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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 48)

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
I loved how u brought out the ''detective 'Piya on internet part''It cracked me upROFLROFL
Thanx for the pmBig smile

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritzie

Wah kya Vampires hain? Haath lagaate hi, people start snoringLOL Where is Sid running with Panchi? And what happened to their hide-and-seek?
LOLLOL Hide n seek got over na when Panchhi was scared and Sid came up.
Abhay ka sheesha kyun toota hua tha?Shocked Kisse ladayi ki, Chand se?LOL
Nopes. Chaand was with Haseena in their room. LOL

 
Loogle ka naam bhi copyrighted hai ab?ROFL
Naah...Loogle apni izzat bacha raha hai...but shhh! Don't tell kisi ko. Wink

 
Yeh Lavyadevi kya cheez hai yaar?LOL Ab Pia ka khoon kaun piyega?
Confused I dunno..
 
 
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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Aww SidChi. Day Dreaming

But wait! Why is Sid running away with Panchi? Haww kahin woh Birdie wings banane ke bare mein tu nahi soch raha?! Ouch :P
 ConfusedHo bhi sakta hai.
 
And Piaaa! ROFLROFL
Yahan bhi uski detectivegiri shuru hogai!!
Pia and detectivegiri are synonymous. ROFL
aur privacy matters and 'Fast Jeans'!!! ROFLROFLROFL
LOLLOL try searching for 'fast jeans'. Wink
 
And yeh touch and sleep ka kya scene hai? LOL!
Sid Birdie ko chodo yahan ajao, see mujhe tu sleepy karne ki bhi zaroorat hi nahi...im tu all the time dozing off avein hi! ROFL
Lol..tabhi toh he's not coming. Say you're an insomniac...see how Sid will come running.Wink
 
Omg! What is LD upto? Im scared. Ouch
 Anyone's guess. Wink
FUNNN post yaar! Continue sooon! Wink
Will do!
 
 
Originally posted by shaggyscooby

I loved how u brought out the ''detective 'Piya on internet part''It cracked me upROFLROFL
Thanx for the pmBig smile
 
Thank you! Smile And you're most welcome. Wink
 
 

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
Part 33
 
 
 
A beautiful dawn breaks over Dehradoon. Of course, no one sees it since they are all snoring away. Soon the twittering birds too give up and just post a 'Good Morning Losers' on Twitter so the humans and the vampires can see the message when they wake up.
 
Hours pass, and one by one, the people leave the world of dreams behind...
 
 
*
 
 
Misha wakes up with a huge hangover.
 
Misha (rubbing her head): Oh God!!!!!!!! Mera head!!!
 
[She sits up in the bed and keeps still until the wave of sickness ebbs. As she recovers slowly, she tries to remember what had happened the previous night. All she can remember, though, is one name - Pintoo. Then she remembers herself singing a song for him, and realises that she has fallen in love with him in her dreams!]
 
Misha (shocked): Oh. My. GOD!!!
 
 
*
 
 
Pia wakes up with questions...
 
Pia (thinking to herself): Abhay, tum kya ho? Tum kaun ho? Kyun main tum se door nahin reh paati? Aur woh Maithili kaun hai? Woh bhoot kyun hai? Aur...main yahaan kaise aayi? Main toh Daanish ke ghar pe thi. Tum kya ho Abhay?
 
She starts up her computer, and types in 'Abhay Raichand' in the search bar. As she waits for her slow computer to finish accepting the input characters, she notices a drop-down list. It is the auto-complete menu.
 
She clicks on 'Abhay Raichand real name'.
 
Pia: Ab main jaan jaaungi...ab tumhaara raaz raaz nahin rahega Abhay.
 
She waits for the results to load.
 
When they do, she screams in shock!
 
And half an hour later, she calls Abhay.
 
*
 
 
Kabir wakes up, and nearly falls off the balcony. He realises that he had fallen asleep while staring at the moon and thinking of Reva. He goes into his room to get ready.
 
 
*
 
Tracker and Angad don't get up. That is because they never went to sleep, and instead spent the whole night SMSing each other.
 
*
 
Panchhi is awakened by the sounds of thuds and yells and groans. She rushes to Misha's room, only to see her crying and beating the wall. Her pillows are all torn, and her bedclothes are on the floor.
 
She tries to calm her little sister down, and soon Misha relents.
 
Panchhi: What happened baby?
 
Misha (hugging her tightly): Didi, save me.
 
Panchhi: What's wrong? Tell me.
 
Misha: Woh...woh... he's in my head!
 
Panchhi: Kaun Misha?
 
