Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 50)

amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
amail1601
amail1601

Short Story contest runner up
Joined: 08 March 2007
Posts: 14027

Posted: 06 August 2011 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
Part 37
 
 
 
 
Chaand: Ahh...samdhi ji...
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Samdhi?
 
Chaand (quickly): No no...I meant...mujhe aapki baat samajh nahin aayi.
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Aapko bhi baatein samajh mein nahin aati? Khair chhodo. Koi toh bataao mujhe who Abhay and Pia love?
 
Haseena (appearing suddenly and hissing): I want to know too...
 
Chaand (looking at Abhay and tilting his head): Abhayyy...?
 
Abhay (mumbling while looking at the ground): Kabir.
 
Pia (shocked): What?!
 
[They all look up.]
 
Abhay (grimly): What are you doing here?
 
Pia (flustered): I was...looking for...M... (angrily) Woh chhodo. You love Kabir? How can you do this to me Abhay?
 
Abhay (stepping forward): No Pia!
 
[Chaand faints and falls to the ground with a moan. Haseena rushes to help him. Mr. Dobriyal stands gaping.]
 
Pia (angrily): What no? You just said... you love my ex-boyfriend!!
 
Chaand (groaning): Nooo...
 
Haseena: Good riddance. Chaand, ghar chalo.
 
Chaand: no. Main marr jaunga par Kabir ko apne ghar ki bahu kabhi nahin banaaunga. I. Will. Not!
 
Haseena (pulling him): Chalooo!
 
Chaand (digging in his heels): Nooo!
 
[Suddenly there is an answering howl that goes 'Aaaooo'! They all stare at each other in shock!]
 
 
*
 
Misha hides behind a pillar. She looks to the right, then to the left. Finally satisfied, she steps out, and immediately bumps into a wall - a human wall. A pair of strong arms reaches out to steady her, and a hand pushes her wild curls back from her face. Misha closes her eyes. The hand tilts her face up, and she slowly opens her eyes, and yells.
 
 
*
 
 
Panchhi moves towards her classroom smiling. The sunlight is so warm, the flowers so bright. She has stepped into a new life.
 
*
 
T watches Panchhi and beckons to her bimbos.
 
T: Everything ready?
 
Bimbo1: Yes T.
 
Bimbo2: Absolutely T.
 
T: Great. Let's go. Panchhi darling, say goodbye to that smile!
 
 
*
 
In the jungle, everyone's standing as still as statues. Abhay takes advantage of the situation by walking up to Pia, who clings to him. Mr. Dobriyal frowns, Chaands grins, and Haseena hisses. The howl sounds again.
 
Haseena (hissing): Nooo!
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Mrs. Raichand, aap aur Pia chhup jaao. Yeh Shakti Kapoor hai. Khatarnaak hai.
 
Chaand (laughing): Silly...yeh toh..
 
Haseena (glaring): Chaand. Shakti Kapoor. Bhaago!
 
[They all run away.]
 
 
*
 
Chaand and Haseena reach the Raichand mansion where LD is still writhing on the floor.
 
Haseena (hissing): Chaand! Woh bhediye the!
 
Chaand: I know Haseena.
 
Haseena: Toh tum Arnab ko kyun keh rahe the?
 
Chaand: Samdhi hai. Isliye.
 
Haseena: But Abhay loves Kabir.
 
Chaand: No. He loves Pia.
 
Haseena: Kabir.
 
Chaand: Pia.
 
Haseena: Huh!
 
Chaand: Hah!
 
[Haseena flies away up to her room. Chaand goes over to LD.]
 
Chaand (disgusted, but trying to be pleasant): Lavyadei?
 
LD: Yes Chandu?
 
Chaand: I know apshagun ka asar kaise hataana hai.
 
LD: Really? Kaise?
 
Chaand: Jungle mein na, zor zor se say 'nooo' toh asar khatam ho jaayega.
 
LD: Sacchi?
 
Chaand: Yeah.
 
LD: Yeh toh bada badhiya hai, gadhe ki poonchh se. Abhai jaati hoon, gadhe ki poonchh se!
 
[She rushes off, leaving Chaand rolling on the floor laughing.]
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

The following 5 member(s) liked the above post:

piggi_Babescutemugamrit23RitzieAmeres

amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
amail1601
amail1601

Short Story contest runner up
Joined: 08 March 2007
Posts: 14027

Posted: 06 August 2011 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Wow! What a twist! So Sid was the chosen gaurdian for Pia but Abhay was the one protecting her. And still plans to do so. And and Pia has to be changed! Never thought of that. Interesting.
 
And now what Abhay is upto?
 
Like you said characters hi inte confusing hain ke hum bhi confuse ho jate hain. So no problem in that. LOL
 
Really liking the mystery with emotional play. Interesting read ahead. Good work. ;)
 
LOLLOLLOL Thank you. Aaj ka part dekh ke...well... I think I don't need to keep things aside for breakfast..gonna get ande tamatar anyway. Wink
 
 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Ameres

Ameres IF-Sizzlerz
Ameres
Ameres

Joined: 28 March 2008
Posts: 21656

Posted: 07 August 2011 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Oh God! Poor Mr. Dob! Still confused. LOLLOLLOL
 
And Pia se zayda Chaand seems to be upset over the 'Kabir' news. LOLLOL
And yeh Misha ko kaun mil gaya? Pintooo? :P
 
Panchi is still playing hide and seek? She keeps getting weirder.
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Mrs. Raichand, aap aur Pia chhup jaao. Yeh Shakti Kapoor hai. Khatarnaak hai.ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
Chaaand! ROFL
Bahut acha kiya woh LD ke saath. She deserves it.  
 
