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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 49)

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Part 35
 
 
 
Pia slowly goes to her bed, thinking of the promise she and Abhay have made to each other. She notices an envelope lying on her bed. It is a letter from Kabir. As she reads it, tears fall from her eyes...
 
 
Letter:
 
Hey Pia!
 
I am really sorry for whatever happened. Mujhe tumhein trust karna chaahiye tha, tumhaari baat sunni chaahiye thi, but I didn't.
 
Maine use trust kiya, but usne mera trust break kar diya. But Pia, tum hi bataao, kya mera trust galat tha? He was my brother! We grew up together. He was always there to protect me, to guide me. I loved him. I know, I love you too and so I should have trusted you, but I chose him because I thought he loved me.
 
And you...tumne toh kabhi mujh se pyaar kiya hi nahin. You love Abhay Raichand. When I saw you with him for the first time, I knew that I have lost you forever. But you said you did not love him. You needed a friend, and I loved you so much that I decided to try to make you fall in love with me. But see, I destroyed everything.
 
I am really, really sorry Pia. I hurt you. I broke your trust. And I insulted our relationship.
 
I really do love you Pia, and I don't want to lose you. These last few days have been hell without you...trying to hate you, but not being able to. Please give me another chance Pia, let me be your best friend again. I promise you that I will never let you down again.
 
Forever yours,
 
Kabir
 
 
*
 
Haseena is curled up on the sofa in front of the fireplace in the living room when Chaand comes up to her.
 
Chaand: Watcha readin' babes?
 
Haseena (without looking up): Cut it out Chaand.
 
Chaand: Oooh...rockin' title ma babeh.
 
Haseena (hissing): Enough of that dumb accent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Chaand (in a small voice): Sorry.
 
Haseena (after a little while): I am reading The Guide to Keeping Peskumans Away.
 
Chaand: Really? What is a peskuman?
 
Haseena: It is a pesky human.
 
Chaand: Oh. Pia Jaiswal.
 
Haseena: Haan. (suspiciously) Wait. You wanted her to be your bahu.
 
Chaand (airily): So I changed my mind.
 
Haseena: Achha?
 
Chaand: Haan. By the way Haseena, main jungle ja raha hoon lunch ke liye. Baad mein milta hoon. Bye darling.
 
Haseena (smiling): Bye.
 
[He leaves.]
 
Haseena: Kuch toh gadbad hai. What is Chaand up to?
 
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 


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Originally posted by amrit23

just read the last few parts n they r so good Adee Big smileClap
i just love chaand n haseena in ur FF ROFL ROFL they r so much better here than in the serial...

@ Loogle nd rockin' title ma babeh

ROFL

n i loved that intro about twitter ROFL

will take me lil time to catch up with all the parts bt im surely gonna do it (m thoda slow in reading, toh agar derr ho jaye toh dont worry acha Embarrassed )

culd imagine that scene b/w chaand n haseena...it was damn funny yr ROFL

keep writing n updating ok Big smile
n good luck with ur work !!
luv u *hugs*


 
Amrittt!!!!!!!! Hug
 
Thank you sooo much!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Glad you're here. Smile
 
And take your time yaar...time pass ke liye wrote, time pass ke liye read. WinkWink
 
@Haseena n Chaand...yeah..felt show mein thoda sa were being underrated...centuries old hue toh kya hua, actually toh young hi hain na...asli pyaar ki kahaani toh unki hi hogi.Wink
 
 
Love you too! HugHug
 
 
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@Rozy77...thanks for the 'like's !!!!!!!!!! :)
 
 
 
 
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Adddiii! Big smile
Good to see a line of updates. Always look forward to them. =)
 
 
Part34-
 
Good update with dose of laughter here there. Esp this one the chaiwala baba waving to him frantically! ROFL
 
Chand and LD part was fun. But what is LD upto? *confused*
 
And Pia is going away? I thought Abhay was going away? Confused
 
Part35-
 
Wow! The letter was amazingly done. It was sweet and emotional. You really get the characters right always. I could so imagine Kabir saying it.
 
And really whats with Chands accent? ROFL
Aur Hasso dantti hai and he gets scared. Awww. ROFL
 
Peskuman! Good one. LOLLOL
 
Niiccceee updates! Waiting to find out what all are upto. Cuz im kinda confused. LOL
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Originally posted by sugaryanu

Adddiii! Big smile
Anuuu!! *hugs*
Good to see a line of updates. Always look forward to them. =)
:D Missed you yaar..was so bored I wrote them.LOL
 
 
Part34-
 
Good update with dose of laughter here there. Esp this one the chaiwala baba waving to him frantically! ROFL
 LOL Thank you.
 