Misha: He smiles, and he dances, and I sing soppy romantic songs for him!
 
Panchhi: Arey bolo toh kaun hai.
 
Misha (whispers): Pintoo.
 
Panchhi: What?! Ab yeh Pintoo kaun hai?
Oh wait...yeh wohi nahin hai jisse tumhaari shaadi honi thi?
 
Oh my God Misha! Are you...in love with him?
 
Misha (looking at her in shock): Nooo!!!!
 
[Panchhi laughs and runs off to tell her parents.]
 
 
*
 
Haseena looks up from her book as Abhay rushes through the hall.
 
Haseena: Abhay.
 
Abhay: Yeam Mom?
 
Haseena: Kahaan ja rahe ho?
 
Abhay: College.
 
Haseena: Oh really? *tilts head* Sunday ko?
 
Abhay: Uh...woh...play ki rehearsal hai.
 
Haseena: What play?
 
Abhay: Uh...
 
Chaand (entering): Abhay. Tumhaara mirror kaise toota?
 
LD: Nahin!!!!!!!! Mirror toot gaya, gadhe ki poonchh se?
 
[Both men ignore her.]
 
Haseena: LD? Gadhe ki poonchh? *turns to Abhay* Abhay. Answer. Her.
 
Abhay (curtly): Yes.
 
Haseena: How?
 
Abhay: I was checking diamond real hai ya nahin.
 
Haseena: What. Dia-
 
LD (interrupting): Kitna bada apshagun ho gaya! Mirror ka break hona is a curse. Doom. Doom. Dooom!!!!!!! Gadhe ki poonchh se.
 
Chaand (through gritted teeth): Tell her to shut up, Haseena.
 
[LD keeps wailing, her voice increasing in volume. All the Raichands run away.]
 
 
*
 
 
Mr. Dobriyal wakes up with one question.
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Who are Pia and Abhay in love with?
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 
 -Edit-
 
Typos.Ouch
 
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 15 June 2011 at 1:14am

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
 ROFL
 
*Stops laughing and takes a deep breath* Oh Gosh! I love this update!
 
A beautiful dawn breaks over Dehradoon. Of course, no one sees it since they are all snoring away. Soon the twittering birds too give up and just post a 'Good Morning Losers' on Twitter so the humans and the vampires can see the message when they wake up.
^^ I could so imagine this like in an animated movie sort of you know! ROFLROFL
 
And Pintoo made a come back Yay! ROFL
 
Omg! what did Piya discover?! Confused
Kahin yeh tu nahi ke Abhay is the designer of the 'Fast Jeans'! Maybe she wants some discount. ROFLROFL
 
The Raichand family scenes are always the best yaar! :P ROFL
 
And now LD has moved from beedi jaale ke to 'gadhe ki poonch se?!
chalo acha hai smoking is not good for health. :P
 
And...here comes the ultimate Conphused guy!...Mr.Dob! He rocks! ROFLROFL
 
Hawlarious update! Keep them coming! ;D
 
 
Ps. I love you tooo! :P


Edited by sugaryanu - 15 June 2011 at 8:44am

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Res! ROFL
 
ROFL I love you!!!
 
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Originally posted by sugaryanu

 ROFL
 
*Stops laughing and takes a deep breath* Oh Gosh! I love this update!
 
A beautiful dawn breaks over Dehradoon. Of course, no one sees it since they are all snoring away. Soon the twittering birds too give up and just post a 'Good Morning Losers' on Twitter so the humans and the vampires can see the message when they wake up.
^^ I could so imagine this like in an animated movie sort of you know! ROFLROFL
 ROFL I sooo know!Wink
And Pintoo made a come back Yay! ROFL
 
Omg! what did Piya discover?! Confused
Kahin yeh tu nahi ke Abhay is the designer of the 'Fast Jeans'! Maybe she wants some discount. ROFLROFL
 ROFL Haila! No!!!
The Raichand family scenes are always the best yaar! :P ROFL
 
And now LD has moved from beedi jaale ke to 'gadhe ki poonch se?!
chalo acha hai smoking is not good for health. :P
 
And...here comes the ultimate Conphused guy!...Mr.Dob! He rocks! ROFLROFL
 
Hawlarious update! Keep them coming! ;D
 
 
Ps. I love you tooo! :P
 
Thank you. Wink
 
 
 

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
Part 34
 
 
 
Pia is standing under a gulmohur tree. The road is carpeted with the flamboyant red flowers. Abhay stops and hides behind a tree to watch her for a few moments. A few cars pass them by, but Abhay ignores them. Then he sighs and steps out from behind the tree. Even though they are so far apart that the traffic drowns out any sound of Abhay's approach, Pia turns to face him. Her face lights up with joy, but is soon clouded by confusion. Soon Abhay reaches her.
 