Thanks for updating yaar. Was missing all this. Continue sooon!
Cant wait to know what LD does and yes Abhay-Kabir romance. LOLLOLLOLLOL


Edited by sugaryanu - 07 August 2011 at 6:28am
amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
amail1601
amail1601

Short Story contest runner up
Joined: 08 March 2007
Posts: 14027

Posted: 07 August 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Oh God! Poor Mr. Dob! Still confused. LOLLOLLOL
LOLLOLLOL Yeah...poor guy. 
 
And Pia se zayda Chaand seems to be upset over the 'Kabir' news. LOLLOL
Bahu chaahiye thi...baha mil gaya. LOL
 
And yeh Misha ko kaun mil gaya? Pintooo? :P
Wink
 
Panchi is still playing hide and seek? She keeps getting weirder.
Naah...not now. Now she is just happy.Smile
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Mrs. Raichand, aap aur Pia chhup jaao. Yeh Shakti Kapoor hai. Khatarnaak hai.ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
Chaaand! ROFL
Bahut acha kiya woh LD ke saath. She deserves it.  
LOL
 
Thanks for updating yaar. Was missing all this. Continue sooon!
Will do.Smile
Cant wait to know what LD does and yes Abhay-Kabir romance. LOLLOLLOLLOL
Embarrassed
amrit23 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 11 April 2006
Posts: 4307

Posted: 09 August 2011 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
THE ACCOUNT OF THE MEMBER WHO POSTED THIS MESSAGE HAS BEEN TEMPORARILY BANNED.

If you think this is an error please Contact us.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

amail1601

Ritzie IF-Rockerz
Ritzie
Ritzie

Joined: 17 December 2010
Posts: 7962

Posted: 19 August 2011 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
OMG OMG Shakti Kapoor? ROFLROFLROFL Bade dino ke baad Shakti Kapoor ka naam suna hai. ROFL Tumhe kahan se yaad aa gaya uska aawwwuuuROFLROFL

Samdhi ji and samjhi nahi was good tooROFLROFL

Aur yeh Arnab ko baat samajh kyun nihi aati?ROFL PKYEK mein bhi nahi aur yahan bhi nahi?

Aaj bade dino ke baad pending FF complete ki hai.LOL 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

amail1601

amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
amail1601
amail1601

Short Story contest runner up
Joined: 08 March 2007
Posts: 14027

Posted: 25 August 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amrit23

took me a whole lot of courage to start reading the ff from where i left...last time jo story u told na, uska hangover abhi tak hai LOLLOL
Lol...samajh nahin aa raha whether to be happy or say sorry. ROFL but abhi ke liye...'thank you'. Smile

but i absolutely loved reading all the parts yaar Big smile nice twists n funny elements u've put ROFL really was laughing reading them ROFL 'gadhe ki poonch se' one is my all time fav LOLLOL
LOLLOLThank you. Smile
keep up the good work Thumbs Up (n i just wait for all the parts to b posted so that i can read long lengths araam se Embarrassed henna ki sig updates k saath bhi yehi do EmbarrassedLOL not that i've forgotten Wink)
LOLLOLI know!
luv u Heart
Awww...me too! *hugs*
amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
amail1601
amail1601

Short Story contest runner up
Joined: 08 March 2007
Posts: 14027

Posted: 25 August 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritzie

OMG OMG Shakti Kapoor? ROFLROFLROFL Bade dino ke baad Shakti Kapoor ka naam suna hai. ROFL Tumhe kahan se yaad aa gaya uska aawwwuuuROFLROFL
LOLLOLOh he is a regular member of my writings.LOL
Samdhi ji and samjhi nahi was good tooROFLROFL
LOLLOLLOLThank you.

 
Aur yeh Arnab ko baat samajh kyun nihi aati?ROFL PKYEK mein bhi nahi aur yahan bhi nahi?
ROFL Genetic defect.Tongue
Aaj bade dino ke baad pending FF complete ki hai.LOL 
Aaj? Posted it a looong time back. Aapne aaj dekhne ki zehmat ki hai.LOL

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Ritzie

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
ONLY YOU FF(Maaneet) Part 13 : Page 131 (28/8/11)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 156 157

Author: .Suhasini.   Replies: 1250   Views: 202090

.Suhasini. 1250 202090 15 May 2012 at 11:13pm by kuhu18
.::CROSSROADS::. :(AR): *COMPLETE* Pg.64 :)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 75 76

Author: Riddikulus   Replies: 604   Views: 54329

Riddikulus 604 54329 03 February 2012 at 1:16pm by akshiankita
Life - A journey(AR) Part 13 Pg 87 Promo uptd pg94

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 100 101

Author: ryka_27   Replies: 805   Views: 56606

ryka_27 805 56606 24 November 2011 at 3:57am by saniashzadi
The Meeting Of Crossroads [Mayur ff]intro+cs page1

2 3 4 5

Author: mayur_fan   Replies: 32   Views: 3082

mayur_fan 32 3082 18 February 2010 at 5:55am by topsyturvy23
Crossroads-Part 16 page 43!!!

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 46 47

Author: RandomSquared   Replies: 371   Views: 45660

RandomSquared 371 45660 07 March 2009 at 1:23pm by AKForever

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index