Chand and LD part was fun. But what is LD upto? *confused*
 Only she knows. Confused
And Pia is going away? I thought Abhay was going away? Confused
 LOL Wait n watch.Wink
 
Part35-
 
Wow! The letter was amazingly done. It was sweet and emotional. You really get the characters right always. I could so imagine Kabir saying it.
Aww thanks! I hate the fact that Kabir's character hasn't been developed in the show - there's so much they can do with him. So just trying to shape him the way I think he should be. 
 
And really whats with Chands accent? ROFL
LOL Papa panga le rahe the.Wink
Aur Hasso dantti hai and he gets scared. Awww. ROFL
LOLLOL
 
Peskuman! Good one. LOLLOL
 Wink Thank you!
Niiccceee updates! Waiting to find out what all are upto. Cuz im kinda confused. LOL
LOL Yahaan confuse hona normal hai...the characters are... you know. Tongue
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Posted: 11 July 2011 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
Part 36
 
 
Abhay looks at Siddharth in shock.
 
Abhay: Pia? Away? But kyun? Kahaan?
 
Sid (mockingly): Itna interest li'l brother? Ho kya raha hai?
 
Abhay (blushing): Nothing. It's just...woh humesha..
 
Sid: Humesha?
 
Abhay: Always getting into trouble.
 
Sid: Ah. Yes. Exactly. You see Abhay, tumhein Pia ki destiny pata hai.
 
Abhay (grimly): No!
 
Sid (severely): It is her destiny, not your choice. Anyway, Superiors ne mujhe uska guardian appoint kiya tha. Uske birth se lekar uski...life ke end tak, I am supposed to keep her safe.
 
[Abhay snorts derisively.]
 
Laugh all you want Abhay, because now I have to take her away.
 
Abhay: But why? I am protecting her.
 
Sid (impatiently): Don't you remember the prophecy? You were supposed to change her by her eighteenth birthday!
 
Abhay: So? She is not eighteen yet.
 
Sid (shocked): So are you going to wait until the last minute to tell her? Or are you not going to tell her?
 
Abhay: I am not going to change her.
 
Sid (shouting): Are you crazy? They will destroy her!
 
Abhay (fiercely): I will protect her.
 
Sid: They are stronger than you.
 
Abhay: I. Will. Protect. Her.
 
Sid (sighing): Fine. Then you will have to fight me too. I cannot let your obstinacy destroy us.
 
Abhay: You only care about yourself, about power.
 
Sid (bitterly): So what do you expect? I have no family, no friends, no one to love, no one to love me. You have everything, but you are throwing it all away.
 
[They are silent for a few moments. Then Abhay breaks the silence.]
 
Abhay: Okay. I will do it. But not now. On her eighteenth birthday.
 
Sid (cheerfully): Okayyy! I am hungry...is there a florist nearby?
 
Abhay: Yes. Two kilometers aage..main town mein.
 
Sid: Great. You are coming?
 
Abhay: To the florist's?
 
Sid: Yeah...yummy roses.
 
Abhay: Eww!
 
Sid: Li'l brother, improve your taste thoda!
 
Abhay: No thanks.
 
Sid: As you wish, Pia lover!
 
[He drives off, leaving Abhay gritting his teeth.]
 
 
*
 
 
Abhay is sitting near Maithili's grave, when he hears a whisper.
 
Abhay: Dad?
 
Chaand (stepping out from behind a tree): Abhay...
 
[He looks at the grave.]
 
Ahh...Maithiliii... You loved her.
 
[Abhay does not respond.]
 
And Pia loves you.
 
Abhay: Dad.
 
Chaand (tilting his head to the left): Do you love her?
 
Abhay: No.
 
Chaand (confused): Then who...?
 
Mr. Dobriyal (appearing suddenly): Yehi toh main poochh raha hoon kab se. Who do Abhay and Pia love?!!
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Wow! What a twist! So Sid was the chosen gaurdian for Pia but Abhay was the one protecting her. And still plans to do so. And and Pia has to be changed! Never thought of that. Interesting.
 
And now what Abhay is upto?
 
Like you said characters hi inte confusing hain ke hum bhi confuse ho jate hain. So no problem in that. LOL
 
Really liking the mystery with emotional play. Interesting read ahead. Good work. ;)

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