 
Pia: Abhay.
 
Abhay: Haan. Main hi hoon.
 
Pia: No. Jhooth bol rahe ho tum.
 
Abhay (looking away): What nonsense Pia! Tum phir shuru ho gayi.
 
Pia: No Abhay. Loogle told me. Your real name is Vivian Dsena, and you are dating Panchhi.
 
Abhay (shocked): WHAT? Are you crazy? Ek toh Google ki cheap imitation use karti ho, then you go believe whatever it says? I thought we were friends. Friends ke beech trust hota hai. And here you are spying on me. Just stay away from me, Pia Jaiswal!
 
Pia: Toh aur kya karoon main? Tum kuch bataate nahin ho. Kuch poochhoon toh bhaag jaate ho. I want to know. You know what, I have had enough. It's over. Goodbye Abhay.
 
Abhay: Fine.
 
Pia: Fine!
 
[She starts walking away. Abhay is watching her when he suddenly realises that a truck is about to hit her. He pulls her away to safety onto the divider. Pia takes a moment to catch her breath, then hugs him tightly.]
 
Pia (sobbing): Kyun Abhay..kyun? Har baar tum meri jaan bachaate ho, par mujh se door rehte ho. Why?
 
Abhay (painfully): Yeh zaroori hai Pia. I have to do this.
 
Pia (looking up at him): But why Abhay? Kyun sab se alag, mujh se door rehte ho tum?
 
Abhay: Main tumhein nahin bataa sakta Pia. Bas samajh lo ki yeh zaroori hai.
 
Pia: No. Please Abha, don't leave me.Trust me.
 
[Abhay looks away from her pleading eyes. He sees the flowering trees swaying gently in the breeze, the cars, the bikes, the chaiwala baba waving to him frantically, and the roads. They were at a crossroads - three paths he could take, the fourth being the one he was already on. He sighs.]
 
Abhay: Okay Pia. I will tell you, but later. I have to leave next month, but before I go, I want us to get to know each other better.
 
Pia: W-where are you going?
 
Abhay: Somewhere. Don't ask me about it. Just...let us do this, okay?
 
Pia: Do I get to ask you questions?
 
Abhay (ruefully): Yes.
 
Pia (happily): Cool!
 
[They walk back to her hostel together.]
 
 
*
 
At the Raichands' place, Chaand stumbles upon LD in the hall, literally!
 
 
Chaand: What the heck are you doing lying on the floor?
 
LD: Chandu! Woh Abhay ne apshagun kiya na, toh trying to reverse it, gadhe ki poonchh se.
 
Chaand: What apshagun?
 
LD (getting up and dancing around him while singing):
 
Zor ka jhatka haaye zoron se laga..haan laga
Abhay ne mirror ko toda toh use milegi saza..haan saza
 
Chaand: What nonsense! Usse kya hota hai?
 
LD (singing):
 
Chhaayegi udaasi, jaan ki pyaasi
Abhay ki girlfriend ko milegi phaansi
 
Chaand (thoughtfully): Really? Hmmm...
 
[He leaves. LD rolls around on the floor again.]
 
 
*
 
In his room, Chaand thinks.
 
Chaand: If that silly female is right, then yehi mauka hai...Pia ko Raichands ki bahu banaane ka. If she is about to die, then I can change her. Par iske liye pehle is.. *makes a face* LD ko rokna padega. But how?
 
[He thinks. Half an hour later, his face lights up. He goes out to the hall.]
 
 
*
 
 
T (angrily): How dare she! Panchhi Dobriyal ne T ko wait karwaaya, and then she did not come back! And I was trying to help her!
 
Her bimbo 1 (sympathetically): I know babes.
 
Her bimbo 2: Par ab tum kya karogi?
 
T (wickedly): Ab...T will show Panchhi Dobriyal is crime ka nateeja. Watch out, Miss Oh-not-so Perfect...T is coming!
 
 
*
 
 
When he gets into his car after dropping Pia off at the hostel, Abhay sees Siddharth sitting in the passenger seat.
 
Siddharth: Hello little brother.
 
[Abhay grunts in reply.]
 
Still not talking to me, huh?
 
Chalo, naaraaz toh naaraaz hi sahi. I just wanted to tell you that Pia is leaving Dehradoon. You want to say goodbye, abhi jaa kar bol do, because this is it. You will not see her ever again.
 
 
 
***
 
 
 

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