  from  oncoming Flying  jootis*

@ bold blue  Hawwwww I don't  believe you ... Call her Honor Judge Henna here  ASAP..... I need Fact verificationLOL 

@ bold Red- No can  do I want all three Wink*ducks from Madam A's Flying wedge heeled  shoes* I don't wear wedge-heeled shoes. I'm more of a stiletto girl.LOL

Inu-13 IF-Rockerz
Inu-13
Inu-13

Joined: 15 August 2006
Posts: 6177

Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
ohhhh Sid entry .. soo writer is making way for her self WinkWink hahahha..!! 
naaiace part.. loved misha n tracker part..!! ohh wowww soo which bhoot dey calling for dating..!! :P :D but where will dey go for dating..?? grave yard??? :P :D

Naaaaicee part ..!! keeep up d work * glowing blue eyes* hahah
amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
amail1601
amail1601

Short Story contest runner up
Joined: 08 March 2007
Posts: 14027

Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Inu-13

ohhhh Sid entry .. soo writer is making way for her self WinkWink hahahha..!! 
naaiace part.. loved misha n tracker part..!! ohh wowww soo which bhoot dey calling for dating..!! :P :D but where will dey go for dating..?? grave yard??? :P :D

Naaaaicee part ..!! keeep up d work * glowing blue eyes* hahah
 
ShockedShockedShocked don't tell everyone my intentions yaar...suspense nahin rehta. ROFLROFLROFL
 
thanks nehoo. SmileSmileSmile
@bhoot...dunno yaar...misha ka hi kuch plan hai...not telling me either. Ouch
@dating...mmm.....graveyard is too cliched... *thinks*
 
 
Super Kool IF-Sizzlerz
Super Kool
Super Kool

Joined: 21 March 2006
Posts: 10939

Posted: 10 January 2011 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
nice part....waiting for abhay,pia and sidz interaction....great work dear....Clap
amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
amail1601
amail1601

Short Story contest runner up
Joined: 08 March 2007
Posts: 14027

Posted: 10 January 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Super Kool

nice part....waiting for abhay,pia and sidz interaction....great work dear....Clap
 
Thank you! Smile
 
p.s. you're suvi, right?
 
amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
amail1601
amail1601

Short Story contest runner up
Joined: 08 March 2007
Posts: 14027

Posted: 10 January 2011 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
Part 6
 
 
 
Chaand continues his story........
 
Chaand: I did not want to meet the girl. Maine mana kar diya...
But mom. She said I have to meet this girl. I said no....but she said I have 5 days.......
 
Haseena: Then?
 
Chaand: Then I went to the jungle.....prowled around andheri raat mein......twice I thought I saw something, but then I thought it was just an illusion......
For five days.....paanch din.............
 
(The fire crackles loudly in the silence while Chaand and Haseena think of the fun they have in the jungle.............The phone rings, but they ignore it.)
 
Chaand: And then it was the sixth night. A stormy night. I had to meet that girl. I refused. But mom......she said she would ground me.....phir no jungle mein mangal.....
 
*sighs*
 
I wore my best black cloak, and we went out to her place.
 
What a place it was..........ek chhoti si pahaadi par ek bada sa palace.......huge trees all around.......aur bats....hundreds...thousands........................
 
Haseena (dreamily): How romantic.................
 
Chaand (holds her hand and smiles): Yeah...............it was beautiful.............
Tab tak mujhe sirf tumhaara khayaal tha...aur wahaan jaane ka bilkul mann nahin tha..I did not want to go.....but suddenly, I felt drawn to the place..............
 
2000 stairs chadh ke hum upar gaye........aur dheere dheere door khula... "Aaeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee" kar ke....
 
Haseena: Oh Chaand...........
 
Chaand: And then I saw her. Use dekh kar I was spell-bound.......................
 
*
 
Daanish goes to the Dobriyal house, but Panchhi is not there. Puzzled, he thinks of going to his office, but remembers that he took the day off. He decides to go to the market to hang around and watch girls.
 
*
 
In the cafe, Kabir and Angad are sitting in a corner, watching Abhay, Pia and Siddharth...
 
Kabir: Dekh use......ek ladka aur phasa liya. Aur dono uske liye ladne ko taiyaar hain.
 
*sings*
 
Maasoom chehra...nigaahein farebi
Labon pe hasi aur dil min daga hai....
 
Angad: Ek minute dude! Labon pe hasi nahin hai...dekh toh!
 
*both look*
 
Pia is sitting quietly, staring at her burger.
 
Siddharth (softly): Eat.
 
(She starts eating. Abhay tries to call her again, but she does not respond, so he turns on Siddharth..)
 
Abhay: Stop your tricks now!
 
Siddharth (innocently): What tricks?
 
Abhay: I know who you are. Mere saath drama mat karo.
 
Siddharth (still smiling): Really?
 
Abhay: Really.
 
Siddharth: In that case, you should try to stay out of my way instead of interfering in my life.
 
Abhay (menacingly): Maybe. But Pia meri hai. She's mine. Agar tumne use hurt karne ke baare mein socha bhi toh....
 
(Suddenly T cuts in.)
 
T: Baby!!!!!!!!!!!
 
(Abhay looks at her in surprise and disgust, but heaves a sigh of relief when she throws herself at Siddharth.)
 
Siddharth (pointing to the girl clinging to him): Yeh kya hai?
 
Abhay (smiling wickedly): Yeh T hai. And she is all yours...
 
(He makes Pia stand up, and walks out with his arm around her waist...)
 
 
 
***
 
 
 

The following 13 member(s) liked the above post:

cutemugtanya.dsouzawilddevil2010shaggyscoobyPriyaThakurminahil1997lighteningbuzzScaryAngelshruthiRAnjali.kkJungli BilliAmeresROFLOL

lighteningbuzz Goldie
lighteningbuzz
lighteningbuzz

Joined: 31 March 2010
Posts: 1503

Posted: 10 January 2011 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
(Abhay looks at her in surprise and disgust, but heaves a sigh of relief when she throws herself at Siddharth.)
 
ROFL Damn!
 
Siddharth (pointing to the girl clinging to him): Yeh kya hai?
 
Abhay (smiling wickedly): Yeh T hai. And she is all yours...
 
 
LOL Poor guy!
 
None of the guys are interested in T. Sometimes, I feel bad for her but, then again she does this to herself, no one told her to be stupid and dumb. But, I liked this description, "Abhay looks at her in surprise and disgust" LOL 
 
 
 
Jungli Billi IF-Sizzlerz
Jungli Billi
Jungli Billi

Joined: 03 September 2006
Posts: 10782

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:21am | IP Logged
*res*

will be back  to comment properly- read it and loved it. LOL

Edit!

OMG!! we got to hear more of the chandeena love story ROFL
loved how you've used phrases like 'the firewood crackles' really feels like u can hear it and see chandeena sitting around the fireplace...LOL does that make sense? Ermm

ROFL @ cloak... really captured the 'good old' days for chand.

me was thinking when reading chote se mountain pe bada ghar kaise ho sakta hai ROFL

@Danish bit: grrrr no comments..
@T: hilarious! ROFL

waiting to find out more about sid... got me curious now..


Edited by Jungli Billi - 11 January 2011 at 9:49am

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
ONLY YOU FF(Maaneet) Part 13 : Page 131 (28/8/11)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 156 157

Author: .Suhasini.   Replies: 1250   Views: 202111

.Suhasini. 1250 202111 15 May 2012 at 11:13pm by kuhu18
.::CROSSROADS::. :(AR): *COMPLETE* Pg.64 :)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 75 76

Author: Riddikulus   Replies: 604   Views: 54335

Riddikulus 604 54335 03 February 2012 at 1:16pm by akshiankita
Life - A journey(AR) Part 13 Pg 87 Promo uptd pg94

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 100 101

Author: ryka_27   Replies: 805   Views: 56614

ryka_27 805 56614 24 November 2011 at 3:57am by saniashzadi
The Meeting Of Crossroads [Mayur ff]intro+cs page1

2 3 4 5

Author: mayur_fan   Replies: 32   Views: 3083

mayur_fan 32 3083 18 February 2010 at 5:55am by topsyturvy23
Crossroads-Part 16 page 43!!!

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 46 47

Author: RandomSquared   Replies: 371   Views: 45660

RandomSquared 371 45660 07 March 2009 at 1:23pm by AKForever

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index